Reviews For Percy in a Pyramid
Reviewer: april_fools_fun
Date: 10/09/08 17:26
Chapter: Percy in a Pyramid

this really cheered me up, it was that funny! (this is saying something, as my bike "myseriously vanished" little over an hour ago)

Reviewer: witch6
Date: 01/15/08 16:18
Chapter: Percy in a Pyramid

Wow! It was nice. I wouldn't say I was rolling with laughter after I read your story, but there definitely was a pleasant smile on my face. I was going to leave without leaving a review if I hadn't seen some of your negative reviews. I agree with you on that- if you cannot say something constructive, don't bother at all. What problem I think people have with your fic is that it is short, and when you seem to start making an impression on the reader's mind, the story is already over. I understand that this is a missing scene from POA and so you cannot extend it further, your best shot would be to maybe show a few scenes before this- something about Percy do something really irritating or something.. Then your story, I feel, would have a more lasting impression on the reader. All in all, I would say I really like your work- your humour isn't something for which we need to leave our brains behind; we can take them along and enjoy some intelligent laughter, small maybe, but intelligent. :)

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 08/06/07 22:07
Chapter: Percy in a Pyramid

*laugh* Great job! I love how you characterized Percy; he was the know-it-all disciplinarian we all love. Fred and George were represented wonderfully, too. I should say that I wish Fred and George had managed the task, but Percy is my favorite Weasley. *dodges flying tomatoes* Great job! :D

Reviewer: Moony 62442
Date: 10/29/06 9:11
Chapter: Percy in a Pyramid

I wondered about the story behind that statement... Excellent! Well done!

Reviewer: mynameismary
Date: 09/27/06 9:54
Chapter: Percy in a Pyramid

shame. they should have silenced percy before trying to lock him in. Fred still had his wand didn't he?

Reviewer: Little_hoole3333
Date: 06/30/06 10:29
Chapter: Percy in a Pyramid

I liked this story! I don't see how anyone couldn't! =]

Reviewer: chislarina
Date: 05/23/06 1:54
Chapter: Percy in a Pyramid

that is pretty good

Reviewer: petiteloupegarou
Date: 02/13/06 14:36
Chapter: Percy in a Pyramid

Ha ha. it's pretty funny. ; )

Reviewer: Lady Wolfine
Date: 11/27/05 14:08
Chapter: Percy in a Pyramid

I enjoyed reading this, and frankly, I wanted Percy to get stuck in the pyramid. I had been having a bad day when I read your piece and it cheered me up. Thank you!

Reviewer: phoenix_fire
Date: 02/28/05 17:15
Chapter: Percy in a Pyramid

What do they think they're doing, giving this such a low rating? I love it! Really funny!

Reviewer: WhichGuyNow
Date: 02/04/05 12:20
Chapter: Percy in a Pyramid

Well I liked it, it was cute and its not something that has been done before (at least to my knowledge)I loved the way you portrayed the twins and Percy, I hope yuo write other humor fanfics, Smooches ~bri

Reviewer: starkadder
Date: 01/09/05 8:46
Chapter: Percy in a Pyramid

It's pretty good, but for some reason, something about it bothers me....

Reviewer: oli_potter
Date: 01/03/05 13:28
Chapter: Percy in a Pyramid

vrey good

Reviewer: Zetera
Date: 12/06/04 4:46
Chapter: Percy in a Pyramid

I'm surprised it got some bad reviews,seeing as it's just a take on an undeveloped scene in PoA.I liked it!

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad to see someone liked it enough to leave a decent review! Cheers! -- Loki

Reviewer: Goy
Date: 12/05/04 22:09
Chapter: Percy in a Pyramid

Wow, hedwigs queen actually posted a bad review! Theres a first! If Hedwigs queen didnt like it, thats saying something. I am sorry, but I agree with her! Love, goy

Author's Response: So you didn't like it? That's fine. Next time, however, when trying to justify your opinion, please don't use a review I am far, far from impressed by. Oh, and the use of apostrophes makes you a whole lot more credible in my humble opinion. Cheers!

Author's Response: Oh, I feel a well, whiny saying these things in hindsight. I crave constructive criticism, but all constructive criticism is well-supported. I don't mind if you don't like something, but please at least have curtesy to explain your opinion if you do review. Cheers! -- Loki

Reviewer: Hedwigs Queen
Date: 12/04/04 20:09
Chapter: Percy in a Pyramid

It sucked

Author's Response: Apparently you have no purpose but to insult me, which is more than a little irritating. Next time you make an assertion, please try to back it up with FACTS; just a two word flame is not remotely helpful.

Reviewer: Monique07
Date: 12/03/04 16:03
Chapter: Percy in a Pyramid

Great descriptions! The plot was a tad bit wishy-washy but other than that it was very well written! Congratulations! Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks -- cc and encouragement in one! Thanks for the review! Cheers! -- Loki

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