Reviewer: tonks_the_auror
Date: 01/09/07 13:35
Chapter: Paradise is Overrated

Two. *sniffle* Chapters? *wipes eyes*
*big puppy eyes* Please more... I've read some of your other stuff and its all good but this is my favorite story... *bigger puppy eyes* write a sequel! Afterlife strikes back... Something... *sniffles again*

Author's Response: I'm sorry *wipes away similar tears* but I don't think a sequel would quite work ... *resists puppy eyes with a lot of self-discipline* I'm sorry! But look at it this way ... um ... once it's done, you can re-read the whole thing in one go, without having to stop and wait for updates! *cringes at lame bright side* All sniffling aside, I'm very honoured that you like my fic! It really boosts my confidence, which is a good thing, right? I'm so happy when people like my stuff! Yay!

Reviewer: Chomione
Date: 01/09/07 11:56
Chapter: Paradise is Overrated

Haha! What an ending!
Jack, cut off his hair? I'm not so sure about that happening anytime soon. And me, with kids? HAHAHAHAHA! You make funny jokes sometimes!

Author's Response: I'm living in hope about Jack's hair. As for your CHARACTER having kids, I thought she (your CHARACTER, that is) would be a motherly type. I am perfectly aware that if YOU had kids, you would make them eat only soup (because it's a food AND a drink in one, therefore more cost effective to you overly stingy mind), and you would expect them to be child geniuses by the time they are two years old, or you would abandon them to the elements. However, I did think your CHARACTER seemed the motherly type, like I said. :P :D :P :D Thanks for reviewing, as always!

Reviewer: Harry is king
Date: 01/09/07 10:40
Chapter: Paradise is Overrated

Nice chapter, really nice thinking with the wooden hut on a deserted island

Author's Response: Well, that's the image I always got of where Sirius was that summer, so I that's what I wrote! I'm glad you liked it, thank you very much for reviewing.

Reviewer: tonks_the_auror
Date: 01/09/07 7:27
Chapter: Paradise is Overrated

NUUUUUUU!!!! I WAS GOING TO BE THE FIRST REVIEWER.... ::sobs like a crazy person:: As Ellen once said Anyway... Love it! ::gives it hugs.... millions and millions of hugs:: I must say that it gets better with each chapter then again I think thats how a story is s'posed to be... But I am a mental person(not really I just run into walls and say sorry....) and I don't get things a lot of the time... Anyhoo I loved it and thought it was very good...

Author's Response: Aw, I'm sorry ... you were close! Lol, you're reviews make me laugh, they're funny. Thanks! Only two (TWO!) chapters left now ... How my heart bleeds!

Reviewer: Skewper
Date: 01/09/07 1:53
Chapter: Paradise is Overrated

love the last line... so sirius like.... OMG this is an awesome tstory... are you sure you're not JK?

Author's Response: *Checks* Hmm ... *checks again* No, it doesn't appear to be so. Damn. :D Thanks so much, I'm eternally happy that you like this! Check out my other fics if you haven't already!

Reviewer: Twizzle_loves_Lupin
Date: 01/08/07 16:22
Chapter: Harry

Mwahaha! I am the ghost of people who don't like what they're writing, and I say:

Have some FUN with it, Pussycat! The end is near- have Sirius fall in love with someone, or become allergic to cats, or discover Pepsi (c). Or make something "realistic" (sticks out tongue) if you want. But it's nearly over!


P.S. You had a great time with the Marauder era bits, this is just like that, only with guidelines.

Author's Response: Lol, thanks Twizzle. These chapters were just hard to write, because they were so restrictive feeling. But I got through them, and all of this fic is now finished *sob sob*. Although I wish the thought had occured to me to make Sirius discover Pepsi ... What a page turner that would have been! Metaphorical pages, that is, since we are in cyberspace, and there are no pages you can physically turn, just buttons you can click. Wow. Way to depress myself. Anyway, thanks as always for the review! Yay! *Happy feeling*

Reviewer: echo123
Date: 01/03/07 14:44
Chapter: Harry

loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: lady_potter7447
Date: 12/28/06 17:36
Chapter: Harry

Excellent story and very original. I really like your characterization of Sirius also, excellent job!

Author's Response: Thanks very much, I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: lovelilyjames
Date: 12/28/06 12:31
Chapter: Harry

This was superb - Sirius' love for Harry came through. P of A from Sirius' viewpoint. Terrific!

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I've been grateful for all the reviews! It makes me so happy to know people enjoy my stuff - if I know that, it makes me want to keep writing!

Reviewer: lovelilyjames
Date: 12/28/06 12:21
Chapter: A Prisoner

Awesome! You told it like it was - it's like reading P of A from Sirius' viewpoint. Thank you for updating!

Author's Response: That's quite all right, I do try and be as regular as possible. And PoA from Sirius's point of view was kind of what I was going for (how else could I approach it?) so I'm glad it worked out.

Reviewer: lovelilyjames
Date: 12/28/06 12:14
Chapter: A Broken Home

You know, all the Peter -bits seemed to show up the fact that (somewhere deep within him) he deeply resented the role he played in the Marauders' foursome, & that Sirius finally understood what a twisted mind Peter had under the obtuse facade, so he laughed at the whole, rotten irony of it.

Author's Response: I would say that that is a very convincing argument, and is probably true. Who knows, exactly? Anything could be the truth.

Reviewer: lovelilyjames
Date: 12/28/06 12:03
Chapter: Foreshadowing

I mistrust LaLa.I don't think she had a 100% change of heart. As for the rest, it's got to happen. You capture the times very well.

Author's Response: Thank you. What you think about LaLa is, of course, entirely up to you. I like to think that she is one of those people who spends her life flitting from one thing to another, never being able to make up her mind about where she belongs because she is so easily persuaded. I'm very grateful for all your feedback, by the way.

Reviewer: lovelilyjames
Date: 12/28/06 11:55
Chapter: The Darkest Nights

This was a great chapter but it's a prelude to the sad part so the fun & laughter is hollow - you put that across very well.

Author's Response: Thanks, I think you're right. Too bad it all has to end so badly ...

Reviewer: Chomione
Date: 12/27/06 5:32
Chapter: Harry

Whooo! What a happy end to the chapter! But what's with all the asterix? They only go at the end of a sentence, there's no need to put them at the beginning.

Author's Response: Oh well, I'll put them at the beginning too, just to be doubly sure. Don't want anyone thinking I'd written those gems myself, now, do we?

Reviewer: Hogwarts Alumni
Date: 12/26/06 23:40
Chapter: Harry

very very good, as always. I would have liked to see a little more time being described, you know like Sirius being so angry about being cooped up in the shreiking shack, and then I think the ripping up of the picture and bed-curtains would have been a little more called for, but as it was you did a very good job.

But no Sir Cadogen?!? That had the potential to be quite comical...

Author's Response: Lol, I had forgotten all about him! Oh well. Yes, maybe you're right about time being described more and stuff. To be honest, I didn't enjoy writing this chapter much at all, that's probably why it's not the best. Still, thank you for your review!

Reviewer: Big_Kelpie
Date: 12/26/06 17:58
Chapter: Harry

Well i loved it ! though it means this story is coming to an end quickly... ooo

Author's Response: It can't go on forever ... I'm glad you liked it ... so relieved! Still, despite, it's soon end, I think it will go out with a bang (well, maybe not a bang as such, but you get the idea). Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Banana Shroogle
Date: 12/26/06 16:20
Chapter: Children Are The Future

OK, Lily's pissing me off.

:D This story is great, and I love it! It's a good plot and the charactarisation is just right!

It's just that Lily was supposed to be brave, funny, and cheeky. She stood up for Snape, because James attacked him for no reason. (I would blame Sirius here too, but I love him too much :D) and, let's face it, James did seem annoying and full of it by the lake.

I think Lily wasn't all that for the rules. She probably did have a temper, though O.O

Author's Response: To be honest, I agree with you. I wrote this MONTHS ago, you see, and I agree with you now. Anyway, if you want a Lily who fresh, and fun, try my other fic in this category, The Things I Do For L.O.V.E ... It's good fun all round! Apart from that, thank you for your kind comments, because I do appreciate them!

Reviewer: Big_Kelpie
Date: 12/26/06 15:57
Chapter: Harry

wow the fist half seems good!! no time 2 read the rest

Author's Response: I'm glad you think so, and look forward to hearing about the second! :D

Reviewer: Maraurderinchief
Date: 12/26/06 11:18
Chapter: Fighting to Lose

You havn't mentioned Lupin for a while, how's Wolfy doing?

Author's Response: Wolfy is alright, he's just muddling along, as always. We'll hear more from him as time goes on, don't worry.

Author's Response: By the way, this just so happens to be review number 200! Congratulations! *Cyber cookies*

Reviewer: Maraurderinchief
Date: 12/26/06 10:33
Chapter: Changes

Lala should be shot...the character AND her namesake.

Author's Response: No no no no no! The real LaLa isn't that bad, not at all! Remember that Fiction!LaLa and Real!LaLa are seperate ... Still, I appreciate your opinion (On the character, I'm going to pretend the namesake comment never happened) because it's always interesting what people make of my OCs.

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