Reviews For Lily
Reviewer: ginnyp_harryp
Date: 10/02/06 12:20
Chapter: Midnight Rendezvous

i loved the ending!!

Reviewer: roman_soldier
Date: 09/28/06 21:40
Chapter: Midnight Rendezvous

I love your style of writing. I think you make your charactors seem a lot more realistic than most authors. Lily's also a lot less of a Mary-Jane than most stories. She does seem a little harsh though. I mean, give the guy a chance!

Reviewer: Twizzle_loves_Lupin
Date: 09/28/06 16:14
Chapter: Midnight Rendezvous

As funny as this story was, it doesn't seem to be your best... still, I do like this, and it's really cute. Betcha had alot of fun writing this...

I really liked the rumor about Snape James started. That was fun to read about. I also liked when Lily punched James... I was thinking, "You go girl!"

Still, like I said, fun and cute for a quick read- not a very in-depth, meticulosly written story. Pretty good- not the greatest. Nice job, and I'll keep an eye out for Part II!

Your Humble Reviewer,

Author's Response: The second [if MNFF accepts it, which I'm not sure they will] is a much better read.

Reviewer: Green Eyes
Date: 09/28/06 14:04
Chapter: Midnight Rendezvous

awesome story :)

Reviewer: potions_perfection
Date: 09/27/06 23:30
Chapter: Midnight Rendezvous

Eh... Not very good. Sorry. None of it was.

Author's Response: Trust me, I know what you mean. It really wasn't a story meant to portray my writing at it's best. Just some fun. Sorry you didn't enjoy it.

Reviewer: cedrics_chick
Date: 09/27/06 21:29
Chapter: Midnight Rendezvous

lol funy no wonder this story seemed so familiar I had alredy read it in fanfiction lol I just love u're stories

Reviewer: novella07
Date: 09/27/06 20:37
Chapter: Midnight Rendezvous

Wow, I feel like im copying everyone else, but oh well. Great story and I can't wait for the next part. Will you be writing it soon? I loved that last part. Totally hilarious.

Reviewer: liveonluna
Date: 09/27/06 19:24
Chapter: Midnight Rendezvous

Awesome! Keep up the great work! Please update soon , thanks!

Reviewer: quiet_passion
Date: 09/27/06 17:10
Chapter: Midnight Rendezvous

honestly, i loved it all. i loved it when holly was "commentating", especially when she was clapping. and i love how james was levitated into the room, and lily had a beater's bat. i can't wait for part 2!!!

Reviewer: goobersam9
Date: 09/27/06 17:07
Chapter: Midnight Rendezvous

Good! It's really cute! I can't wait for part II!

Reviewer: goobersam9
Date: 09/27/06 17:06
Chapter: Midnight Rendezvous

Good! that was really vute and I can't wait for part II!

Reviewer: AILily
Date: 09/27/06 16:41
Chapter: Midnight Rendezvous

AAAAAH! That's it? Awww. I was really enjoying it. Um, isn't there like 2 or 3 days betwwen exams and the last day? W/e. Nuttier Than A Fruitcake. You should make this a series. I looove it. Your a great writer. Cant wait for more!!

Reviewer: MagEd
Date: 09/27/06 16:00
Chapter: Midnight Rendezvous

I hope you know you are one of the best writers on this site! This story was without a doubt one of my favorites; one that I eagerly awaited updates for. I'm already excited to read this next installment of the crazy Lily you have created. I especially liked these last few chapters, and my all time favorite line of the story was when James asked Lily about Heartburn. I was laughing so hard when I read that, I think my brother was a little concerned. Wonderful job; I can't wait for more!

Reviewer: KitKat517
Date: 09/27/06 15:53
Chapter: Midnight Rendezvous

I can't wait to read Part II. Slughorn losing his temper probably would be very funny. It would definitely make me laugh. Great story, please hurry with Part II, thanks for updating so regularly, um. . .thatís all I think. . . I feel like I'm forgetting something . . . hmmm . . . no, I think thatís all. *light bulb appears above head* I remember now! I wanted to say that I love all the lists! My diary consists mostly of pages and pages of lists.

Reviewer: darkangelx02
Date: 09/27/06 15:30
Chapter: Midnight Rendezvous

i totally looking forward to part II !!! this chapter was hilarious...and holly is annoying me a bit. anyway please update soon!! ill be waiting!!!

Reviewer: balla
Date: 09/27/06 14:57
Chapter: Midnight Rendezvous

great story

Reviewer: California
Date: 09/27/06 14:12
Chapter: Midnight Rendezvous

wow this was great!! im so sad its over so u better hurry up on the next one lol PLEASE!!! really funny too...

Reviewer: charlotte_thwaite
Date: 09/27/06 12:26
Chapter: Midnight Rendezvous

I love it it makes me laugh so much the whole story was fab, you really gave her a personality and did i mention it made me laugh cos it did!!!

Reviewer: x_lily_evans_x
Date: 09/27/06 7:15
Chapter: Midnight Rendezvous

NOOOOOOO. Why did Lily reject James again!?

Author's Response: Oh, the rejections have only just begun. They're only in fourth year in this one.

Reviewer: hpfreak_3131
Date: 09/20/06 20:21
Chapter: Slug Club Debacle

omg thats funny!! keep going!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!

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