Reviews For Lily
Reviewer: Banana Shroogle
Date: 10/25/06 2:49
Chapter: Welcome To My Life

Crap, the hissing part gets me everytime.

And the whole Snape drowning innocent things is so funny ^_^

Reviewer: Augusta Wilfry
Date: 10/15/06 20:52
Chapter: Midnight Rendezvous

i liked the whole holly at night part, it reminded me of my friend.

Reviewer: Bertybottaholic
Date: 10/15/06 16:36
Chapter: Midnight Rendezvous

Woohoo! I was looking forward to that part. They levitated him through the window. That seriously is funny. But my friend told me about it so much that it kind of sucked the laughter out of it.... Please make him act all nice and call her Lily on the train home or something! Then there can be a nice scene from his pov. I don't know how you are gunna do it, but I'm looking forward to it! Good Job! 10!!!

Reviewer: Bertybottaholic
Date: 10/15/06 11:33
Chapter: If Slughorn Were My Grandfather

Haha, funny. Sorry, but I'm not going to review anymore until the final chapter, sorry. I find it a bit tiresome.

Reviewer: Bertybottaholic
Date: 10/13/06 22:14
Chapter: It All Falls Down

Haha, 10 as always....

Reviewer: Bertybottaholic
Date: 10/13/06 22:08
Chapter: Mrs. Logan Johnson

What do you think I'm gunna say this time? I"ll give you one guess.

Reviewer: Bertybottaholic
Date: 10/13/06 22:01
Chapter: Grinning Prats

Haha, he has gas, that's great. Remus is deluted, very funny!

Reviewer: Bertybottaholic
Date: 10/13/06 21:54
Chapter: Goodbye Cruel World

Ahhh, ahhh ahhh, I'm making a very odd noise, aaaannnnddd, I SCREAM!!!!! WOOHOO!!!! AHAHA! GREAT!!!

Reviewer: Bertybottaholic
Date: 10/13/06 21:46
Chapter: James and Jules

Haha, funny. She fainted. This is getting better by the paragraph!

Reviewer: Bertybottaholic
Date: 10/13/06 21:40
Chapter: Curiosity About The Cat

I'm quitting listing the funny things, all you need to know is that I like it.

Reviewer: Bertybottaholic
Date: 10/13/06 21:31
Chapter: Hall Brawl '74

Haha, funny, I'm so glad she pummeled the crap out of him. Oh, that was great about the closet thing. The staring contest was funny too. Swoosh swoosh swoosh, funny.

Reviewer: Bertybottaholic
Date: 10/13/06 21:22
Chapter: Ugly Duckling

Very good, I love this story. Beating to deliver, funny.

Reviewer: Bertybottaholic
Date: 10/13/06 19:40
Chapter: Hatred

Haha, funny, I was looking forward to that part. To bad she didn't punch Great job!

Author's Response: Yes, well, there's always hope she will soon ;)

Reviewer: Bertybottaholic
Date: 10/13/06 19:36
Chapter: Frizzy Hair

Haha, bubblegum thing was great. Oh, and the baseball bat mom thing was even better.

Reviewer: Bertybottaholic
Date: 10/13/06 19:29
Chapter: Welcome To My Life

Oh, that's some really good writing right there. My friend told me to read this. She babbles on and on about fanfictions constantly, so I kind of know what happens later on. Any way, good job, I'll go read some more right now....

Reviewer: silver_moon
Date: 10/12/06 14:38
Chapter: Welcome To My Life

wow! great fic! its the first iv read of yours but its absolutely wicked! keep up the good work. lookin forward to your next chapter!

Reviewer: HalfBloodPrincess7
Date: 10/12/06 11:57
Chapter: Midnight Rendezvous

Wow. No wonder you are the number one author on MNFF. This is the first story I read when I registered for my account today, and I must say: you make a great first impression. Lily's wit makes me laugh and Potter's "charm" puts a smile on my face. The ending was great. It wasn't one of those "Happily Ever After" endings. It's going to take a lot for James to undo his horrible mistake for Part II. Now, I'm off to read "Nuttier Than A Fruitcake." Before I forget: this story is added to my favorites. You will make a great author one day. :)

Reviewer: pheonixflame
Date: 10/09/06 21:54
Chapter: Midnight Rendezvous

Hehe, very nice.
I love how Lily actually was getting along with him, until he went back to being, well, him.
Funny story, I like it.
Now I'm off to find "Nuttier Than A Fruitcake"! =]

Reviewer: beautifulromantic
Date: 10/05/06 19:14
Chapter: Welcome To My Life

I love the books, but maybe a little more action in Part 2? Its going kinda slow. Part 2 is in the lists, but it has no chapters! (I didn't know that was possible!)

Author's Response: Neither did I. If the chapter doesnt show up soon, I'll PM a mod.

Reviewer: Pussycat123
Date: 10/04/06 11:50
Chapter: Midnight Rendezvous

I liked this chapter ... I think my favourite of the whole fic was "Goodbye Cruel World"... That one was awesome. And even though you said this series is only a bit of fun, I have to say that it's my favourite of your writing - because it shows of your skill in a different way to super-long romances, and you really bring the humour side in! Anyway, just thought I'd let you know. I would say that I can't wait for Part II, but you're probably fed up of hearing it by now ...

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