ok, magical creatures, I get it now...sorry...didn't read the other reviews.
oh, ok, phoenix song.
oh...my...gosh. This is most certainly the best chapter so far. You are an amazing writer...straight into my favorites.
interesting perspective, though I'm curious what this has to do with the previous poem. beautiful wording.
wow....powerful. The title caught my eye as I was browsing, terrific job.
I really love these poems! Did you write them yourself? Cuz they are just plain down amazing! I hope there's more soon! You write beautifully!
xoxo
PG15
Author's Response: aww, thank you!!!!!!! Yes, I do write these myself, and i am soooo happy that people like them.
Wow, I thought this was amazing. At first I wasn't sure what it was about (or how it related to HP), but even without knowing it was a phoenix's song, it just seemed to relate to the world as a whole. My favourite line must be "will fall away,like so many wrappings,insignificant. Can you hear it? " Ok, so spacing got a little messed up there, but I just love it. I'm not sure why, I think a lot of it has to do with the seemingly thrown away word "insignificant", because one is able to glean so much more from it if they think about it. Also, I love how you ended on a rhetorical question. Great job!
Author's Response: Actually, in the first place i meant it to be about the world, but that hasn't much to do with HP so i switched it around a little.
Very very good! Awesomeness! 1000000000000000000/10! GO YOU!
Author's Response: Yup! Go me! :P
COOL, 10000000000000000000000000/10 TO BE FRANK!
Author's Response: Thanky-poo, and I think I should clarify what this is about, in case pplz dont know, so okay every poem will be about one magical creature. The first one was the pheonix, and as a preview, the second one will be a dragon. Happy Friday, and thanx again for reviewin!:)
Well after reading the other reviews, ther's nothing else i can say!! It is a great piece of poetry, although i can't see what it has to do with harry potter!
Author's Response: It was sort of supposed to be about pheonix song, but I guess I wansn't too clear on that:P
oohh I like it! :) really good, and really worth a 10!
Author's Response: Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
To put it in one word, BEAUTIFUL, RHYTHMIC, EXCELLENT, WONDERFUL, MIND-BLOWING, UNBELIEVABLE, BRILLIANT, EXCEPTIONAL, ADMIRABLE, OUTSTANDING! Are you Rowling in disguise? You can reply at sparsh_fo@yahoo.co.in!P.S thats too many words!
Author's Response: Lol. Nice use of adjectives, you should write a poem yourself. Thank you so much for reviewing!
