i was actually listening to this song before i read this so... spooky
that was so beautiful, i actually burst into tears when i read "and when our eyes met i could see clearly for the first time in years."
Thats such a sweet story. They are obviously ment for each other and I love your rendition of the moment. Please keep writing. *_*
ahhh really cute!! i don't think the trio would ever lose contact though so that didn't really make since to me.
ahhh really cute!! i don't think the trio would ever lose contact though so that didn't really make since to me.
I really enjoyed the story, but it just seems as if the ending was a teeny weeny bit forced........ I think maybe u shud've increased their confession a little.......... Also ron's speech was absolutely hilarious!!!!!!!
it was a really nice story. i loved it.
aww!!! i liked it!! it was cute! i don't want to admit this but it seems logical that ron would take that long to admit this to her!! Omg! i hope it doesnt tho!!:(:( hehe cute story tho!
Hermione was kinda OOC, but I liked it anyway. Thanx!!
i realy liked it & ithink it was just the right length.
i thought it was a cute fic. ron and hermione are my faviorite characters
Author's Response: They're most definitely my favorite couple, even if they're not together yet.
Okay this was one of the best songfics I've ever read. I really enjoyed it, and you gave a good reason that he and Hermione lost touch instead of just having it randomly happen. That was nice. Thanks for your suggestion to listen to the song while reading the story. It reallyyy added to the atmosphere of it all. Great fic, 10!
I didn't recognize the song until one of the later verses, and then I had to go and dow-...um....listen to it..*shyly* hehe. Anyway I heard the version by Jann Arden from One Fine Day (adorable movie- George Clooney and Michelle Pfieffer) This was such a cute story. I just had to go "Awwwww..." at the end of it. *sniffle* so cute...I think I am gonna make this a favorite...
Oh my gosh! I'm the first to review!! I loved your story, well written and you chose a GREAT song! LOVE IT!
Author's Response: Thank you, one day i was listening to my music and that song came on and i immediately pictured the entire plot and how i wanted the story to go.
