so so so so so so good...this is my third Secret Lily book, and i love them all to death...after i finish this series i plan on re-reading Catch My Fall witch was so sad but good...cant wait to comment more on your wonderful writing! thanks for the cliffhanger on the end...bye!
i thought she was talking about the drink!!! hahahah that was considerably funny...and by considerably i mean extreamly!
i didn't think that chapter was"ha ha laugh out loud" funny. It was entertaining and amusing an a little........freaky. ok thats mean it was welll written and happpy and I have nothing against it at all.
laughed so incredibly hard!!! and i still am
i LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! its so funny and great and amazing and perfect......lol i sound like im in love!!!
im still laughing so hard!!!!!!!!!!!
wowowwoowowow!!!!! i like it, im suprised, but i lo9ve it all the same. I can WAIT to see Jame's recation!!!!!!
i new that was going to happen, but im still screaming eww!!! oh goodie! im officaially immature.
still so funny! im really sorry im being so vaugue, but i cant thing of anything else to describe it.
lol this is sooo funny and i laughed so incredibly hard!
well it was sorta funny...i chucled a little (wow that sounded nerdy!) but nothng was that funny, i will keep reading because i do believe it will get better
three sequels...well i just read Lily and Jamees:Their Story of Love by you....the i read the sequel Catch My Fall and didn't particulary like it..so i might not read the last one...considering how things work out. this chaper was alright sorry im being so vague.
it wasnt that short! and who cares? it was goood! I laughed out loud about the part where Holly stuck the gum in Potter's hair. Then again, when she went to go throw a shoe at her head. That was gen-ious! That was a good chapter!
it was good..this was written a long time ago so im not even sure if ull get this review, i like it, and wonder where it will take me.
I found that you had a lot of sentences that state the same thing twice, (Eg-"If it wasn’t for her, I don’t know how I would have survived the first couple of years without her.") but like you said, this is out of date (I think I first read it when I was 10, unlass I'm mistaken)
Hahahaha!!!!!!! I laughed so hard at this comical little fic. A bit short, but you are making a part II so, I guess thats okay.
OMG!!!!!!!!!! Totally loved it!!! It was like the Princess Diaries books in sooooo many ways! I loved the creepy Snape!!!
Cute story. I laughed so much, mostly at the hissing and poor Jules. You're a great writer.
im still laughing about snape hissing...
