Reviews For Lily
Reviewer: greeneyeseverus
Date: 11/23/07 23:27
Chapter: Midnight Rendezvous

How in the world does she know who Mrs. Figg is?
Ok. That was one of the funniest things I've ever read. Do you know what your stories have done to me so far? I have about four days to finsih a semester of Advanced English, and I just spent today reading your stories and doing nothing else. And I have to get up at five to work for eight hours. Now, if that is not a compliment, I don't know what is.

Reviewer: greeneyeseverus
Date: 11/23/07 23:13
Chapter: Slug Club Debacle

“Let’s give a round of applause for couple of the year, Lily Evans and Severus Snape!”
I was mortified, but then suddeny had an idea. Snape was standing close, clearly baffled by the development. I reached out and pulled him close. His eyes went wide as I kissed him perfectly on the lips. James looked sick. I let go and walked away, not daring to look back.

Okay, I don't mean to be insulting, because your story is fine. But this just popped into my head when I read this and I wanted to share it with you. That is what would make this story top every other ever written. (I'm joking, but hey, it just came to me, I couldn't deny it)

Reviewer: greeneyeseverus
Date: 11/23/07 23:00
Chapter: The Turtleneck

the keeper is priceless....

Reviewer: greeneyeseverus
Date: 11/23/07 22:49
Chapter: If Slughorn Were My Grandfather

okayyy why is Jules frisking Filch?.?.?,
and that was funny

Reviewer: greeneyeseverus
Date: 11/23/07 22:41
Chapter: It All Falls Down


Reviewer: greeneyeseverus
Date: 11/23/07 22:36
Chapter: Mrs. Logan Johnson

This is too good.

Reviewer: greeneyeseverus
Date: 11/23/07 22:29
Chapter: Grinning Prats

Apparently, we like it rough. *wipes tears of glee*
Ok. This is THE Best fan fic ever. Snape and Lupin. This is fantastic. Keep it up.
What? No, take it back. Lupin DOES Love Lily. To use flawless logic, their names start with the same letter! How can you go wrong with that? Come on....
*trudges back from her ultimate fanfic into a dull one*

Reviewer: greeneyeseverus
Date: 11/23/07 22:20
Chapter: Goodbye Cruel World

o my goodness! YEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSS!!!!
That is fantastic! O please let it last!let it last! let it last! Remus 'Mooney' Lupin. YYEEEEEHHHAAAWWWWW!

Reviewer: greeneyeseverus
Date: 11/23/07 22:13
Chapter: James and Jules

Okay. They are fourteen and acting like they are eight. What is up.

Reviewer: greeneyeseverus
Date: 11/23/07 22:08
Chapter: Curiosity About The Cat


Reviewer: greeneyeseverus
Date: 11/23/07 22:03
Chapter: Hall Brawl '74

hhahahahahhaaa. I love that end to the contest.

Oh come on please? Severus, say something beautiful. Both of you gang up on James or something, PLEASE!?!?!

Reviewer: greeneyeseverus
Date: 11/23/07 21:56
Chapter: Ugly Duckling

Ok, so far the best way to make this story better is for Snape and Evans to REALLY be snogging. end point.

Reviewer: greeneyeseverus
Date: 11/23/07 21:51
Chapter: Hatred

O baby, Severus action! this is what you SHOULD be writing about!

Reviewer: greeneyeseverus
Date: 11/23/07 21:48
Chapter: Frizzy Hair


Reviewer: greeneyeseverus
Date: 11/23/07 21:43
Chapter: Welcome To My Life

hmm. We'll see. Lily and James and the sequel to it were both great. I got bored with the mundane of Potter's Charm.

Reviewer: randy_andy
Date: 10/20/07 6:41
Chapter: Welcome To My Life

Awesome beginning! You know you're writing style has a real Bridget Jones Diary feel to it!

Reviewer: marvelousmeg
Date: 10/06/07 13:19
Chapter: Midnight Rendezvous

Good story. I don't really think Lily was thast crazy though

Reviewer: Annabella Cullen
Date: 09/24/07 17:38
Chapter: Midnight Rendezvous



i see lily in a whole new light. its seriously godsend.

Reviewer: HarperLee
Date: 09/16/07 10:35
Chapter: Midnight Rendezvous

keep up the series! whoo!

Reviewer: Omagus
Date: 08/14/07 3:23
Chapter: Midnight Rendezvous

Abosolutley hilarious. After about chapter 6, I think, I was laughing out loud at least twice per chapter. During the Slug Party I couldn't stop. I tried to keep track of a list of particiularly funny lines in my head but it got too long :P
This seriously was a very funny story; Psycho-Lily is hysterical.

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