Oh, that was nice. Very cute. I liked the end. I was kind of dreading a kiss. Sorry, the "spots" are such a turn off. It would be like someone running their fingers through Snape's oily hair. *shudder* Grotesque.
Good- very original. I love that.
That was a very cute story! Not cute as in cliched... I don't think there's such thing as a cliche Stan/OC fic, because I've never read one... This was definitely a unique story (which I always love), and it was very well-written. You need to write about next summer... *10*