Reviewer: MorganRay
Date: 01/02/07 22:47
Chapter: The Other Side

I can see why this story was a runner up. You started out with the description of Spinner's End and flawlessly pulled me into your story. Your characterization of Snape was impecable. You wrote him very well, and the dialogue and scene between Snape and Voldamort was one the highlights of this chapter. You portrayed Snape as a double agent, trying to stay alive, but you also managed to make it believable that he wanted Draco alive, too. However, Snape did not appear caring, either, or out of character throughout any of this piece. However, I didn't feel Draco was as strongly written, but he wasn't OOC, either. I guess because Draco was playing dead for most of the piece there just wasn't the chance to write more of his character. Also, I enjoyed how you tied this into Lament of the Pheonix.

Author's Response: I was a runner up? ::blinks:: I didn't even know I was nominated for anything. LOL. Anyway, yay! Thank you, Morgan. Now you can go read the rest of the chapters hehehehe. I do understand what you were saying about Draco... I will be able to develop him later.

Reviewer: DracosBaby_232
Date: 01/02/07 21:50
Chapter: The Other Side

Very well done, lots of suspense and action. It would seem though that Snape is not on the side of evil, it will need to be made clear in the future.

Author's Response: Thank you! Well, as Jo said, keep your eye on Severus Snape. There'll be loads more about him later.

Reviewer: arwenevensatr
Date: 12/15/06 15:13
Chapter: Godric's Hollow (part two)

Oh the suspense is killing me!! Whats going on? Please update soon, and thank you for not abadoning this story.

Author's Response: Sorry, should be up soon as promised. Been having job problems, my dog died, exams, etc...

Reviewer: Slytherdore
Date: 12/02/06 0:52
Chapter: Godric's Hollow (part two)

This is my favorite story on the entire site. I look foreward to reading this story as much as I have the actual Harry Potter books! I'm so impressed by how well you have the characters down, that you stay true to the feel of each of their personalities.
This is a great read. It flows, it keeps your attention, and it's exciting! I sure hope you have plans to publish some of your own work. It's obvious that you have what it takes. Good luck!

Author's Response: Wow, that is one of the nicest compliments I have ever had. Thank you so much! I would publish, but most of my works are all fanfic based, and well... copyright and all that :( I had a Hercules: The Legendary Journeys sequal in the works, and they were all my own characters, so... that's the best chance I've got ;)

Reviewer: spacejam1976
Date: 11/30/06 16:34
Chapter: Godric's Hollow (part two)

really a great story i hope to see the rest of it thanks

Author's Response: Thank you! The rest of chapter six should be up soon :)

Reviewer: silverbulletday
Date: 11/26/06 0:11
Chapter: Godric's Hollow (part two)

I can't wait for the next chapter! Love the way you keep us hooked at the end of each one. Keep up the super good work!

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, I'm beginning to like cliffhangers a lot. Don't be surprised if I end the next one the same way ;)

Reviewer: dejavu
Date: 11/25/06 8:04
Chapter: Godric's Hollow (part two)

I think this story is great, frankly I dont know how the author is going to end this part but I can't wait to read the next chapter please write soon

Author's Response: The third part of this chapter should be up in the next few weeks. Thanks for the review :)

Reviewer: marhest
Date: 11/23/06 23:03
Chapter: Godric's Hollow (part two)

I can't wait for the next chapter. The hair on the back of my neck stood out. keep up the GREAT work!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Shnuu
Date: 11/23/06 22:53
Chapter: Godric's Hollow (part two)

awesome...thriller.....ron sounds like obi-wan kenobi..."i have a bad feeling about this." lol more...more...more....

Author's Response: Yeah, we're actually starting to get a bit into that Dark/Angsty that this category is supposed to be about ;) And, actually I was thinking about Luke when I wrote that part lol

Reviewer: I lovesmesomeHarry
Date: 11/23/06 22:32
Chapter: Godric's Hollow (part two)

wow! I can't wait to find out what happens!

Author's Response: You won't have to wait too long. Part three should be up within the next week or two

Reviewer: harrypotter26
Date: 11/23/06 20:11
Chapter: Godric's Hollow (part two)

I love it. Please post soon

Author's Response: Thanks! Will do, I promise :)

Reviewer: Potter_freak0515
Date: 11/23/06 19:59
Chapter: Godric's Hollow (part two)

Oh! Hermione's going to be right! Stupid, stupid Harry. Love the chapter! Please update soon!

Author's Response: Yay! I thought everyone would forget about me! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Lestat491
Date: 11/09/06 20:50
Chapter: Godric's Hollow (part one)

Excellent story, please keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! Umm.... Chapter six is coming along, slowly but surely. I'm in the middle of moving, but if anyone is interested, I have a blog now, and you can check there to see how long it will be before the next update. It's at

Reviewer: melodyhp
Date: 10/06/06 21:11
Chapter: Godric's Hollow (part one)

this is a great story but i think there is one error that needs to be addressed: Harry is NOT a halfblood, he is a pureblood. i think there should be a little bit more action in the story. sorry if i sound critical.

Author's Response: Um... actually, I think you'll find you're wrong on that one. Read the end of OotP again... Dumbledore says Harry is a half-blood himself. And Jo has the bloodlines worked out similarly to the way that Germans classified the Jews during the Holocaust. Even if both your parents have magic, if one is a halfblood, or a muggleborn, you're still considered a halfblood unless the magic goes back a certain number of generations.

Reviewer: Ginny5282
Date: 10/02/06 7:45
Chapter: Godric's Hollow (part one)

Great Chapter. I hadn't thought much about Hermione's parents to be honest. JK never really mentions them. I like the fact that Harry is starting to take control a bit. He is the only one who really knows what is going on so should be participating. Keep 'em coming......

Author's Response: Yes, the fact that Jo never mentions Hermione's parents after the second book (except in book five, to say that they were "disappointed" that she wasn't going skiing with them) is what prompted me to want to write about them. And I got some arguments about putting Harry in the Order, considering (in my b/f's opinion) he really does still have a lot to learn, but... I think it's what Dumbledore would have done.

Reviewer: Potter_freak0515
Date: 10/01/06 15:44
Chapter: Godric's Hollow (part one)

I love this fic! I hope it's updated soon. *stares pointedly at author* My advice is get Harry and Ginny together soon. I hate that ship and the romantic tension makes it worse. You know what I do love about this? It's actually long. Some people never update and when they do I can read the chapters in five minutes. You're not like that. THANK YOU!

Author's Response: Yay! A review! I thought no one cared anymore. Yeah, my chapters are ridiculously long. I actually had to cut off the rest of this one because it went over the limit. As soon as I figure out where to stick Godric's Hollow, I'll write the rest of it and have it up soon.

Author's Response: Oh, and about Harry and Ginny... yeah, you might be waiting for that one for a while. Sorry... at least I got Ron and Hermione out of the way, though ;)

Reviewer: TXwitch
Date: 08/17/06 18:42
Chapter: The Other Side

Oooooo...I can't wait till more comes out!!!! The ending to chapter 8 was fantastic...really makes you want more.

Author's Response: Thank you! And it's actually Chapter Five, LOL, because my chapters are so long and I have to break them down. Darn 10,000 word limit

Reviewer: Ginny5282
Date: 08/08/06 7:13
Chapter: Coming of Age (part two)

Glad the admin finally let this one through! Really enjoying it so keep going!

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, for some reason they've been really slow about things lately. I understand, though, that they have stuff going on.

Reviewer: Potter_freak0515
Date: 08/08/06 0:04
Chapter: Coming of Age (part two)

And I'm the fist person to review!!!

Author's Response: Okay, this would be what we consider spam. Don't clutter my review boxes with things like this, or I'm going to have contact a mod.

Reviewer: Potter_freak0515
Date: 08/08/06 0:04
Chapter: Coming of Age (part two)

Yay another chapter!!!

Author's Response: No spamming

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