Reviewer: bookworm123
Date: 11/04/06 19:03
Chapter: Chapter 4: Punishments and Scottish Kilts.

for some reason that dosent seem fair that we should know what the boys weare but not the girls!!


Author's Response: Because, unfortunately, the girls always look like little flowers : rose buttons... In any wedding guys have to look like penguin in Tuxedo or cheap rock-a-billy monkeys! loll It's more painful for them... My sympathies! loll

Reviewer: bookworm123
Date: 11/03/06 21:56
Chapter: Chapter 2: Nina Simoneís Desperate Love

oh my god thank the lord!! that was soo sacary i like the nina simon part that realy works well

Reviewer: qwerqwer
Date: 10/16/06 17:18
Chapter: Chapter 4: Punishments and Scottish Kilts.

nice, keep updating

Reviewer: qwerqwer
Date: 10/16/06 16:44
Chapter: Chapter 1: Donít Cry

very descriptive and nice. Great! keep up the good work

Reviewer: ginnyharryforever
Date: 10/06/06 10:40
Chapter: Chapter 4: Punishments and Scottish Kilts.

Wow that was great when is the next one due?

Reviewer: naruto
Date: 09/26/06 11:43
Chapter: Chapter 2: Nina Simoneís Desperate Love

that was very guy second chapter there was no sex

Author's Response:

Hi, my warnings are general... There will be this and that all along the whole story... I'm not writing something about nymphomaniac couple but about love, friendship and courage... I think that the original author (JK Rowling) shows and writes about those three aspect in her books and these ones are very important throught all the books.

 Looking for sex or violence or drugs in every chapter would be... hum... quite disturbing don't you think? Because this is basically the story of a young boy who becomes a man thought differents events of his life... Including friends, family, secrets, love and death...

If you really want to read sotries that turn around sex only, may I suggest some very good specialized magazines which have very revealing pictures in it?

Sincerely, I'm not writing a X-Rated story about teenagers... I would rather look like a pedophile or something around it... Yes there can be sex, violence or murders in my story but, there is no graphic description in any of those situations. I respect MNFF rules... And According to those rules, you won't find a single story that contain graphically detailed sex in every page and chapter either...

 

Maybe you should change website because I'm afraid this is not the place for this kind of thing...

Reviewer: wikert
Date: 08/17/06 20:45
Chapter: Chapter 4: Punishments and Scottish Kilts.

this is so fricken wrong wheres the sex

Author's Response:

Hi, my warnings are general... There will be this and that all along the whole story... I'm not writing something about nymphomaniac couple but about love, friendship and courage... I think that the original author (JK Rowling) shows and writes about those three aspect in her books and these ones are very important throught all the books.

 Looking for sex or violence or drugs in every chapter would be... hum... quite disturbing don't you think? Because this is basically the story of a young boy who becomes a man thought differents events of his life... Including friends, family, secrets, love and death...

If you really want to read sotries that turn around sex only, may I suggest some very good specialized magazines which have very revealing pictures in it?

Sincerely, I'm not writing a X-Rated story about teenagers... I would rather look like a pedophile or something around it... Yes there can be sex, violence or murders in my story but, there is no graphic description in any of those situations. I respect MNFF rules... And According to those rules, you won't find a single story that contain graphically detailed sex in every page and chapter either...

 

Maybe you should change website because I'm afraid this is not the place for this kind of thing...

Reviewer: Alanius
Date: 08/15/06 14:18
Chapter: Chapter 1: Donít Cry

I like it. It's great.

Reviewer: Alanius
Date: 08/15/06 14:18
Chapter: Chapter 2: Nina Simoneís Desperate Love

You almost made me cry! Almost!
(If you had killed her off, you'd have broken the dam)

Reviewer: Alanius
Date: 08/15/06 14:18
Chapter: Chapter 2: Nina Simoneís Desperate Love

You almost made me cry! Almost!
(If you had killed her off, you'd have broken the dam)

Reviewer: Alanius
Date: 08/15/06 14:18
Chapter: Chapter 4: Punishments and Scottish Kilts.

Can't stop reading. Why does it end?

Reviewer: Alanius
Date: 08/15/06 14:17
Chapter: Chapter 4: Punishments and Scottish Kilts.

Can't stop reading. Why does it end?

Reviewer: Alanius
Date: 08/15/06 13:15
Chapter: Chapter 2: Nina Simoneís Desperate Love

You almost made me cry! Almost!
(If you had killed her off, you'd have broken the dam)

Reviewer: Alanius
Date: 08/15/06 13:06
Chapter: Chapter 1: Donít Cry

I like it. It's great.

Reviewer: hpfreak94
Date: 07/25/06 15:09
Chapter: Chapter 2: Nina Simoneís Desperate Love

nice religion joke. I converted from a Catholic to an Episcopalian so I know all the jokes

Reviewer: 9422139588
Date: 07/16/06 6:59
Chapter: Chapter 2: Nina Simoneís Desperate Love

nice poetry

Reviewer: Hp_4_eva
Date: 07/09/06 1:13
Chapter: Chapter 1: Donít Cry

Okay, here goes...

My thoughts are that Ginny is a little bit too snotty over the whole Breaking Up With Harry thing, And she needs to calm down a little. but other than that, I like.

Reviewer: balla
Date: 07/07/06 22:52
Chapter: Chapter 4: Punishments and Scottish Kilts.

This is an awsome story. Can't wait till the next chapter.

Reviewer: oldman
Date: 07/07/06 6:42
Chapter: Chapter 4: Punishments and Scottish Kilts.

You are obviously builing up to a tremendous wedding event. Tension rising emotions high and youv'e got R+H ready so I'm really looking forward to see how you unfold the next chap.

Author's Response: Hum... To know more you'd have to read all of the chapters... Good thing, I've found new betas receptly so I'll be able to post new chapters easier and faster this time... For more than a year, I've been writing this little story... I stopped when "deathly hollows" came out and then, I waited until I could completely forget about it and concentrate on my own version of the story... My own point of view... Now, as the writing process goes fast and I've got more than one Beta on this, you'll be able to read more of this story... faster!!!

Reviewer: webster
Date: 07/03/06 11:40
Chapter: Chapter 4: Punishments and Scottish Kilts.

good

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