Reviews For Lily
Reviewer: Es21232
Date: 06/26/06 11:52
Chapter: Curiosity About The Cat

"Bah." that is a funny word (i am not being sarcastic, i promise!) actually, is that even a word? hmmm.... sorry, spaced out there for minute.
brilliant. i am now *speechless*

Reviewer: Es21232
Date: 06/26/06 11:44
Chapter: Hall Brawl '74

lol! someone gave Potter the smackdown!!!!!!!!!! lmao!!!! very amusing!!!!!!!!! hilarious! brilliant! a masterpiece!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Es21232
Date: 06/26/06 11:26
Chapter: Ugly Duckling

brilliant! "There is going to be hell to pay, James Potter. Got to go deliver a beating..." that was my favorite quote from that chapter! extremely mind-blowing!

Reviewer: Es21232
Date: 06/26/06 11:18
Chapter: Hatred

lol! i think it's hilarious! are you kidding?! i doesn't even need to be funnier, but if you insist... lmao

Reviewer: Es21232
Date: 06/26/06 11:14
Chapter: Frizzy Hair

it is short, but amazing! "Got to throw a shoe at her head." now that sounds like something i might say.... lol!

Reviewer: Es21232
Date: 06/26/06 11:06
Chapter: Welcome To My Life

awesome! i have read some of your other stories, and i have to say, all have been wonderful and exciting! i think one of your stories is actually what made me start to like the Marauder Era more than Harry's... but that's pretty confusing... anyway, i should probably shutup and start reading the next chapter. (people might get mad. they do that often.)

Date: 06/25/06 19:38
Chapter: Grinning Prats

i like it alot it is funny

Reviewer: Her_mi_o_ne 16
Date: 06/25/06 18:50
Chapter: Grinning Prats

this is sooo funny!!!
I totally don't believe that Remus would EVER do that, though! He KNEW how much James liked Lily, and how upset he would get if he EVER found out. Also, Remus is shy around girls. Kissing them to "cheer them up" is definitally Sirius's department. I still love this fic, I'm just saying it's totally unbelievable.
Update soon, though! I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: KitKat517
Date: 06/24/06 19:08
Chapter: Grinning Prats

This is a great story. It never fails to make me laugh. Update soon, please!

Author's Response: I've always liked making people laugh. Good to know I can still do that from time to time XD

Reviewer: pheonix_princess
Date: 06/24/06 18:31
Chapter: Grinning Prats


Reviewer: Secret Seeker
Date: 06/24/06 12:10
Chapter: Grinning Prats

Back again. I was just thinking, did u get this style of diary from princess diaries ? I think it's really cool.

Reviewer: Secret Seeker
Date: 06/24/06 12:10
Chapter: Grinning Prats

Back again. I was just thinking, did u get this style of diary from princess diaries ? I think it's really cool.

Author's Response: I sort of made a blend of my own inspired by Meg Cabot, Louise Rennison, and Helen Fielding. All incredible authors.

Reviewer: cenedra
Date: 06/24/06 5:03
Chapter: Grinning Prats

really funny chapter,

i can't wait to find out what happens to lily in her attempt to get a boyfriend. Poor james isn't going to be happy,

Great chapter

Reviewer: moonwalker
Date: 06/24/06 0:15
Chapter: Grinning Prats

you're hilarious. nice work.

Reviewer: moonwalker
Date: 06/23/06 23:58
Chapter: Curiosity About The Cat

i think this is the funniest chapter so far. i like the's good.

Reviewer: moonwalker
Date: 06/23/06 23:48
Chapter: Ugly Duckling

your writing reminds me of the georgia nicholson books. famiiliar? it's a good humor style.

Author's Response: I wanted it to come across as a mix of Louise Rennison, Meg Cabot, and Helen Fielding :D They're inspiring.

Reviewer: goobersam9
Date: 06/23/06 21:03
Chapter: Grinning Prats

great! more soon

Reviewer: sarcastic hp lover
Date: 06/23/06 17:41
Chapter: Grinning Prats

Lily = stalker. not exactly what you expect. Potter = stalker. sure.
But lily. But don't get me wrong i love the lily stalker angle update soon can't wait.

Author's Response: This Lily is a little more eccentric than the one JKR introduced to us.

Reviewer: Pussycat123
Date: 06/23/06 15:27
Chapter: Grinning Prats

Haha, that was brilliant (again). I loved it. It was so hilarious, Lily's character is absolutely ... Damn, I can't think of a word other than "charming" again. This happened, last time, I'm sure of it. Stupid vocabulary *grabs a thesaurus* ... delightful, amiable, pleasant, charismatic, polite, fascinating ... Nope. Well, you get the idea. It's brilliant. And I'm rambling again, so I'll leave it at that.

Reviewer: Crazy About Dan
Date: 06/23/06 14:42
Chapter: Grinning Prats

This is an interesting story. Update soon

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