Reviewer: LunaTheLoony
Date: 12/22/07 13:58
Chapter: Betraying Alarm and Alarming Betrayal

I HATE CLIFFHANGERS! WHY DOES THIS HAVE TO HAVE A CLIFFHANGER? ARE YOU TRYING TO GIVE ME A HEART ATTACK BY MAKING ME WAIT?

Reviewer: LunaTheLoony
Date: 12/22/07 12:47
Chapter: Peeves' Prank

I did not get to read this chapter because the evil black bar block half of it. would somebody tell me why?

Reviewer: GinnyTonks
Date: 12/18/07 17:14
Chapter: Betraying Alarm and Alarming Betrayal

please UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!

Reviewer: GinnyTonks
Date: 10/27/07 10:21
Chapter: Betraying Alarm and Alarming Betrayal

update update update!!!!! the suspense is killing me! great story!!

Reviewer: Little_Mini_Kimi
Date: 10/08/07 22:12
Chapter: Betraying Alarm and Alarming Betrayal

You should add more chapters to this cuz it is really good and i like it. So please update it.

Reviewer: Xenophiliusthegreat
Date: 09/22/07 8:15
Chapter: Betraying Alarm and Alarming Betrayal

please please please write more! ive been waitin for the 27th chapter forever. its so good please rite more

Reviewer: oh_me_oh_my
Date: 09/05/07 21:48
Chapter: Betraying Alarm and Alarming Betrayal

this is amazing!

kudos.

Reviewer: oh_me_oh_my
Date: 09/05/07 21:48
Chapter: Betraying Alarm and Alarming Betrayal

this is amazing!

kudos.

Reviewer: Written_Rubbish x
Date: 08/28/07 19:53
Chapter: Betraying Alarm and Alarming Betrayal

i've had this story in my favorites for a long time. maybe even a year! i forget!
please dont leave the story!
its such a good plot!!

Reviewer: The Kneazle
Date: 08/16/07 3:44
Chapter: Betraying Alarm and Alarming Betrayal

OH NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! What ever will they do??
Wait a second. Peter Pettigrew may be weak, but he's not stupid. Would he really just blindly follow Slytherins like that? Hmmmmmmmmmmm
Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: The Kneazle
Date: 08/16/07 3:09
Chapter: Even with Hexington

"Stop being so tall" haha that really made me laugh. I can relate to that because I'm shorter than anyone I know. That's okay though.
I was a bit confused as to what the conversation was about at the end, it seemed to be jumping all over the place. Like what was Lily saying "I guess not" to?
Wait, Eragon was waaaay better than Eldest. Eldest was too much like LOTR. And it had a better plot.
eep! only one more chapter to go! I'm so excited.

Reviewer: The Kneazle
Date: 08/16/07 2:51
Chapter: Unspoken Wisdom

EEEEEEEEEEE I LOVE Agatha Christie!!!! She's absolutely the BEST mystery writer ever. And that story is one of my favorites. You'd never guess it was the-- haha I'm not going to spoil it in case anyone ever reads it. (Which everyone should)
Anyway great chapter I liked how you showed the Griffin like a human/animal combonation. It was uber clever. I just wondered why the end of the chapter was in Italics.

Reviewer: The Kneazle
Date: 08/15/07 20:31
Chapter: Peeves' Prank

Yeah I thought James was a Seeker too, and Peeves isn't a ghost, he's a Poltergeist. Other than those two little details, I think this is a really good story. It's very interesting.

Author's Response: A poltergeist is a ghost (I had to look it up to double-check). Thanks for your review.

Reviewer: The Kneazle
Date: 08/15/07 2:23
Chapter: Evan's Lily

A lily.
How...erm...unoriginal? I just thought that part was a little clich, but other than that this is a really really good story. I like the dementor idea. Going to continue reading now.

Reviewer: miss Ceilidh
Date: 06/03/07 22:41
Chapter: Unspoken Wisdom

that sceen with the griffin sounds suspiciously like star wars. *may the force be with you*

Reviewer: miss Ceilidh
Date: 06/03/07 21:56
Chapter: Professor Madres, Part Two

love the author's note

Reviewer: Lily_rocks
Date: 06/02/07 10:55
Chapter: Betraying Alarm and Alarming Betrayal

Please don't leave us in suspense for so long! Please update soon. I love this story and so do others. Pretty please. Its getting really good! ; D

Reviewer: Pixie Flite
Date: 05/17/07 21:45
Chapter: Betraying Alarm and Alarming Betrayal

HURRY!!! post the new chapter

Reviewer: riddiculusvampire
Date: 05/15/07 17:37
Chapter: Betraying Alarm and Alarming Betrayal

WOW!!! I love this story! So this is the start of Wormtail's betrayal? PLEASE update soon, i have to find out what's next!

Reviewer: love_ya_hate_ya
Date: 04/30/07 14:59
Chapter: The Platform 9 3/4 Fall

I liked it, but I think it could have been a little more descriptive

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