Reviews For Percy in a Pyramid
Reviewer: april_fools_fun
Date: 10/09/08 17:26
Chapter: Percy in a Pyramid

this really cheered me up, it was that funny! (this is saying something, as my bike "myseriously vanished" little over an hour ago)

Reviewer: witch6
Date: 01/15/08 16:18
Chapter: Percy in a Pyramid

Wow! It was nice. I wouldn't say I was rolling with laughter after I read your story, but there definitely was a pleasant smile on my face. I was going to leave without leaving a review if I hadn't seen some of your negative reviews. I agree with you on that- if you cannot say something constructive, don't bother at all. What problem I think people have with your fic is that it is short, and when you seem to start making an impression on the reader's mind, the story is already over. I understand that this is a missing scene from POA and so you cannot extend it further, your best shot would be to maybe show a few scenes before this- something about Percy do something really irritating or something.. Then your story, I feel, would have a more lasting impression on the reader. All in all, I would say I really like your work- your humour isn't something for which we need to leave our brains behind; we can take them along and enjoy some intelligent laughter, small maybe, but intelligent. :)

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 08/06/07 22:07
Chapter: Percy in a Pyramid

*laugh* Great job! I love how you characterized Percy; he was the know-it-all disciplinarian we all love. Fred and George were represented wonderfully, too. I should say that I wish Fred and George had managed the task, but Percy is my favorite Weasley. *dodges flying tomatoes* Great job! :D

Reviewer: Moony 62442
Date: 10/29/06 9:11
Chapter: Percy in a Pyramid

I wondered about the story behind that statement... Excellent! Well done!

Reviewer: mynameismary
Date: 09/27/06 9:54
Chapter: Percy in a Pyramid

shame. they should have silenced percy before trying to lock him in. Fred still had his wand didn't he?

Reviewer: Little_hoole3333
Date: 06/30/06 10:29
Chapter: Percy in a Pyramid

I liked this story! I don't see how anyone couldn't! =]

Reviewer: chislarina
Date: 05/23/06 1:54
Chapter: Percy in a Pyramid

that is pretty good

Reviewer: petiteloupegarou
Date: 02/13/06 14:36
Chapter: Percy in a Pyramid

Ha ha. it's pretty funny. ; )

Reviewer: Lady Wolfine
Date: 11/27/05 14:08
Chapter: Percy in a Pyramid

I enjoyed reading this, and frankly, I wanted Percy to get stuck in the pyramid. I had been having a bad day when I read your piece and it cheered me up. Thank you!

Reviewer: phoenix_fire
Date: 02/28/05 17:15
Chapter: Percy in a Pyramid

What do they think they're doing, giving this such a low rating? I love it! Really funny!

Reviewer: WhichGuyNow
Date: 02/04/05 12:20
Chapter: Percy in a Pyramid

Well I liked it, it was cute and its not something that has been done before (at least to my knowledge)I loved the way you portrayed the twins and Percy, I hope yuo write other humor fanfics, Smooches ~bri

Reviewer: starkadder
Date: 01/09/05 8:46
Chapter: Percy in a Pyramid

It's pretty good, but for some reason, something about it bothers me....

Reviewer: oli_potter
Date: 01/03/05 13:28
Chapter: Percy in a Pyramid

vrey good

Reviewer: Zetera
Date: 12/06/04 4:46
Chapter: Percy in a Pyramid

I'm surprised it got some bad reviews,seeing as it's just a take on an undeveloped scene in PoA.I liked it!

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad to see someone liked it enough to leave a decent review! Cheers! -- Loki

Reviewer: Goy
Date: 12/05/04 22:09
Chapter: Percy in a Pyramid

Wow, hedwigs queen actually posted a bad review! Theres a first! If Hedwigs queen didnt like it, thats saying something. I am sorry, but I agree with her! Love, goy

Author's Response: So you didn't like it? That's fine. Next time, however, when trying to justify your opinion, please don't use a review I am far, far from impressed by. Oh, and the use of apostrophes makes you a whole lot more credible in my humble opinion. Cheers!

Author's Response: Oh, I feel a well, whiny saying these things in hindsight. I crave constructive criticism, but all constructive criticism is well-supported. I don't mind if you don't like something, but please at least have curtesy to explain your opinion if you do review. Cheers! -- Loki

Reviewer: Hedwigs Queen
Date: 12/04/04 20:09
Chapter: Percy in a Pyramid

It sucked

Author's Response: Apparently you have no purpose but to insult me, which is more than a little irritating. Next time you make an assertion, please try to back it up with FACTS; just a two word flame is not remotely helpful.

Reviewer: Monique07
Date: 12/03/04 16:03
Chapter: Percy in a Pyramid

Great descriptions! The plot was a tad bit wishy-washy but other than that it was very well written! Congratulations! Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks -- cc and encouragement in one! Thanks for the review! Cheers! -- Loki

You must login (register) to review.
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.

We have stories and authors in this archive.


Choose Theme:
Put Asunder by Equinox Chick 6th-7th Years
As a Slytherin Sorted two years after the Battle, Astoria has never been popular...
A Story for Charlie by Darkness Enshrouds 3rd-5th Years
A boy. A girl. A budding romance. If only things never got complicated... (Violence...
Scorpius Malfoy and the Salem Witch Trials by Hotrav 3rd-5th Years
The third story in the Scorpius Malfoy and the Sins of the Fathers series. Lucius...
My Troubled Tyrant by Belledeg Professors
Keedie Dante has experienced many amazing things during her time at Hogwarts...
His and Hers by Acacia Carter 3rd-5th Years
In a perfect world, Neville and Hannah's wedding would go off without a hitch...
All This Waiting For The Sky To Fall by Dawnie 1st-2nd Years
They found her body - broken, bleeding, face filled with signs of pain and fear...
Sanguini, the Vampire by teh tarik 6th-7th Years
Vampirism is the persistence and the perpetuity of the body, a madness of the...
Lost and Found by ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor 3rd-5th Years
When Tracey Davis's financial security was a casualty of war, her family is...