Amazing story! Cant wait for the sequel, any chance it might be soon so i can start it before my exams? Gota say it again AWESOME STORY!
thats very cool. making but why make harry and neville be enamies. thats going to be veery wierd.
I really liked this story, even though it was so short. I suddenly have a sneaking suspicion that the sequel might be under the category of Draco/Ginny. Am I right? Well, you don't have to say, but I'll check it out anyway.
good but how can Neville be a prefect if he's not a 5th year anymore.
I think the idea is amazing. I mean when I finished the chapter I was filled with awe.
i desided to review wen i read the hole thang . it was varey intresing. its nice to see theat we amaricanes arnt left out
Awesome story! This is sooooooo good. I'm like jumping from foot to foot in aticipation of the next chapter!
I think it's good, but Jen needs some flaws. Other then that, good story.
ur good and i like it but please do hurry up with the sequel
This is very good please.
I'm not trying to be mean or anything, but I just think that character Jen lacks the emotional depth of a real person. She's too perfect and I don't think it was a very good explanation of why she went to Hogwarts. I mean, isn't it a bording school? So it doesn't really matter if you moved, you could still go to your old school. Hopefully this story will get better though....
Ingore that last person. I like it it is cool and GO USA!
this story a little freak. i not very enjoyed it. bu i hope more great story from you.
ive never wrote a review, but i said the oath. the story is really good so far. got to read the rest!
Erm, you said Neville went over to his parents at the end but they're in St. Mungo's actually. Nice little story anyway - I'm going to check out your sequal now.
whats the sequel called?
Author's Response: Come and Stop the Rain
Great story, hope the sequel is too
Another great chapter! I can't wait to read the sequal! :)
Author's Response: thankies =3
grr...hurry up w/ the sequel, its gittin me anxious!!!!
Author's Response: IM tryin, im tryin!
nice chapter... hurry up with that sequal! lol 10-10 x3 brass
Author's Response: Im trying here people, but mugglenet hasnt accepted my submition and it has been in queue for forever! man it is hard to write with your fingers taped together... (i jamed my finger really badly and it is all black and blue and swollen, ewwww...)