Reviewer: Facetious Pheonix
Date: 07/30/06 19:16
Chapter: Betraying Alarm and Alarming Betrayal

Bloody brilliant! I LOVE your story so far, I can't wait until the next chapter is up! This is what I always imagined Lily and James would be like, you got their charaters spot on. I'm so jealous; you're a wonderful writer, you kept me entertained the whole way through. You've obviously got a lot of imagination as well to come up with such storylines and to make it all work so well. I really am jealous. Did I mention that already? But anyways, thank you for the story, I've been reading it for hours and it's almost half one in the morning now (that's how hooked I am!). Love love LOVED it!!!

Reviewer: Chase Potter
Date: 07/24/06 22:04
Chapter: Betraying Alarm and Alarming Betrayal

AHHHH wheres James!?!?!? really good fanfic. update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Crazy_Shopper03
Date: 07/07/06 23:54
Chapter: Betraying Alarm and Alarming Betrayal

Omg! that was a really good chapter! well i mean it's bad james is missing but the story was really,really,really great! why didn't Dumbledore stop remus with lily and sirius?and why'd he stop lily anyways? she's not friends with james is she?when he said that we haven't found Mr. Potter did he mean they had accounted for all the students except james, including peter and snape?very good chapter but i can't believe you left a cliffhanger!!! it's driving me mad! please,please,please,please update!!! i kno u wrote the next chapter b/c u tried to enter it over a month ago!!! whats takin so long? pleaseeeeeeeee update!!!!!!!! This is my favorite story ever!!!!!! please update!!!!please!!!! soon!!!!update!!!please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Crazy_Shopper03
Date: 07/07/06 23:36
Chapter: Unspoken Wisdom

Whats it mean "you've been giving second chances to the wrong people"? who's she giving a second chance?gah!! this is confusing!!! very good story by the way!

Reviewer: Griffindorgirl05
Date: 07/01/06 10:53
Chapter: Betraying Alarm and Alarming Betrayal

plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz update soon plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz

Reviewer: sophie potter
Date: 06/06/06 16:56
Chapter: Betraying Alarm and Alarming Betrayal

this is really really good! i cant wait until lily finally falls for james....

Reviewer: Griffindorgirl05
Date: 06/06/06 15:28
Chapter: Betraying Alarm and Alarming Betrayal

plz plz plz plz update soon

Reviewer: The_Dark_Lord
Date: 06/02/06 14:59
Chapter: Betraying Alarm and Alarming Betrayal

I Really Like THis Story. When is the next chapter coming

Reviewer: Es21232
Date: 06/01/06 14:57
Chapter: Betraying Alarm and Alarming Betrayal

OMG!!!!! WAS IT THOSE DUMB DEATH -*wait...fixing name* LYING DIRTBAG B***ES!!!!!!!!! WHAT DID THEY DO TO JAMES!!!!!!!! I WILL KILL THEM IF THEY HURT HIM!!!!!!!!!!! 10/10 - please update soon!!!

Reviewer: Es21232
Date: 05/31/06 19:06
Chapter: Even with Hexington

i agree with Sophia Mack on her question, which i definitely want to know the answer to... The Eldest - in my school library!!! i almost read it once, but then my friend wanted to read it so i let her have it, and i never went to get it when she finished. but i will read it!!! 10/10
p.s.- the chapter is not cursed, its the mods for not accepting it the first time...!

Reviewer: Es21232
Date: 05/31/06 18:50
Chapter: Unspoken Wisdom

hahahaha.... "Diggory sucks"... love it 10/10 awesometasticalness *sorry-madeup word...*

Reviewer: Es21232
Date: 05/31/06 17:44
Chapter: Griffindor Troubles

wow... more than once again: 10/10

Reviewer: Es21232
Date: 05/31/06 17:40
Chapter: Never forget, never forgive?

lol... nice ants comment.... *2 thumbs up*. I love your story!!! 10/10 - R.I.P. ANTS!!!

Reviewer: Es21232
Date: 05/31/06 17:33
Chapter: Unicorn Fountain

awwww... James is so sweet... 10/10

Reviewer: Thestral45
Date: 05/31/06 15:27
Chapter: Betraying Alarm and Alarming Betrayal

Ahhhh!!! Cliff hanger! update soon, because this is a marvelous story, and I can't wait to read more of it. :) Keep it up!

Reviewer: Es21232
Date: 05/29/06 19:41
Chapter: Chaser Try-Outs, Part Two

wow.... wow.... wow... wow... wow....wow....wow...wow...wow...(i think you get the picture - WOW!) 10/10... wow...wow...wow...

Reviewer: Es21232
Date: 05/29/06 19:35
Chapter: Chaser Try-Outs, Part One

oooohhh!!!! finally someone who might beat Potter! im amazed... 10/10

Reviewer: Es21232
Date: 05/29/06 19:28
Chapter: Burning Spells, Dangerous Warnings, and Blazing Fire

awwww! *snifflesniffle* James almost died!!!! *tears* that would be devestating!!!!! *pulls out hanky and blows nose...* 10/10

Reviewer: Es21232
Date: 05/28/06 21:31
Chapter: Professor Madres, Part Two

DUN-DUN-DUN.... love your A/N!!! DIE SNIVELLY *screaming immediately turns into a hacking cough* ooops.... sorry about that - *coughing - your a loser snivellus*... *snortcoughgiggle* 10/10 your story is awesometastically brilliant!

Reviewer: Es21232
Date: 05/28/06 21:22
Chapter: Meeting Professor Madres, Part One

geez - Professor Madres is really a biatch. 10/10

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