this is so good most of my poems don't ryme
Wow, that was amazing, and it actually sounds like it would come from their mouths! Excellent job, it's going on my faves!
omg this is like amzing great work
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Wow...I really liked that poem; that last stanza really struck me for some reason...great poem! : )
Very good, although, theoretically, James wouldn't have known. xD But it was good - the rhyme scheme was simple and it flowed nicely.
~Juli
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Wow this is really good dude. Keep it up.
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OH MY. This is the most heart driven poem I have ever heard. Bravo!
-Mr. Potter
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That was so sad! Wow! That was amazing.
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this was sooo good. i don't read much poetry, but i saw this one when i was browsing around and i read it. and im glad i did, because it was really, really good. i hate peter, i hate traitors but especially peter...foul little evil rat...(ha ha) anyway, VERY GOOD! :)
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I liked it!!
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This is great, but I wish it had a little more emotion in it, and I wish I could see what Peter thought of it.
Author's Response: Thanks for your opinion. I thought it had plenty of emotion, but I'm glad you told me that you thought it didn't. I'll work on that next time. I'm thinking of writing a second poem about what Peter thinks. Anyway, thanks for the review! ~ Katherine
Wow! That was great! Anymore poems coming out anytime soon? =) 10/10
Author's Response: I don't have any poems planned for now. I've tried writing a few since this one, but I just couldn't get any of them to flow right, so I have temporarily given up on poetry for now. But I'll write another poem eventually. Thanks for the review! You totally made my day. :D ~ Katherine
Good poem! I'm definitely not an expert on poems, but I'll give this a 10 and it's going on my favorites!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! =) ~ Katherine
WOW! Loved it! So good! You're awesome at writing poetry. This is the best poem I've read on mugglenet.... It's also, the only poem I've put on my favourites... Because I'm very picky about poetry. You did a wonderful job, normally, I think most poems that rhyme are kind of cheesy... But this one was PERFECT! Sincerely, ~ILSB
WOW! Loved it! So good! You're awesome at writing poetry. This is the best poem I've read on mugglenet.... It's also, the only poem I've put on my favourites... Because I'm very picky about poetry. You did a wonderful job, normally, I think most poems that rhyme are kind of cheesy... But this one was PERFECT! Sincerely, ~ILSB
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. =) And thanks for putting this poem on your favorites list. That's very cool! ~ Katherine
I loved this poem. Isn't it up in the Ravenclaw Commen Room in the forums? Anyway, It is really good, and you are a really good poet. 10/10 HermyRox12
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. =) Yes, it is up in the Ravenclaw common room. I noticed you also gave me a nice reply there. I really appreciate your nice comments. Thanks again. ~ Katherine
