Yay long chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!! I liked the hand fasting thing it always seemed like weddings should be different for wizards :)
Author's Response: I agree, and I've read a lot of fanfics where they used the handfasting instead of a traditional ceremony, and I thought that would be perfect for an Old Wizarding Family like the Weasleys, and for Bill and Fleur.
hm i can see your problem with harry. being a brit i also see that u r making harry sound much more american than perhaps he actually is? the rest of characters r fine tho u've done really well tho so far- its a v gd story.
Author's Response: Yeah, I was having a lot of problems with him in Chapter Two, but I think I may have gotten the hang of him.. my beta says Harry is a lot more in character in the next few chapters, so yay!
hm. i like it. i can't wait to read the next few chapters nd see where harry and the rest come in. it's dark but has definately made me want to read it xx
Author's Response: Thanks! I tried to throw a bit of humor in there ala Fred and George, and the infamous Great Aunt Tessy (who was mentioned in the movie GOF)
looove your story so far, very plausiable and fast paced, cant wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you! MuggleNet is irritating me right now with this whole not admitting they're having a technical problem stuff, so the rest of chapter three is up at FanFiction.net, under the same name. That's where I'll probably be updating from now on, until MN sorts itself out.
Nice, it was really good and I can wait for the second part (college does tend to kick your ass, dosen't it?). Hope your finger feels better.
Author's Response: Thanks... I'm getting college under control now, just a research paper, a portfolio, and a final project to do now ::sigh:: And my finger is almost all the way healed, and I'll have a lovely scar. Too bad it's not lightning shaped ;)
Oooh, I really like it! Very interesting can't wait to see the whole Petunia, Snape and Malfoy story develop. I also really like your literary style!
Author's Response: Thanks! I try to write as in canon as possible... I'll never write as well as Jo, but what can you do ;)
Hee-hee, I love your Uncle Vernon, he's almost EXACTLY the way Jo writes him! I LOVE this story, keep writing! 10/10!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, he was pretty easy, just a lot of shouting. ;) And I love being able to describe him because he's so animated.
This is really good so far! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
I also just registered this site so I could submit a review on your work. It's awesome (= It was extremely convincing and I really can't wait to read more ^_^
Author's Response: Wow, it's so flattering that people register just to review me. You guys are making me nervous! j/k
Omg, its really great! I haven't read any post-HBP fics, but when i was in the middle of this one, i was like, "oh yea. this isn't the seventh book..." :) can't wait to read chp. 2!
Author's Response: I'm glad to have brought you over to the post-HBP world! I hope Chapter 2 won't be a disappointment ;)
Wow, this has to be one of the best post-HBP pics I've read! Very powerful and well described. I will be waiting for more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I just sent in chapter two, its waiting validation. :)
Very good story, I'm enjoying it. You seem to have come up with a plausible plot fitting in with hbp and characterisation is good so far. Look forward to more.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I tried to do my research on the whole Snape/Malfoy situation. :)
I just registered to submit for your story because I need to know !!! PLEASE go on writing. I'd love to know which side you put Snape and where the other two are going (Snape's father, isn't it ?)
Author's Response: I know I already sent you an email, but thanks! Chapter Two is coming along nicely, I'm passed my writers block (finally). I'm having an arguement with one of my "editors", though. But it should be up soon