How in the world does she know who Mrs. Figg is?
Ok. That was one of the funniest things I've ever read. Do you know what your stories have done to me so far? I have about four days to finsih a semester of Advanced English, and I just spent today reading your stories and doing nothing else. And I have to get up at five to work for eight hours. Now, if that is not a compliment, I don't know what is.
“Let’s give a round of applause for couple of the year, Lily Evans and Severus Snape!”
I was mortified, but then suddeny had an idea. Snape was standing close, clearly baffled by the development. I reached out and pulled him close. His eyes went wide as I kissed him perfectly on the lips. James looked sick. I let go and walked away, not daring to look back.
Okay, I don't mean to be insulting, because your story is fine. But this just popped into my head when I read this and I wanted to share it with you. That is what would make this story top every other ever written. (I'm joking, but hey, it just came to me, I couldn't deny it)
the keeper is priceless....
okayyy why is Jules frisking Filch?.?.?,
and that was funny
This is too good.
Apparently, we like it rough. *wipes tears of glee*
Ok. This is THE Best fan fic ever. Snape and Lupin. This is fantastic. Keep it up.
What? No, take it back. Lupin DOES Love Lily. To use flawless logic, their names start with the same letter! How can you go wrong with that? Come on....
*trudges back from her ultimate fanfic into a dull one*
o my goodness! YEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSS!!!!
That is fantastic! O please let it last!let it last! let it last! Remus 'Mooney' Lupin. YYEEEEEHHHAAAWWWWW!
Okay. They are fourteen and acting like they are eight. What is up.
hhahahahahhaaa. I love that end to the contest.
Oh come on please? Severus, say something beautiful. Both of you gang up on James or something, PLEASE!?!?!
Ok, so far the best way to make this story better is for Snape and Evans to REALLY be snogging. end point.
O baby, Severus action! this is what you SHOULD be writing about!
hmm. We'll see. Lily and James and the sequel to it were both great. I got bored with the mundane of Potter's Charm.
Awesome beginning! You know you're writing style has a real Bridget Jones Diary feel to it!
Good story. I don't really think Lily was thast crazy though
THIS WAS AMAZING. NO JOKE.
i see lily in a whole new light. its seriously godsend.
keep up the series! whoo!
Abosolutley hilarious. After about chapter 6, I think, I was laughing out loud at least twice per chapter. During the Slug Party I couldn't stop. I tried to keep track of a list of particiularly funny lines in my head but it got too long :P
This seriously was a very funny story; Psycho-Lily is hysterical.