Reviews For You Crush Me
Reviewer: moldy999
Date: 12/13/07 4:44
Chapter: Prologue: There Sleeping

thankyou for pounding him to a pulp (saves me the bother) finally i love it brilliant

Reviewer: PygmyPuffAmanda
Date: 10/27/07 21:13
Chapter: Chapter 5

I liked the ending. The only part of the whole story I didn't like was that Ron called Hermoine a Mudblood, something that surprised me. It seems that he would be more incensed over Dolohov calling her that name than implying that she was Harry's. I don't know though...I liked the story a lot though.

Author's Response: I haven't read through this story in ages, but I seem to remember that he was sort of clumsily (as usual) stepping in to champion Hermione. I don't recall Harry being an issue for Ron at that moment. *should go back and re-read the story once in a while.* Anyway, very glad you liked it!

Reviewer: PygmyPuffAmanda
Date: 10/27/07 20:31
Chapter: Chapter 1: Fill Our Souls Up

Oh, that's so sad. It's fitting that Ron says his duty is to protect them and sacrifice himself if it comes to it...The same thing happened in Sorceror's Stone. It's still so upsetting though...

Reviewer: sayiansirius
Date: 08/22/07 12:42
Chapter: Crush Me

Lovely story, Andrea. I love the detail you’ve put into this chapter. The ideas and imagination for the enchantments guarding the Horcrux were brilliant. Many writers come up with lousy ideas but yours had me sitting at the edge of my seat, wondering if they would make out safely.

I also loved your portrayal of Ron. I love that he was the hero in this chapter and that acting on his gut feeling actually got them out alive, even though he was hurt in the process.

With that statement, Ron was accosted by a thought completely inappropriate to the situation and had to suppress it.

“I saw a big scary thing and just did the first anti-big-scary-thing spell I could think of.

Your small additions of some comedy made the chapter even more enjoyable. It was serious, yes, but these moments made it seem even more real.

Great job!!

~KC :)

Reviewer: eowyngirl
Date: 03/24/07 16:22
Chapter: Chapter 5

This was the best songfic I have ever read, and one of the best overall fanfictions I have read. I am definitely adding this to my favorites and I look forward to reading more of your work. Excellent job!

Reviewer: eowyngirl
Date: 03/24/07 16:15
Chapter: As Long As You’re Around

Poor Snape... Poor Hermione.... Poor Ron. :) Very good!

Reviewer: eowyngirl
Date: 03/24/07 16:08
Chapter: Crush Me

Wow, another good one... Very suspenseful. The remark Harry made at the very end was great- I laughed out loud.

Reviewer: eowyngirl
Date: 03/24/07 15:58
Chapter: Chapter 1: Fill Our Souls Up

this chappie was even better.... another 10!

Reviewer: eowyngirl
Date: 03/24/07 15:53
Chapter: Prologue: There Sleeping

Awww very good 10/10

Reviewer: hollyberries
Date: 03/03/07 11:21
Chapter: Chapter 5

i didn't review the other chapters so i could just do it all at the end. that was a really really well done story, i really injoyed it. :) it wasn't to mushy, everyone was in character, it was just really good :) excellent job. :D

Reviewer: SorryEskimo
Date: 01/01/07 13:16
Chapter: Chapter 5

Many stories can get carried away and have crazy subplots that make you angry....but this was excellent. I like how nothing was rushed -- Hermione and Ron had a good pace in the story which impressed me. Thank you so much for this excellent story.
Eskimo

Reviewer: 00cedricis2hot2die
Date: 12/11/06 4:58
Chapter: As Long As You’re Around

why didn't they just apparate out of the chamber?

Reviewer: lifter57
Date: 10/28/06 10:44
Chapter: Prologue: There Sleeping

... an the next update is when?

Reviewer: lifter57
Date: 10/28/06 10:43
Chapter: Prologue: There Sleeping

... an the next update is when?

Reviewer: molly jo 7
Date: 08/15/06 14:27
Chapter: Crush Me

oh yes i love this story

Reviewer: FreetheElves
Date: 07/19/06 11:09
Chapter: Prologue: There Sleeping

This really is one of my favorite stories on the site. Really, really well done!

Reviewer: ronandhermioneduh
Date: 05/14/06 15:35
Chapter: Chapter 5

post more soon! this is so good.

Reviewer: actress101
Date: 05/07/06 15:14
Chapter: Chapter 1: Fill Our Souls Up

tear tear sweet 10/10actress

Reviewer: actress101
Date: 05/07/06 15:04
Chapter: Prologue: There Sleeping

That idiot no one said Ron was smart. good story so far10/10 actress

Reviewer: knightbus
Date: 05/06/06 21:29
Chapter: Prologue: There Sleeping

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