Very nice and well written. I agree with the person below me, that you could add a little more to it, but it's still good. If you're bored and feel like writing, then I'd write more and then update it. 9/10
Author's Response: Thanks for the nine! The first thing was like a intro. I'm going to ad a chapter for each book so far. I have a first draft for year one. Thanks for the review!
This is reall good, but try adding a little more about eac year's adventures. The poem is otherwise good. Take an 8.
Author's Response: Thanks for the Review!