Reviewer: Lady of the Lake
Date: 01/25/07 0:21
Chapter: Family Ties

PLEASE give us the next chapter

Reviewer: ford
Date: 08/10/06 13:40
Chapter: Family Ties

on little point harry would not have his wand taken from him because fred and george did not have their wands taken from them in the fifth book even though they did not finish school

Reviewer: webster
Date: 07/03/06 12:18
Chapter: Family Ties

wirte more please

Reviewer: Luke Potter
Date: 06/05/06 6:20
Chapter: Family Ties

i love your story. what does TBC stand for??? PLEASE update as soon as possible.
nitwit, blubber, oddment, tweak

Reviewer: hp11478
Date: 04/15/06 15:46
Chapter: Family Ties

pretty good so far. I just don't know about the plotline with the kid.

Reviewer: fawkes25
Date: 03/31/06 4:08
Chapter: Family Ties

I love the story so far, can't wait to see what happens, but are you ever going to update?

Reviewer: fawkes25
Date: 03/31/06 4:07
Chapter: Family Ties

I love the story so far, can't wait to see what happens, but are you ever going to update?

Reviewer: only4him
Date: 02/18/06 13:25
Chapter: Family Ties

o wow... keep writing...i do agree with the no wand/education thing though it is rather confusing...maybe u could clear it up in chapters to come! great job though!!

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for reviewing :) The wands/education thing will be cleared up in a few chapters, I promise! Thanks for reviewing and I hope you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: GWeasley
Date: 01/31/06 20:13
Chapter: Family Ties

I have a problem with the no wand thing since Fred and Gorge have there wnds in the 6th book or was Macgonagle just trying to scare Harry into coming back I like how ginny still wants to be with him even though the kid has shown up and tecnically speaking wouldnt james be the inheiriter of sirius estate since he is a black??? I love the new power hary has and how he hasent noticed it and I love how long your chapters are some writers wright 3 page chapters and that is soooo anoying because it takes so long to post a chapter. Well good job and here's hoping that you can post the nekt chapter soon :)

Reviewer: Zoltan42
Date: 01/29/06 16:45
Chapter: Family Ties

I have a problem with the "no finished eduction/no wand" part. I now you listed this as AU, but only from HBP on. I get the impression that Fred and George still have their wands. At the very least, if it turns out they no longer have their wands, one would assume that some mention of the lose of their wands and the ramifications of this would have been apparent and known to Harry.

Author's Response: Hey, you're the only one to pick up on this and there's a v good explanation in a few chapters where the truth comes out. Thank you very much for reading my fic :)

Reviewer: Hot48cricket
Date: 01/26/06 23:27
Chapter: Family Ties

**double gasp** Harry's declaring his love for Ginny in front of her family was cute. Who was Lucinda Malfoy....must be related to Lucius and WHY would Sirius hook up with a Malfoy????

Author's Response: Hey, the explanation for this one is in chapter eight so please keep with me! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Hot48cricket
Date: 01/26/06 23:27
Chapter: Family Ties

**double gasp** Harry's declaring his love for Ginny in front of her family was cute. Who was Lucinda Malfoy....must be related to Lucius and WHY would Sirius hook up with a Malfoy????

Reviewer: harryandginny4ever
Date: 01/26/06 11:27
Chapter: Family Ties

The way Harry agreed to take care of that kid was so cute! I can't wait to see what happens! More please!

Reviewer: fairyville
Date: 01/26/06 9:16
Chapter: Family Ties

*gasp*.*gasp* and another *gasp*. The shock value of this chapter rates high lol, realy good chapter, i never expected any of these things, very original, totally awsome work =D Who was this Lucinda Malfoy? Was she a sister of Lucius or something? Cant wait for an update, again awsome work!

Author's Response: Hey, the explanation for this one is in chapter eight so please keep with me! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Hot48cricket
Date: 01/24/06 23:53
Chapter: To Be A Man

Love it!!!! Can't wait to see what happens at Grimmauld Place and what kind of welcome Harry get's at the Burrow!!

Reviewer: Libertine
Date: 01/24/06 15:12
Chapter: To Be A Man

great 1st chapter lets have some more soon

Reviewer: HermioneHair
Date: 01/24/06 13:28
Chapter: To Be A Man

Brialliant!!! Inspired!!! Ingenius!!!MORE, MORE, MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!ASAPxxxxxxxx

Reviewer: Zoltan42
Date: 01/23/06 21:37
Chapter: To Be A Man

Some nice stuff -- Moody removing the cloak and revealing the relationship to the Weasleys the most prominent -- but you also have Fred and George with murderous looks but then cheering, I assume in approval, a few sentences later. Something to indicate a transtion, such as referring to it as sudden unexpected cheering, would help. While it's seems a little odd that Molly would be trying to presuade Ginny from dating Harry -- like most of what I've read I would assume she'd be trying to get the two of them together -- it is different and at least exploring a different dynamic.

Reviewer: fairyville
Date: 01/23/06 20:05
Chapter: To Be A Man

LMAO Moody pulling the cloak off of Harry and Ginny was totally hilarious !!!! I really liked this chapter, its really well written, youve done an awsome job, im hooked. Cant wait for an update, it should be interesting =D

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