Reviews For Lily
Reviewer: tonks654
Date: 09/14/08 17:25
Chapter: Midnight Rendezvous

so so so so so so good...this is my third Secret Lily book, and i love them all to death...after i finish this series i plan on re-reading Catch My Fall witch was so sad but good...cant wait to comment more on your wonderful writing! thanks for the cliffhanger on the end...bye!

Reviewer: tonks654
Date: 09/14/08 17:13
Chapter: Slug Club Debacle

i thought she was talking about the drink!!! hahahah that was considerably funny...and by considerably i mean extreamly!

Reviewer: tonks654
Date: 09/14/08 16:46
Chapter: The Turtleneck

loved it!!!!!!

Reviewer: tonks654
Date: 09/14/08 16:32
Chapter: If Slughorn Were My Grandfather

i didn't think that chapter was"ha ha laugh out loud" funny. It was entertaining and amusing an a little........freaky. ok thats mean it was welll written and happpy and I have nothing against it at all.

Reviewer: tonks654
Date: 09/14/08 15:34
Chapter: It All Falls Down

laughed so incredibly hard!!! and i still am

Reviewer: tonks654
Date: 09/10/08 14:57
Chapter: Mrs. Logan Johnson

i LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! its so funny and great and amazing and i sound like im in love!!!

Reviewer: tonks654
Date: 09/10/08 14:48
Chapter: Grinning Prats

im still laughing so hard!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: tonks654
Date: 09/09/08 16:58
Chapter: Goodbye Cruel World

wowowwoowowow!!!!! i like it, im suprised, but i lo9ve it all the same. I can WAIT to see Jame's recation!!!!!!

Reviewer: tonks654
Date: 09/09/08 16:50
Chapter: James and Jules

i new that was going to happen, but im still screaming eww!!! oh goodie! im officaially immature.

Reviewer: tonks654
Date: 09/09/08 16:43
Chapter: Curiosity About The Cat

still so funny! im really sorry im being so vaugue, but i cant thing of anything else to describe it.

Reviewer: tonks654
Date: 09/09/08 16:36
Chapter: Hall Brawl '74

lol this is sooo funny and i laughed so incredibly hard!

Reviewer: tonks654
Date: 09/07/08 8:16
Chapter: Ugly Duckling

well it was sorta funny...i chucled a little (wow that sounded nerdy!) but nothng was that funny, i will keep reading because i do believe it will get better

Reviewer: tonks654
Date: 09/07/08 8:11
Chapter: Hatred

three sequels...well i just read Lily and Jamees:Their Story of Love by you....the i read the sequel Catch My Fall and didn't particulary like i might not read the last one...considering how things work out. this chaper was alright sorry im being so vague.

Reviewer: tonks654
Date: 09/07/08 8:06
Chapter: Frizzy Hair

it wasnt that short! and who cares? it was goood! I laughed out loud about the part where Holly stuck the gum in Potter's hair. Then again, when she went to go throw a shoe at her head. That was gen-ious! That was a good chapter!

Reviewer: tonks654
Date: 09/07/08 7:59
Chapter: Welcome To My Life

it was good..this was written a long time ago so im not even sure if ull get this review, i like it, and wonder where it will take me.

Reviewer: purpleplastisine
Date: 07/09/08 15:15
Chapter: Welcome To My Life

I found that you had a lot of sentences that state the same thing twice, (Eg-"If it wasn’t for her, I don’t know how I would have survived the first couple of years without her.") but like you said, this is out of date (I think I first read it when I was 10, unlass I'm mistaken)

Reviewer: lilyrox
Date: 06/29/08 13:32
Chapter: Midnight Rendezvous

Hahahaha!!!!!!! I laughed so hard at this comical little fic. A bit short, but you are making a part II so, I guess thats okay.

Reviewer: Hermiones BFF
Date: 06/21/08 22:31
Chapter: Midnight Rendezvous

OMG!!!!!!!!!! Totally loved it!!! It was like the Princess Diaries books in sooooo many ways! I loved the creepy Snape!!!

Reviewer: Luna_Lovegood11
Date: 03/21/08 19:18
Chapter: Midnight Rendezvous

Cute story. I laughed so much, mostly at the hissing and poor Jules. You're a great writer.

Reviewer: gryffindorgirl531
Date: 03/03/08 16:48
Chapter: James and Jules

im still laughing about snape hissing...

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