Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 05/24/08 19:07
Chapter: The Beginning

Another absolutely fantastic fic, i'm so sad it's ended, but I'm so glad they ended up in such a wonderful place. Wouldn't it be cool to watch over your loved ones like that? I wonder if anyone's watching us right now. Right, I'm off to read another of your fics, I think I've almost read them all so you'll have to start planning some new ones, although i could read them all again, they're so great! Thanks.

Author's Response: I'm glad you've enjoyed this fic - like I said, I prefer some of the newer ones now. I agree, it would be very cool to watch over people, although occaisionally quite frustrating. Thanks for reviewing this fic, it's been great hearing your thoughts.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 05/24/08 18:52
Chapter: The Final Struggle

I really enjoyed this chapter, I know that sounds weird as Sirius dies at the end, but he goes on to the afterlife so it's not all bad. I particularaly enjoyed his conversations with Dung and Dumbledore, sometimes i think Dumbledore needs telling what's what, even if he never listens. It was also nice to see his marauder tendencies resurfacing when he heard about the DA and the chaos that followed.

Author's Response: =D The DA are some of my favourite scenes in the entire series, after the pensieve scenes where we went back to Marauder Era again. Dumbledore certainly does need a good talking to here and there, and who better than Sirius?

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 05/24/08 18:37
Chapter: Paradise is Overrated

That last line made all the painful memories of this chapter worth it.

Author's Response: =D I'm glad you thought so.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 05/24/08 18:21
Chapter: Harry

I really liked the interaction with Crookshanks, and his conversation with Dumbledore. My favourite part though was when he realised the dementors were on their way to perform the kiss and the thought that summed the whole situation up was Bugger, it just made me laugh.

Author's Response: That was very British of him/me wasn't it? Then again, that's exactly what I'd say in his situation, if not something a little stronger ... I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 05/24/08 17:56
Chapter: A Broken Home

This was such a painful chapter to read. I think I'm the queen of what if's in review land, but what if Sirius had called James on his mirror just after leaving the death eaters, before he went for his bike etc, would he have given the potters enough warning to escape Voldepants a fourth time? I loved Sirius conversation with Voldemort, I guess not showing him respect is one of the best ways to get on his nerves. I hate Pettigrew for turning into a traitor, I wonder if he was always out for himself.

Author's Response: No, not always I don't think. What ifs drive me crazy, too, and if I had it my way, Sirius would have done exactly what you said, and Lily and James would never have died, Voldie would have been killed some other way, Peter would reform, there'd be a cure for Remus and his lycanthropy, Lola is back from the dead, and we'd all live happily ever after. But I don't think that would have quite worked somehow ... =)

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 05/24/08 16:52
Chapter: Joy

OOO I loved this chapter, Lola is such a handy person to have around isn't she? You'd think that James wouldn't object to he and Lily being safe, but I guess he just wanted in on the action. I love Sirius Maraudering near the end too.

Author's Response: =D Yes, well, it's not like they have a family yet, so I imagine James (and Lily) would be desperate to be in on the action, even if it compromised their wedding night. Good thing they have friends like Sirius and Lola, right?

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 05/24/08 16:38
Chapter: A Harsh World

I really like Jack, and what's wrong with guys having long hair? What about Bill Weasley? I just noticed that during the fight in the shop Sirius was disarmed but then began fighting the deatheaters along with the others, how did he get his wand back?

Author's Response: Um, possibly because I wasn't paying attention to what I was writing. There might be an explanation in there somewhere, but to be honest I can't really bring myself to re-read it ... this fic is so old I just don't like it any more. There's nothing wrong with guys having long hair, Jack is modelled from my brother, so I was poking fun at him more than generally long-haired guys. =)

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 05/24/08 16:25
Chapter: Together (Part II)

Just thought I'd break off reading to send in a quick review. I love your version of the afterlife, can't wait to see what happens once Sirius has finished reviewing his contribution to the world. The thing that prompted me to review was the marauders deliberately having their map confiscated. What an absolutely brilliant idea. I've never understood how they'd lost it to Filch until now, that explanation will be forever imprinted in my mind. Another fantastic fic, now back to the story.

Author's Response: Well, I hope you're enjoying it so far, although personally I prefer my later ones. I tried to think for a very long time how they could possibly manage to get it confiscated, until I realised that it must have been on purpose. Because what use would it be outside of school? Also, they're big-headed enough to want to leave some kind of legact behind. =D

Reviewer: harryandginnyrock
Date: 03/04/08 18:06
Chapter: The Beginning

It was good. i heart serius.

Author's Response: Let's be honest; who doesn't? =D

Reviewer: huffpuff94
Date: 02/07/08 13:44
Chapter: The Beginning

Aren't Padfoot Points from "The Things I do For L.O.V.E" I love Padfoot Points. See I told you I would read more of your stories. I just finished reading that one today. It was really good. I like the bit where James sings lol I could just imagine his voice.

Becca xx

Author's Response: Yes, they are, congratulations! I love Padfoot Points too. I think James would be a very entertaining singer, because even if his voice was rubbish, his over-confidence and charisma would be brilliant, and make the whole thing worthwhile. But that's just me.

Reviewer: huffpuff94
Date: 02/07/08 13:40
Chapter: The Beginning

Woo Hoo! Padfoot points rule!

Author's Response: Yes, indeedy they do!

Reviewer: huffpuff94
Date: 02/05/08 13:34
Chapter: The Beginning

*clap**clap* Really good ending. I enjoued reading the whole story. Well done for making it so long, the best I got was 4 chapters lol I look forward to reading more of your stories

Becca x

Author's Response: Well, I just got really into it when I was planning it, and before I knew it, bam, 21 chapters. Personally I don't think it's that long, considering it's like, his entire life. I hope you enjoy my others!

Author's Response: 350th review! That's half way to 700! I still can't quite believe how popular some of these stories are ... 350 Padfoot Points to you, and cookies all around!

Reviewer: huffpuff94
Date: 02/05/08 12:41
Chapter: Fighting to Lose

I think My Immortal by Evanscence would be good aswell

I'm so tired of being here
Suppressed by all my childish fears
And if you have to leave
I wish that you would just leave
'Cause your presence still lingers here
And it won't leave me alone

These wounds won't seem to heal
This pain is just too real
There's just too much that time cannot erase

[Chorus:]
When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears
When you'd scream I'd fight away all of your fears
And I held your hand through all of these years
But you still have
All of me

You used to captivate me
By your resonating light
Now I'm bound by the life you left behind
Your face it haunts
My once pleasant dreams
Your voice it chased away
All the sanity in me

These wounds won't seem to heal
This pain is just too real
There's just too much that time cannot erase

[Chorus]

I've tried so hard to tell myself that you're gone
But though you're still with me
I've been alone all along

[Chorus]

Author's Response: Well, yes, that one would fit quite nicely, too, but I'm not a massive Evanescence fan (I don't dislike them or anything, I'm just not in love with them) so I think I still prefer the Feeder one. But, yeah, that would also fit.

Reviewer: huffpuff94
Date: 02/05/08 12:40
Chapter: Fighting to Lose

I think My Immortal by Evanscence would be good aswell

I'm so tired of being here
Suppressed by all my childish fears
And if you have to leave
I wish that you would just leave
'Cause your presence still lingers here
And it won't leave me alone

These wounds won't seem to heal
This pain is just too real
There's just too much that time cannot erase

[Chorus:]
When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears
When you'd scream I'd fight away all of your fears
And I held your hand through all of these years
But you still have
All of me

You used to captivate me
By your resonating light
Now I'm bound by the life you left behind
Your face it haunts
My once pleasant dreams
Your voice it chased away
All the sanity in me

These wounds won't seem to heal
This pain is just too real
There's just too much that time cannot erase

[Chorus]

I've tried so hard to tell myself that you're gone
But though you're still with me
I've been alone all along

[Chorus]

Author's Response: Well, yes, that one would fit quite nicely, too, but I'm not a massive Evanescence fan (I don't dislike them or anything, I'm just not in love with them) so I think I still prefer the Feeder one. But, yeah, that would also fit.

Reviewer: huffpuff94
Date: 02/05/08 12:40
Chapter: Fighting to Lose

I am just downloading dat song now. Its good

Author's Response: Well, enjoy! I love that song. It always makes me think of this chapter.

Reviewer: huffpuff94
Date: 02/05/08 12:35
Chapter: Fighting to Lose

I am just downloading dat song now. Its good

Author's Response: Well, enjoy! I love that song. It always makes me think of this chapter.

Reviewer: huffpuff94
Date: 02/05/08 12:15
Chapter: A Harsh World

LaLa the Death Eater doesnt sound right does it lol

Author's Response: *Grins* Yeah, I know. But she was named after someone, so I could hardly change it. This is also why "Lola" and "LaLa" are so similar sounding, because LaLa came in after the story had been started already.

Reviewer: huffpuff94
Date: 02/04/08 16:25
Chapter: The First Eleven

Its really good so far

Author's Response: I'm glad you think so. Thanks.

Reviewer: ravenclawslostdiadem
Date: 01/14/08 20:49
Chapter: The Beginning

Wonderful story, it actually seemed plausible the way you wrote it. I just wanted to say congratulations, and keep writing. P.S. I love "The Cause."

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm really glad you liked it, and that it was plausible. Because I don't like this much any more. Because it's so old. But, hey, who am I to turn down a compliment? Thanks! The Cause should be updated soon.

Reviewer: ravenclawslostdiadem
Date: 01/14/08 19:42
Chapter: Fighting to Lose

I don't want to sound insensitive, but I SO CALLED THAT.

Author's Response: Yes, you did. Hope you're enjoying the story!

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