Reviews For Lily
Reviewer: Ginnypottergurl793
Date: 08/08/06 20:22
Chapter: Grinning Prats

You are hillarious i nearly died at the part about the hickey! Omg wow! I'm becoming a bit obsessed with this story! MUST KEEP READING!

Reviewer: Ginnypottergurl793
Date: 08/08/06 20:12
Chapter: Goodbye Cruel World

Omg! Knowing what happens I have to keep reading! wow! i'm impressed once again. i mean... wow. omg. lol i'm a nerd! lol must continue reading!

Reviewer: Ginnypottergurl793
Date: 08/08/06 19:58
Chapter: James and Jules

Lol. that's awesome i laughed my 'bloody' head off!

Reviewer: Ginnypottergurl793
Date: 08/08/06 19:45
Chapter: Curiosity About The Cat

That was hillarious! The best chapter yet!!! 100,000,000/10!

Reviewer: Ginnypottergurl793
Date: 08/08/06 19:31
Chapter: Hall Brawl '74

Oh and i have a question. Why does Lily hate Potter, but not Sirious, Lupin, or Pettigrew? Wasn't Sirious just as bad as James?

Reviewer: Ginnypottergurl793
Date: 08/08/06 19:27
Chapter: Hall Brawl '74

Kay. Throughout that whole thing I was like "come on, potter would NOT be so mean to his crush. I mean, I understand foolish tricks to get her attention, but that was a bit too far..." but I loved the last paragraph. Lol. I know i'm a bit of a freak, but nice job yet again.

Reviewer: Ginnypottergurl793
Date: 08/08/06 19:17
Chapter: Ugly Duckling

I didn't think that Potter would be so mean to Lily Evans... I mean, he tried to ask her out so much from what I hear. It's just hatred, and I know he liked her... I know she hated him... but not the other way around. but I still give it a 9/10, because your writing is really good.

Reviewer: Ginnypottergurl793
Date: 08/08/06 18:54
Chapter: Hatred

Aw, but i'm a romantic. i can't wait 'till lily and james go out. but i like where you're going with this. the beginning was hard to follow, but i picked up. sorry i comment on every chapter ;)

Reviewer: AILily
Date: 08/08/06 15:32
Chapter: If Slughorn Were My Grandfather

Toodles. Now that scares me. All in all, another AMAZINGLY hilarous chapter. Keep writing. You're really talented.

Reviewer: KitKat517
Date: 08/08/06 13:01
Chapter: If Slughorn Were My Grandfather

No interaction what so ever with the male species. Intresting. You know, that might actually make life easier. I think Holly really does have a crush on Diggory. Was he burned very badly when his hand caught on fire? I wouldn't want Holly's crush to have a disfigured hand. Lily's grandfather sounds nice. Okay, okay. I'll stop rambling now. Great story, funny chapter, and update soon please. I loved the 'toodles' thing at the end. I've actually signed one of my personal diary entries that way (and that is the most anyone will ever know about whats in my diary). I've started rambling again so I'll stop now.

Reviewer: Ginnypottergurl793
Date: 08/08/06 12:59
Chapter: Frizzy Hair

No, I don't think it's too short, I think it's fine. I don't know that I had pictured Lily having this exact personallity, I guess I'd picture her being a little more layed back, but Jk Rowling doesn't describe her personality in the books much does she? And someone's diary is where they express thier emotions strongly.... so overall (of what I've read so far) I give it a 10/10

Reviewer: sweet_harry
Date: 08/08/06 12:54
Chapter: If Slughorn Were My Grandfather

yay! another chapter!

Reviewer: Ginnypottergurl793
Date: 08/08/06 12:36
Chapter: Welcome To My Life

Wow you are a great writer! I can't wait to continue reading!


Reviewer: The_Dark_Lord
Date: 08/08/06 10:40
Chapter: If Slughorn Were My Grandfather

Nice a bit short but nice :)

Reviewer: sarcastic hp lover
Date: 08/08/06 10:07
Chapter: If Slughorn Were My Grandfather

i loved it lily's taking it much farther than celibacy not any interaction with the male species,classic!! i enjoted it.

Reviewer: Pussycat123
Date: 08/08/06 7:20
Chapter: If Slughorn Were My Grandfather

Haha, I love this fic so much ... it's definately one of your best, because it's just so hilarious. I wonder how long she will last not talking to any boys? You know, despite how demented Lily can be in this fic (which is why I love it so much) she actually talks a lot of sense ... well, some sense. Keep writing, I love it, I love it, I love it!

Reviewer: some_kinda_superstar
Date: 08/08/06 4:49
Chapter: If Slughorn Were My Grandfather

Great chapter! Just one little thing; you described Snape as a 'snarky birk". I love it and I think it suits him perfectly, but the word is actually spelled 'berk'.

Aside from that, it was fantastic. I really liked the 'If Slughorn Were My Grandfather' bit. And I enjoyed your description of Sirius and James as 'Two of the most insufferable beings to walk the earth'. It sounds like something Lily would say. I really like how well you have developed her character in this story. Update soon!

Author's Response: Ah! I definitely didn't know that. I'm American so my horrible London-isms will most likely be consistent. I only ask that you overlook future spellings of the word "berk" because I'm way to lazzzy to go and edit them all. ;)

Reviewer: quiet_passion
Date: 08/07/06 22:51
Chapter: If Slughorn Were My Grandfather

that was really good! i loved it! i can't wait for the next chapter! toodles!

p.s. yes, i said toodles. (hehe i liked that part)

Reviewer: obscene_humanity
Date: 08/06/06 20:47
Chapter: It All Falls Down

cool story! good job.

Reviewer: The_Dark_Lord
Date: 08/05/06 13:29
Chapter: It All Falls Down

I Really Like It Very Good

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