this really cheered me up, it was that funny! (this is saying something, as my bike "myseriously vanished" little over an hour ago)
Wow! It was nice. I wouldn't say I was rolling with laughter after I read your story, but there definitely was a pleasant smile on my face. I was going to leave without leaving a review if I hadn't seen some of your negative reviews. I agree with you on that- if you cannot say something constructive, don't bother at all. What problem I think people have with your fic is that it is short, and when you seem to start making an impression on the reader's mind, the story is already over. I understand that this is a missing scene from POA and so you cannot extend it further, your best shot would be to maybe show a few scenes before this- something about Percy do something really irritating or something.. Then your story, I feel, would have a more lasting impression on the reader. All in all, I would say I really like your work- your humour isn't something for which we need to leave our brains behind; we can take them along and enjoy some intelligent laughter, small maybe, but intelligent. :)
*laugh* Great job! I love how you characterized Percy; he was the know-it-all disciplinarian we all love. Fred and George were represented wonderfully, too. I should say that I wish Fred and George had managed the task, but Percy is my favorite Weasley. *dodges flying tomatoes* Great job! :D
I wondered about the story behind that statement... Excellent! Well done!
shame. they should have silenced percy before trying to lock him in. Fred still had his wand didn't he?
I liked this story! I don't see how anyone couldn't! =]
that is pretty good
Ha ha. it's pretty funny. ; )
I enjoyed reading this, and frankly, I wanted Percy to get stuck in the pyramid. I had been having a bad day when I read your piece and it cheered me up. Thank you!
What do they think they're doing, giving this such a low rating? I love it! Really funny!
Well I liked it, it was cute and its not something that has been done before (at least to my knowledge)I loved the way you portrayed the twins and Percy, I hope yuo write other humor fanfics, Smooches ~bri
It's pretty good, but for some reason, something about it bothers me....
I'm surprised it got some bad reviews,seeing as it's just a take on an undeveloped scene in PoA.I liked it!
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad to see someone liked it enough to leave a decent review! Cheers! -- Loki
Wow, hedwigs queen actually posted a bad review! Theres a first! If Hedwigs queen didnt like it, thats saying something. I am sorry, but I agree with her! Love, goy
Author's Response: So you didn't like it? That's fine. Next time, however, when trying to justify your opinion, please don't use a review I am far, far from impressed by. Oh, and the use of apostrophes makes you a whole lot more credible in my humble opinion. Cheers!
Author's Response: Oh, I feel a well, whiny saying these things in hindsight. I crave constructive criticism, but all constructive criticism is well-supported. I don't mind if you don't like something, but please at least have curtesy to explain your opinion if you do review. Cheers! -- Loki
Author's Response: Apparently you have no purpose but to insult me, which is more than a little irritating. Next time you make an assertion, please try to back it up with FACTS; just a two word flame is not remotely helpful.
Great descriptions! The plot was a tad bit wishy-washy but other than that it was very well written! Congratulations! Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks -- cc and encouragement in one! Thanks for the review! Cheers! -- Loki