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Reviewer: Dora_
Date: 05/28/06 7:35
Chapter: Epilogue

Wow. Brilliant! I loved it. This chapter was so beutiful!!

Reviewer: brokenhearted
Date: 05/18/06 13:20
Chapter: Parts I & II

Wow! You must have gone through something like this before. It seems impossible to write something like this with no experience. It's too amazing.

Reviewer: liliyflower
Date: 05/17/06 15:40
Chapter: Epilogue

wow....that was......breath taking....like a long poem............

Reviewer: HeRmYgInS
Date: 05/10/06 13:32
Chapter: Epilogue

Wow, that was amazing, great job!

Reviewer: Venetian
Date: 04/28/06 15:06
Chapter: Epilogue

great story! nice resolve

Reviewer: BlackMagic
Date: 04/28/06 9:43
Chapter: Epilogue

Aww... oh that's so sweet. I cried when I read James' speech about the 'old Lily' and I'm so happy that everything worked out. That was really really good, 5 stars out of 5. *hugs* that was incredibly good.

Reviewer: BlackMagic
Date: 04/28/06 9:42
Chapter: Epilogue

Aww... oh that's so sweet. I cried when I read James' speech about the 'old Lily' and I'm so happy that everything worked out. That was really really good, 5 stars out of 5. *hugs* that was incredibly good.

Reviewer: hpfanforlife
Date: 04/05/06 14:52
Chapter: Epilogue

That was perfect!! I'm sad it's over =[ Don't stop writing, whatever you do! =p

Reviewer: Zetera
Date: 04/05/06 10:20
Chapter: Epilogue

Wow, that was a beautiful ending. I was shocked to see that the story was over, but it was so powerful it would have lost its intensity if you had made it longer. This is definitely one of my favourite stories on this site - thank you for writing it. 10.

Reviewer: apotterfan247
Date: 03/26/06 23:23
Chapter: Parts V & VI

very good story. I can't wait to see how thing work out for Lily and James.

Reviewer: Zetera
Date: 03/26/06 23:08
Chapter: Parts V & VI

I got a shock when James Disapparated, I didn't expect that! Brilliantly done; tears came to my eyes during the dream sequence.

Reviewer: Zetera
Date: 03/26/06 22:53
Chapter: Parts III & IV

Beautiful writing, you definitely have a way with words! I though Lily's emotions were captured perfectly, it was though I could feel what she felt, and I wanted to scream in despair. 10

Reviewer: Zetera
Date: 03/26/06 22:32
Chapter: Parts I & II

When I saw that this story had 21 reads, and 5 stars, I had to read it. I see now that it is well deserved. Throughout the entire chapter a voice in my head kept yelling - 'this person can write'. There are so few people that really, really can. I love how the entire chapter was punctuated with stange yet connected thoughts from Lily. Amazing imagery, dialogue, and characterisation. I really can't fault it. And I don't think I've ever read anything like this before. Such an interesting approach. 10 of course.

Reviewer: Shelly Wonder
Date: 03/25/06 10:23
Chapter: Parts V & VI

Awesomeness. =)
That was a humongous-ly big cliffhanger, btw. Hehe. When's the next chapter coming up?

Reviewer: Dora_
Date: 03/23/06 13:07
Chapter: Parts V & VI

Amazing story! It's one of the best ones I've ever read! I hope you will put in a new chapter soon, I can't wait!

Reviewer: hpfanforlife
Date: 03/14/06 16:25
Chapter: Parts V & VI

How on earth can you write so well? Every chapter so far has been incredible - definitely the best I've seen on this site. Keep up the great work!! =)

Author's Response: Wow, I really have no answer for your question, LOL. I guess I write this story because there's a personal experience behind it. That's why I put my heart into writing it. :) Your comment cheered me up too! Thank you so much for staying with this story.

Reviewer: themodernmarauders
Date: 03/13/06 2:03
Chapter: Parts V & VI

Your stories really good. I love the plot cause it's totally original and i haven't read anything like it yet. So please hurry with the next chapter you left it on a really big cliff-hanger

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I admit that because I didn't get that much of a response in the last chapter, I was worried whether it was any good. But your comment cheered me up. :) I know that I left the last chapter in a cliffie, but I couldn't resist! I usually don't use cliffies. At least the next chapter is the last one...

Reviewer: themodernmarauders
Date: 03/11/06 4:51
Chapter: Parts III & IV

Wow, I love your story - it's so beautifully written. I really liked how you made your characters seem so real and their emotions so intense (especially Lily's) Can't wait to read the new chapter...

Author's Response: Thank you so much. It's a pretty intense story to write. Sometimes I have to take a breather! But I really love writing, and this story is the first that really shows how my writing style has changed from three years ago (when I first started writing FF). I hope you like the new chapter, which should be approved soon.

Reviewer: Sarah Kavanagh
Date: 03/08/06 17:03
Chapter: Parts III & IV

Wow, brilliant... So marvelously written, beautiful.. I loved that, and I actually felt really sad for her at the beginning, you know how to pull at the old heartstrings anyway...

Author's Response: Thank you very much, I'm flattered! I'm happy you're enjoying this story. I hope you'll like it's ending, which will be posted soon...

Reviewer: Shelly Wonder
Date: 02/20/06 18:21
Chapter: Parts III & IV

Aww, this was so sweet! =) I loved it. I was wondering where the heck James was in the first Chapter, but the second Chapter made perfect sense.
Also. I love the way you portrayed Lily, even though that's a bit too cold, even for her. But you made it so real... I just loved it! =) 100/10!

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