Reviewer: Mrs Liz Potter
Date: 07/02/06 10:25
Chapter: Chapter 4: Punishments and Scottish Kilts.

I LOVE the kilts. I go to a lot of Scottish festivals and I know how hot guys can look in them. I thought it was a perfect touch. I really like how your story os shaping out. I wish Ginny would just get over it but I understand that she needs her time. I love you and this story so, if you could, please update soon.
Love Always...

Author's Response: Thanks for your review! Yes, there is something sexy for a man in wearing Scottish kilt, I admit! Not all of them can be sexy in kilt though... ;-) Which is very funny! The 5th and 6th chapters are getting corrected right now but the 5th will be up very soon, I garantee you! thanks again! Shamane.

Reviewer: Ginzig
Date: 07/01/06 17:11
Chapter: Chapter 4: Punishments and Scottish Kilts.

Harry's a best man. I wonder who he'll escort down the aisle...Ginny?! I know she's hurt and upset, but she needs to forgive him; hopefully soon. Good chapter, lots of surprises-kilts LOVE them!!!

Author's Response: Thank you for your review! This chapter has been a long battle for about two months! It's good to see that I have fans! ;-) Well, for the Wedding, you'll have to wait until chapter 4 and 5 but be aware, I have some surprises for you!

Reviewer: lisa_lovegood
Date: 07/01/06 15:19
Chapter: Chapter 4: Punishments and Scottish Kilts.

Oh, I forgot to say:


Lisa xxx

Author's Response: Welcome! Hope you'll read me and I hope I'll have the pleasure to read your story!

Reviewer: lisa_lovegood
Date: 07/01/06 15:18
Chapter: Chapter 4: Punishments and Scottish Kilts.

ahhhh lovely chapter!! Too bad Ginny cant forgive harry and snoghim senceless but ahwell...we can't have it all... ;-)

Update soon!
Lisa xxx

Author's Response: I have a lot of chapters already written, I'm just waiting for my Beta's corrections but she's very quick! Welcome to the MNFF! Hope you'll be reading my upcomming chapters! ;-)

Reviewer: Harrys gone nuts
Date: 06/29/06 1:08
Chapter: Chapter 3: Indian Smoke and Brandy.

Ok yes i feel like an idiot when i was cursing and what not for that one chapter.I was just so mad.Sorry to all of you who thought i was offencive.

Author's Response: That's Okay, everybody can have their upset moments. Unless they don't promote the use of drugs and alcohol! ;-) Just joking! Don't feel bad, you're a very good fan and I thank you for being so loyal toward my fanfiction! ;-) Shamane

Reviewer: potterlurvesginny2
Date: 05/31/06 16:24
Chapter: Chapter 1: Don’t Cry

this situation is a bit confusing. Ginny wants to die to get back at harry?

i like your writing, even if it is very sad and...unrealistic


Author's Response: Hi, in fact, Ginny is sick and angry at Harry. She is depressed and doesn't feel that she has the strengh to fight back her desease... But no, she doesn't want to die to get Harry back. She holds a lot against him even if we all know that she loves him from all her heart! ;-) Ah... Heartbreaks are never easy!

Reviewer: hpgeek512
Date: 05/21/06 19:13
Chapter: Chapter 2: Nina Simone’s Desperate Love

that was gerat, i was soooo happy when ginny went back!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for your review! Well, if you're still reading, you'll notice that Ginny desn't have the sweet temper she had before... She is going to make you scream in anger I'm afraid...

Reviewer: pumpkinheadRon
Date: 05/15/06 20:21
Chapter: Chapter 3: Indian Smoke and Brandy.

OMG good story. I like the way you wrote that Ginny is mad at Harry, to increase the romantic suspension . . .

Author's Response: Thanks a lot... Well, in the upcomming chapters, I can assure you that it will take a major event to bring peace between these two! High tension is coming up!

Reviewer: scottolson
Date: 05/01/06 18:05
Chapter: Chapter 3: Indian Smoke and Brandy.

man im hooked on this when is the next chapter coming

Author's Response: I've submitted the fourth one for the 5th time. Hope it will be accepted this time! Therefore, I'll try to update as fast as I can and as fast as my beta can too! ;-)

Reviewer: Iltu
Date: 04/24/06 2:21
Chapter: Chapter 3: Indian Smoke and Brandy.

Oh please continue soon, I really like your story...

Author's Response: Thanks a lot! It helps me to read that I already have fans! ;-) Since it takes me 4 and 5 times to get some of my chapters accepted, knowing that all these efforts are not in vain boost me up! Thanks again!

Reviewer: Harrys gone nuts
Date: 04/17/06 8:54
Chapter: Chapter 3: Indian Smoke and Brandy.

IM HOOKED!YE HAW.Harry had every right to smoke the Grass also to drink the Brandy,HE WAS PISSED at ginny little Smart Ass bitch.He made that cake speically for her and she goes to be a bitch to him,WHAT RIGHT DOES SHE HAVE TO DO THAT?1000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000/10


Author's Response: Well, I can't say that Harry was right to do this though... I don't agree with this. But as you can see, he made a fool of himself and drug didn't solve his problem with Ginny... Problems are solved when two people speak calmly and frankly to each other: clean and sober... For the moment, Ginny isn't calm and Harry... Well, I guess he'll stay away from very old Brandy and Rictruso Grass for a long time! ;-)

Reviewer: Hot48cricket
Date: 04/13/06 16:48
Chapter: Chapter 3: Indian Smoke and Brandy.

I can't believe that you condone the use of drugs.
I don't think I will continue on with the story from now on.

Author's Response: I'm sad to see that you are tiking things so seriously. Understand me : I don't approve the use of any drug in general and I'll never approve it. If you re-read the text, you will notice how stupid look like the characters who use it. Yes, it leads to a good laugh of them but laughing is a soft way to talk about some society problems and drug is one of them to my eyes. I'm an adult and I guess that with a good sense of humor, you can teach your children no to take any drug and have a more efficient speach about morality. The fact is that in some countries, the use of soft drugs like cannabis is legalized for dying people and very ill ones (breast cancer, parkinson, etc.). I just pointed that social fact to the wizarding world and created a parallel between a very ill person who gives some "soft drug" to a teenager, thing that can happen, which can be a big problem. I am not JK Rowling and I'm very concerned about society problems. It is a part of my usual job and I'm just trying to speak about them in as many ways that I can. I guess that in a more soft way, JK Rowling talks about major politic and social problems in her books (i.e. the way we are raising our children, racism, terrorism, etc.) in a very soft way. I don't think I'm the ony one... ;-) Each one has his own reality and I respect yours but I think that we can't completely protect our children from the reality of universal problems like violence, drugs, etc. I respect your choice of not continuing with the story, even if this event is the only one of the whole fanfict but I sincerely think that if people don't want to read about some specific subjects like drugs by example, they should read the warnings prior to read the whole chapter. My warning was pretty clear I think! ;-) Have a nice reading with other stories! Shamane

Reviewer: Manda
Date: 04/13/06 11:41
Chapter: Chapter 3: Indian Smoke and Brandy.

Wow I think the next one Ginny will have forgotton her hatred for Harry bc she was so worried for him while he was in the hospital! Can't Wait for teh next chapter

Reviewer: hpnut
Date: 04/11/06 17:35
Chapter: Chapter 3: Indian Smoke and Brandy.

Great chapter!! I hope you get them back them together soon. Update soon.

Reviewer: DancingMuggle
Date: 03/25/06 22:24
Chapter: Chapter 2: Nina Simone’s Desperate Love

You story is so great can you please e-mail me the 3rd Chapter so I can keep reading its so good

Author's Response: Hi! Chapter 3 is up! You can read it right now! Shamane

Reviewer: green_fairy
Date: 03/24/06 19:55
Chapter: Chapter 1: Don’t Cry

Pretty good, except a little too unrealistic. Dudly, and Vernon Dursly are never going too be nice too Harry. Maybey nicer than usual due too his money, but not like you have portrayed. And Petunia never loved her sister. That fact has already been established. That's just my opinion, I don't mean to be....mean.

Author's Response: I prefer to think that you can't completely hate a relative... I think that in hard moments, you can discover how much your family is important. I guess she loved her sister but she was pretty jealous and scared of her skills. She just buried down inside the love she had for her and kept bad memories fresh in her mind to convince herself how much she hated her...

Reviewer: Harrys gone nuts
Date: 03/21/06 6:37
Chapter: Chapter 1: Don’t Cry

No,no biggy i just have waited a while for chapter 3 to come so i just want to read it.

Author's Response: Ok! Chapter 3 is up! You can read it! Shamane

Reviewer: Harrys gone nuts
Date: 03/17/06 7:27
Chapter: Chapter 1: Don’t Cry

Email it to

Author's Response: Hi, the chapter 3 is sent but not approved yet. I've sent it last night. If it soesn't get approved, I'll send it to you! :-) I don't want to overload your email account if I can avoid it. I prefer you to read it on the site but if it doesn't work, I'll email it to you, no problems! :-) Thank you for your understanding, Shamane

Reviewer: Manda
Date: 03/16/06 11:43
Chapter: Chapter 2: Nina Simone’s Desperate Love

OMG I love your story and I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!! O just email it to me lol jk Great Job!

Author's Response: Okay! Thanks! I'll email the third chapter to you! It is not fully corrected though. Shamane

Reviewer: Rae_of_sunshine
Date: 02/11/06 10:22
Chapter: Chapter 2: Nina Simone’s Desperate Love

ooo i love your story - keep writing :-D i'll put you on my faves :D great story and update soon!

Author's Response: Still waiting for my chapter 3 corrected... Should come back soon though. Don't worry!

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