I love it. one thing though, ive always thought that james was a seeker, like harry, but in almost every fanfic ive read hes been a chaser. and that leves me confused. but other than that, great! amasing!
I like this story. It's cute.
beautiful, awesome, perfect!
why im reviewing again? I have no clue. You should write more stories. Im sure theyd be great! I loved the good girls are bad girls who dont get caught. I thought it was so cute! you are an amazing author!PLEASE WRITE MORE STORIES!!!
Omg! I love it! your such a good author!
The orphans thing was every stupid.....hahaha.....I just pretended u didn't write that.....the storys better that way!!!!!
But sirius-ly it was really stupid of u to put that there!!!!
Sorry but I must speck my mind
this was so cool!
keep it up girly! or... um... boy..ey.. if you're a guy that is
YAY!! Very nice, I have to say.... I loved the last few paragraphs in particular.... Good job!
that story was great, very cute,and lily was great and sirius and remus...great...you captured their charecters magnificently....and, uhhh write more stories too.
I loved this! It was so cute and that is one of my favorite songs! James was so romantic. I loved the good girls are bad girls that don't get caught line. Too true. Great job.
Hey. The story was very sweet, I really liked it, I was singing along with the lyrics, but I skipped the high notes that may shatter glass. Keep it up, hope to see more of your work.