Reviewer: midnight_me
Date: 01/25/06 19:42
Chapter: Intro

Very nice and well written. I agree with the person below me, that you could add a little more to it, but it's still good. If you're bored and feel like writing, then I'd write more and then update it. 9/10

Author's Response: Thanks for the nine! The first thing was like a intro. I'm going to ad a chapter for each book so far. I have a first draft for year one. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: marvolo
Date: 01/23/06 20:01
Chapter: Intro

This is reall good, but try adding a little more about eac year's adventures. The poem is otherwise good. Take an 8.

Author's Response: Thanks for the Review!

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