Reviews For Saying Goodbye
Reviewer: rosemerta
Date: 09/09/08 19:46
Chapter: Saying Goodbye

this is such a masterpiece. it wasnt about action or about an incredible plot. it was just a moment in a family and a person's life. it was extremely poignant and had me in tears the entire time. extremely touching and brings to mind everyone i've ever lost. keep up the good work. i also love your other story and am anxiously awaiting your return from your hitaus.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! For me, it's very nice to hear that my stories have touched someone. :)

Reviewer: harry_victoria
Date: 04/27/08 17:43
Chapter: Saying Goodbye

Oh lord, this was very well done. You captured the emotions beautifully in this, and you kept the characters IC the whole time.

One nitpick would be your use of the fanon nickname 'Gin'. which isn't used in the books and the story could have used without.

I myself wrote a story based on Harry getting cancer, which is still in progress, so I know what you were trying to get at in the story. That being said, I would have liked to hear a bit more about the cancer and how she relapsed and came to be dying. A flashback would have been nice, but it's still nice without it.

Wonderfully done. I hope you continue writing because you have a talent. :)


Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review; it means a lot.

Reviewer: lily_potterx3
Date: 02/06/08 10:55
Chapter: Saying Goodbye

ah, im in class right now and im trying my hardest not to start crying. i loved your story. it was beautiful and sad at the same time. your an awesome writer.

Author's Response: Thank you from the bottom of my heart. :')

Reviewer: Em1992
Date: 01/23/08 16:47
Chapter: Saying Goodbye

omg, this was so good. i cried

Author's Response: Thank you so much. :P

Reviewer: moldy999
Date: 01/17/08 17:38
Chapter: Saying Goodbye

so sad im crying

Reviewer: MissHufflepuff
Date: 10/17/07 3:16
Chapter: Saying Goodbye

This was such a beautifully written story and it made me cry, but I promise in a good way. Keep writing.

Author's Response: Well, thank God it's in a good way... Thanks for the review. ;)

Reviewer: Miss__Ginny__Potter
Date: 09/08/07 17:03
Chapter: Saying Goodbye

I am crying as i type that, you did a fabulous job. For an author to make someone cry means they have completed their task. you are wonderful

Author's Response: You are being too nice. Thank you so much!

Reviewer: luna_longbottom88
Date: 08/10/07 12:41
Chapter: Saying Goodbye

That was a beautiful story. I cried through the whole thing. I have read your other story, and you are a very good writer! Don't give up!

Author's Response: Thank you!!!

Reviewer: pheonix_song_719
Date: 05/21/07 23:24
Chapter: Saying Goodbye

This story was beautiful....I cried...throughout the whole thing. Great writing

Author's Response: Thanks!!

Reviewer: The Marauderettes
Date: 04/11/07 21:36
Chapter: Saying Goodbye

Soooooo sad! I started crying! That was really good even though it was sad. I've also read your other story and I think you are an awesome writer!

Keep the stories coming!

-Hermione (aka Hannah)-

Author's Response: Why, thank you!! Keep reading!!

Reviewer: lupinluver
Date: 04/10/07 12:56
Chapter: Saying Goodbye

i cant stop crying....that.... that was beautiful. well done.
now where did i leave that box of tissues??

Author's Response: Thank you!!!!

Reviewer: GinnyRULES
Date: 02/20/07 20:48
Chapter: Saying Goodbye

That was such an unbelievably beautiful story, I'm speechless. Stories NEVER make me cry, I can't believe yours did.

The things I liked best about it was the way emotions were conveyed so well. Each and every character was grieving, but they all did so in their own unique way.

It also made me realize how attached I had gotten to the character (Hermione). I rarely like one-shots, but yours was great.

The only bit of criticism I have (and this is me being extremely picky, because there's virtually nothing wrong) is that I think there's a few verb tense errors at the beginning. It makes it a bit confusing.

I think you did a spectacular job, I loved it.

~ Melodie

Author's Response: Thank you very much, Melodie. Your tears flatter me.

Reviewer: pottergurl92
Date: 02/19/07 19:40
Chapter: Saying Goodbye

Omg.....I think I jsut drowned the hole plant earth with my tears....that was every good!!!!! bad I'm so emotional and I cry so much...but besides that I was great!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! Your tears are the best compliments ever!

Reviewer: hollyberries
Date: 02/14/07 20:01
Chapter: Saying Goodbye

that made me cry so much. it was good though.

Author's Response: I'm sorry it made you cry... I'm glad it was good, though!

Reviewer: xPhoenix_Tearsx
Date: 12/17/06 11:18
Chapter: Saying Goodbye

that was so sad! but so good all the same! excellent job i love all of your writing. =]]

Author's Response: Thank you so very much!

Reviewer: Ron x Hermione
Date: 11/29/06 9:31
Chapter: Saying Goodbye

That was one of the saddest fics i have ever read. I would have to say that Hermione is my favorite female character, so to see her die like that was soooo sad!
I love the way that you captured the emotion from everyone. I actually had tears in my eyes towards the middle. I admire that very much in a fic when the author draws you in, and that is exactly what you did.
It was overall an absolutely wonderful fic, and i am going to your author's page right now! VERY GOOD WORK.
~Lindsey :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much, Lindsay. I'm proud to know that what I have written has reached your heart. I honestly loved your review (I even blushed, lol.)

Reviewer: wizard lover
Date: 09/24/06 20:31
Chapter: Saying Goodbye

This is the first time that I've ever actually had tears falling down my face while reading a fic. So sad, yet so beautiful. Can't wait to read more from you.

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!! Those are the best words a writer can hear!!!! Now you should read my newest fic, "Realizing It's Never Too Late", because I know you're going to like it. P.S.: I started brainstorming and I've decided that as soon as I finish that fic I'm going to write the prequel to "Saying Goodbye". What do you think?

Reviewer: wizard lover
Date: 09/24/06 20:31
Chapter: Saying Goodbye

This is the first time that I've ever actually had tears falling down my face while reading a fic. So sad, yet so beautiful. Can't wait to read more from you.

Reviewer: A_Pink_lady
Date: 09/03/06 13:44
Chapter: Saying Goodbye

*sob sob* that was so beautiful and soo sad. I cried. absouloutly brilliant!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Even I cry when I read it!

Reviewer: A_Pink_lady
Date: 09/03/06 13:44
Chapter: Saying Goodbye

*sob sob* that was so beautiful and soo sad. I cried. absouloutly brilliant!

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