aww, you'll love me forevah? haha draco's such a craphead... i don't like him much either... great though!
what can i say? it was hilarious.
Oooh, this is hilarious! Very inventive, too. I can really see this happening and I think Draco was written wonderfully, especially as he is not a character you are crazy about. I also loved how you wrote Snape. It was very realistic.
I'm surprised at myself for not reviewing this sooner. I've read it before, but I didn't care about reviews until I noticed that some people were adding my story to their faves but not reviewing. But anyway, I was almost rolling on the floor laughing. It was very funny. But I thought that Ron's middle name was Bilius. I don't know; don't hold me to that. But it was a very silly story. It compares most favorably to Ginny's Midnight Drama. I can see why you are part of the Deathpants.
Ohmigosh... *wipes tear from eye* Oh, my gosh, that was the funniest essay EVER!!! I especially love the descriptions of Harry, Ron, and Hermione... *giggles* This is going on my faves! *wanders off to read more of Mind_Over_Matter's stories*
Well...that was an...interesting view into Draco Malfoy's brain.
It is hilarious the way Draco describes the trio.
keep writing and I'll keep reading. and reviewing. you dont have to love me forever, just keep writing.
Nice essay...'O' material...
Wow - you came and looked at all my stories! Thank you ^^
so, my ribs are aching from laughing, and i have hysterical tears all over my keyboard, thank you very much! i adored it, especially Snape's review. exceptionally funny, and well done within Draco's POV.
Oh, thank you so much for this review! I love you people, and I'm glad my li'le story gave you a laugh =]
Why is it that so many fics get approved that aren't good... but many good one's are rejected? Your writing, however, will always be good... I think.
You're, like, the Champion of strange reviews, huh?
Hmm, not quite sure how, but my review wasn't posted correctly. The very last line, the comment about Snape's part being my most favorite, should have gone just before the beginning of my quotes from his comments.
Hmm, does that make sense?
Well, sorry, anyway. Just wanted to clarify.
Wow. I have absolutely, positively no idea how that might have happened. Ah, the joys of strange review function... uh, side-effects. O_O
Where in the world do you come up with this stuff?! A half-starved monkey?! Priceless
I loved: the cunning Mr. Malfoy pulled a quill and parchment from the bag of a small Ravenclaw girl at the next table. How very much like Draco. I loved his extremely over-inflated ego also. Try to veer away from using words like ‘yucky’ and ‘gross’. Perhaps consider ‘density’, or ‘dim-witted’ or even such phrases as ‘lack of wit or mental ability’ instead. I would like to suggest adding in how very ugly James Potter was and the disadvantages of the ‘Potter gene’ That could keep a person laughing for weeks!!
Another awesome one-shot!
Your admirer when it comes to writing humour fics, because she's desperately awful at it,
(Well that, and you're a really great writer in dark fiction, too boot!)
My most favorite part of all would have to be Snape's comments on the back of the parchment!
Aww - thank you! Young!Draco was a whole lot of fun to write. He's got very few inhibitions and a highly respectable (/particularly frightening and rightly so) father, so he also has very few limits. Which means - yeah, fun!
Thank you for heading over to this little story, and I'm very happy to hear that you liked it!
One of the most well-written humour fics I've read! One thing that really makes your writing stand out, is how clever it really is. Many humour stories I come across are, even though they are very funny, just a mixture of random things thrown together. But yours is a very interesting, funny, and neat idea!
I know what you mean about the randomness; many stories seem to be written like that. And I try to be more... for lack of a better term, organised.
Thank you for your encouraging review! I haven't had one for this story in quite a while now.
LOL! Seems like something Malfoy would write!
Author's Response: Cool! Thanks for reviewing, and I <3 your username.
Extremely funny and original! This is one of the very few humour fics that doesn't have OOCness. Draco is in-character; even though he appears stupid and funny at the same time! Now, I don't fangirl Draco ...
I think Hermione's "description" was the funniest, followed by Ron's. Good job and thanks for the laughs!
Author's Response: Why, you couldn't be more welcome. Personally, I think this story is less OOC than some humour fics, but Snape's pushing it... I like to think it's worth it though. Thank you for reviewing!
SCHWAA! (Scratches head wondering what 'schwaa' is supposed to mean, shrugs, and continues.) I had no idea that this was by you-- I read this ages ago, before I had an account on MNFF, and it made my laugh hysterically.
I love this story, especially the description of Ron, for some reason (and this makes no sense because I am an avid Won-Won admirer.)
Author's Response: Yay! Thanks, Shmergo. Yep, my sense of humour is kind of whacked out, but I'm glad to know it works for some people ;)
Oh jeez. one of the funniest stories I've read all year. bahaha. thanks for giving me a laugh.
Author's Response: HA. I'm really glad you think so. Little!Malfoy's probably not pleased though... Thank you for your review!
That was my best laugh in weeks!
Wow, excellente! I'm glad it got a good giggle. Whoa. Alliteration.
Anyway, thank you for reviewing!
this fic can basically be described in one word. However, in the nature of a good review, and considering I'm stalling at the moment so I won't have to leave my bedroom and think about boring things such as how many socks to pack for a trip, I plan to draw this out as long as possible before giving you that one word. This story had me giggling in my seat, a rare feat for me. The phrases used to describe Draco were hilarious- "poor, innocent kid like himself." "intelligent, good looking, talented and humble Draco Malfoy." hee-hee. Although- actually, never mind, there's nothing you can do to make this fic better. I suppose its time I came out and told you that one word to describe my reaction to your fic. Drumroll please- LOL.
Author's Response: LOL is one word? Who knew? Thanks heaps for this review - nothing you could have said would have been more encouraging.
Absolutely hilarious. It was soooooooo funny how Draco described Ron ! Great Work!!!!!!! 10 milllion out of 10.
Author's Response: Yes, I remember it was particularly fun to write that description... Thanks a bundle for reviewing!
this is one of the funniest and most original stories i've ever read! be sure to be on my faves, 10/10!
Author's Response: What a review to miss! I'm so sorry! Thank you - that's the best thing I think an author can ever hear, very encouraging (unless their story is a dark fic or something...).