I re-read this WONDERFUL poem and tried to pick out my favorite line (i love doing that with poems! yeah i'm weird) but this one is too hard to do that with cuz everything's so great! what do you think? i loved the
It suddenly came to a halt,
And I knew it was too close,
What its hood concealed,
I did not wish it to disclose.
part, but i love everything else too! Grr I dunno! You make it so difficult with your talent! hehehe
~Chloe
p.s. and yeah, i'm potterfan22 too, but i share that one with a friend and then i logged back onto this one and wanted to read this again and review again and stuff so yeah! and now i'm just being dumb and annoying so i'll go away before you kick me out! ahhh! *runs* jk
~Chloe (did i already say that? woops!) okay now i'm hyper so i'm gonna go before i embarrass myself any more! AHHHH!
URGH! Okay now you're just making me jealous! You're poems are so amazing and incredible and wonderful and i know by now you're thinking i'm really weird or something, but it's true and i can't just not say it! This poem is amazing! Please, please write some more of them! You're so great at it! YAY YOU!!!
~Chloe
yeah! this is good work :) keep it up! 10.
Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for revieving again! Iam not able to update from a long time due to my exams. But my next poem will be up by april! Keep reading and REVIEWING!!!
WOW! Marvolo! WAY TO GO!!! Its better than the other gits' poems who "don't like" rhyming just because they can't rhyme as good as you! Your poem is expressive, imaginative and clever and not at all vague or difficult to understand like SOME people write, acting as though a vague poem is an advanced poem. YOU ROCK!!!
Author's Response: THANKS MAN! THANKS A LOT FOR YOUR REVIEW. EVEN THOUGH YOU ARE MY BROTHER, THANKS!
That was so cool! I suck at rhyming, I mostly do non-rhyming poems. In case anyone is reading this PLEASE REVIEW!!!!! THE SECOND CHAPTER OF A MUSIC FILLED SILENCE IS IN QUE, OR HOWEVER YOU SPELL IT. MARVOLO IS THE ONLY PERSON WHO HAS REVIEWED, AND NOW I AM SAD :( But here I am, blithering like am idiot and trying to get people to read my poem when I am supposed to be reviewing this one. I offer my sincere apologies. Anyway, I lovelovelove your poem!
Author's Response: THANKS A LOT! You are the second person to review me! Don't know why poems don't get reviews. Anyway, I still don't believe you aren't Rowling! P.S lol!
that was really good!! i liked it a lot. i really got an image in my head. and though i'm not too fond of rhyming poems, i REALLY liked yours! good job! have you written any stories? ~Sara PS-i've written a story called "A Different Road." Its in the Dark/ Angsty fic section. If you read, please do review.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing it! I'll surely read yours! -Marvolo
