Crap, the hissing part gets me everytime.
And the whole Snape drowning innocent things is so funny ^_^
i liked the whole holly at night part, it reminded me of my friend.
Woohoo! I was looking forward to that part. They levitated him through the window. That seriously is funny. But my friend told me about it so much that it kind of sucked the laughter out of it.... Please make him act all nice and call her Lily on the train home or something! Then there can be a nice scene from his pov. I don't know how you are gunna do it, but I'm looking forward to it! Good Job! 10!!!
Haha, funny. Sorry, but I'm not going to review anymore until the final chapter, sorry. I find it a bit tiresome.
What do you think I'm gunna say this time? I"ll give you one guess.
Haha, he has gas, that's great. Remus is deluted, very funny!
Ahhh, ahhh ahhh, I'm making a very odd noise, aaaannnnddd, I SCREAM!!!!! WOOHOO!!!! AHAHA! GREAT!!!
Haha, funny. She fainted. This is getting better by the paragraph!
I'm quitting listing the funny things, all you need to know is that I like it.
Haha, funny, I'm so glad she pummeled the crap out of him. Oh, that was great about the closet thing. The staring contest was funny too. Swoosh swoosh swoosh, funny.
Very good, I love this story. Beating to deliver, funny.
Haha, funny, I was looking forward to that part. To bad she didn't punch him...lol. Great job!
Author's Response: Yes, well, there's always hope she will soon ;)
Haha, bubblegum thing was great. Oh, and the baseball bat mom thing was even better.
Oh, that's some really good writing right there. My friend told me to read this. She babbles on and on about fanfictions constantly, so I kind of know what happens later on. Any way, good job, I'll go read some more right now....
wow! great fic! its the first iv read of yours but its absolutely wicked! keep up the good work. lookin forward to your next chapter!
Wow. No wonder you are the number one author on MNFF. This is the first story I read when I registered for my account today, and I must say: you make a great first impression. Lily's wit makes me laugh and Potter's "charm" puts a smile on my face. The ending was great. It wasn't one of those "Happily Ever After" endings. It's going to take a lot for James to undo his horrible mistake for Part II. Now, I'm off to read "Nuttier Than A Fruitcake." Before I forget: this story is added to my favorites. You will make a great author one day. :)
Hehe, very nice.
I love how Lily actually was getting along with him, until he went back to being, well, him.
Funny story, I like it.
Now I'm off to find "Nuttier Than A Fruitcake"! =]
I love the books, but maybe a little more action in Part 2? Its going kinda slow. Part 2 is in the lists, but it has no chapters! (I didn't know that was possible!)
Author's Response: Neither did I. If the chapter doesnt show up soon, I'll PM a mod.
I liked this chapter ... I think my favourite of the whole fic was "Goodbye Cruel World"... That one was awesome. And even though you said this series is only a bit of fun, I have to say that it's my favourite of your writing - because it shows of your skill in a different way to super-long romances, and you really bring the humour side in! Anyway, just thought I'd let you know. I would say that I can't wait for Part II, but you're probably fed up of hearing it by now ...
