Reviewer: chan
Date: 09/16/06 9:43
Chapter: Who Deserves a Happy Ending?

excellent. keep it up.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Ginzig
Date: 09/16/06 8:14
Chapter: Every Time You Say Goodbye...

Wow, that was quite torturous for both couples. I agree with Ginny though, he can't ask her to wait for him and not date anyone else if he's not willing for them to be a couple. Though, I think she only said all that stuff about dating other guys to frustrate Harry and make him jealous. Good chapter, looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Well, life ain't about rainbows and kittens all the time. These poor couples have a lot to deal with! Ginny makes a good point - you can't have it both ways, can you.

Reviewer: sair_bears
Date: 09/16/06 7:14
Chapter: Every Time You Say Goodbye...

YAY its up, i actualy squealed when the page opened. Great chapter, i loved it!!! It was really intresting reading aboout the couples relationships , i wish ginny had got back with harry, hes a bit dumb. um, cant wait to read the next chapter :P

Author's Response: I knew you'd be excited. :) I'm glad you loved it. Yeah, that Harry's just trying really hard to be noble...

Reviewer: HPchicA
Date: 09/16/06 3:15
Chapter: Every Time You Say Goodbye...

Wow a remarkable chapter once again. I was getting quite frusterated with the emails after emails telling me that the chapter was up, only to find that once I clicked on the link, it wasnt validated. Might I suggesf for you to try putting this story on a webiste such as fictionalley or fanfiction . net? They have far less restrictions, and I would assume that validation would be a lot quicker then. But, back to the story. I loved how Ron and Hermione were still able to bicker even though they were nearly naked. LOL. And the Ginny/Harry moments were spectacular. I give this chapter an A+++ lol.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Yes, I've considered posting elsewhere but haven't yet. I understand your frustration, though. Meanwhile, I'm glad you like it. Hr/R are still...who they are, right? They argue. And H/G are really having a time of it. So much to deal with. I'm glad you enjoyed all the elements of the chapter.

Reviewer: MagEd
Date: 09/16/06 0:01
Chapter: Every Time You Say Goodbye...

A wonderful chapter, I was so excited when I saw that it had been updated. You are such an excellent writer, I'm on pins and needles waiting to find out what happens next!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm happy you're enjoying the suspense.

Reviewer: sair_bears
Date: 09/14/06 3:59
Chapter: Every Time You Say Goodbye...

Okay this is getting past a joke! Have admin got a grudy against you ir what , hasnt this happened to at least your last 3 chapters? Ode to Hob Nobs took like a month the be read , i/we the readers cant wait that long :'( Have you thought about posting on a diffrent site? anyway the only reason we get like this is because we love your story sooo much , well i know i do - well hope its up soon.. cant wait to read the next chapter :)

Author's Response: Yes, you are correct. Chapters 12 and 13 took about quite a while to be posted, with many deletions along the way. This one's only been waiting for a few weeks, with the last attempted submission a week ago (but it was deleted three times before that). To be honest, it does feel like someone doesn't want this story to get posted but then, I'm sure I'm just paranoid. I'm sorry for your (and others) frustration, I really am! It's just as frustrating to me to get continually deleted. I have considered posting elsewhere but right now, this is it. So, we all wait. :)

Reviewer: monteozarka
Date: 09/13/06 22:54
Chapter: Every Time You Say Goodbye...

I really wish that they'd send us the "OMGNEWCHAPTER" email AFTER it's been verified. Raising our hopes and dashing them immediately... It's not fair, I tell ya. =(

Oh well. *twiddles thumbs expectantly*

Author's Response: I know what you mean - I get those, too. Frustrating...

Reviewer: CaseFace101
Date: 09/13/06 22:01
Chapter: Every Time You Say Goodbye...

ahh...i can't wait any longer!!....i want to read it now...sorry but i am not a very patient person hehe

Author's Response: I, too, am impatient for it to be posted. I understand. :) I hope you won't be disappointed...

Reviewer: Peevseywashere
Date: 09/13/06 16:35
Chapter: Every Time You Say Goodbye...

see now that you put it that way about teh propasal i see it makes a lot of sense. i keep forgetting how young they are, since they act so mature.

oh well, i can dream.

can't wait till thes gets validated :)

Author's Response: They definately are more mature than the average Muggle (this is why wizards become adults at 17), or even most wizrds, but they're still too young for marriage. Keep your fingers crossed that ch 14 gets validated - it's been deleted from the queue 3 times now. Thanks for all your reviews!

Reviewer: hp_noey
Date: 09/13/06 15:44
Chapter: Discovery and Confession


Author's Response: Thanks! Hope you keep reading...

Reviewer: Mystical_Child
Date: 09/11/06 21:43
Chapter: Every Time You Say Goodbye...

AHH, so basically i just found this fic today and read it non stop til i got hear...and i have to say this is way up in my top favorites so far!!!

Its great!!


Author's Response: Excellent - glad I've got you hooked! I hope you like the rest of it as much.

Reviewer: potterholicxxo
Date: 09/10/06 16:30
Chapter: Ode to Hob Nobs

cant wait to read the next chapterrrrrrrr, i think i've already posted but i love this one. your really good. i can't wait to start posting my own!

Author's Response: Thanks - hopefully the next chapter will be validated soon.

Reviewer: chan
Date: 09/10/06 6:17
Chapter: Who Deserves a Happy Ending?

best send off aunt petunia could give 2 harry. good work.keep it up

Author's Response: Thank you - I'm quite pleased with how that conversation went, too.

Reviewer: dumbles
Date: 09/09/06 20:57
Chapter: Ode to Hob Nobs

Incredible chapter. I know it sounds corny... but it brought tears to my eyes several times. Very emotional, I guess I can't really write any more since I'm feeling very emotional and I don't like to write when I'm emotional. Amazing chapter please update soon.

Author's Response: I wanted to add - sometimes writing when you're emotional is good, because you're less apt to be guarded, and you may write more from the heart. Sometimes, that works for me, other times not. Either way, I'm glad you like the story and I hope you continue to do so.

Reviewer: dumbles
Date: 09/09/06 20:57
Chapter: Ode to Hob Nobs

Incredible chapter. I know it sounds corny... but it brought tears to my eyes several times. Very emotional, I guess I can't really write any more since I'm feeling very emotional and I don't like to write when I'm emotional. Amazing chapter please update soon.

Author's Response: I'm pleased to have brought out such an emotional response - some may think it's corny, but I don't. It's an emotional story so I'm doing something right! I'm glad you're liking it - thanks for your reviews!

Reviewer: dumbles
Date: 09/09/06 19:54
Chapter: What Money Can Buy

okay so i know i still have one more chapter to go before i'm caught up, but i'd just like to say i love this story so much. this was the first story i ever read at mugglenet, and its what kept me on mnff because its so good. i don't think i've ever reviewed before because it took me months on mnff before i started reviewing, so i'm sorry i never have but i always review so from now on i will. the reason i'm not caught up is because i was away all summer, but now i'm catching up on my first fic ever on all sites, not just mnff. great chapter, i loved harry's generosity and how he immediately knew who and what to take care of in his will. its really hard thinking about a situation where you receive so much wealth rather than the people you love. ginny and ron - what a scene, great writing. excellent chapter, i really liked it.

Author's Response: Don't apologize - thanks for taking the time to review. I'm glad you liked it so much you had to stop before you were finished so you could write that. Thank you for your kind words.

Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 09/05/06 23:09
Chapter: What Money Can Buy

ok... this just turned into the best fic i have read on MNFF! wow i have no idea what to say... It is like a stephen king novel with all the different scenes and plot devices. THis is absolutely fantastic!!! Im glad to see that you took this as far as you did. I was concerned in the first few chapters that this was going to be too focused on the "professors" rating... if you know what i mean. But this truely brilliant. Im haveing so much fun reading this. Truely well done!!!!

Author's Response: Wow - that's great! I'm so glad you've enjoyed it (and read the whole thing!). I honestly think it's getting better because I have this great Beta who kicks my butt and makes me work hard instead of taking the easy route, gives me *incredible* ideas, plus, he loves the story so he wants it to be great, too. I re-read the first couple chapters and there's a lot I don't like, but the one that hasn't been posted yet is one of my favorites. I just hope I continue to impress, entertain and get better. Thanks for the many thoughtful reviews.

Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 09/05/06 22:28
Chapter: Everybody Knows Something but Nobody Knows Everything

wow i really have no idea how to respond to this one in the least! Everything i can think of was covered in this chapter. From sorrow, to love, to brilliance, to humor. I t was absolutely all there. You have fassioned yourself one of the best fics i have read! the emotions run deep... and you arent even finished yet. I am thoroughly impressed. I look forward to reading even more. Keep up the phenomenal work!

Author's Response: Thanks - it's getting better with time, I think. I like to explore all the emotions these characters are dealing with - life is more than black and white, there are many, many shades of grey.

Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 09/05/06 21:36
Chapter: ...And many more.

truely fantastic. I really am enjoying reading this story!!

Author's Response: Excellent - thanks again!

Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 09/05/06 20:59
Chapter: Happy Birthday

good point!... (i have a feeling this is going to be a very long fic! hehe)

Author's Response: Um, yeah. Longer than I thought it would be. Hopefully people won't get bored with it.

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