Great story, but i had actually thought u killed off ginny
Author's Response: Well, I wanted to make it seem like I did; Harry losing everything and then getting it all back was one of the main plot points. Still, I'm not very good at actually killing characters.
i am bawling my eyes out. such a sad story. I sure wish I could write like that
Author's Response: I didn't think it was too sad at the end. I am glad I elicited an emotional response, and I'm glad you enjoyed it. I didn't think I could write very well when I started, but I've noticed that I've gotten a whole lot better the more I do write, so that's my advice if you want to write well. Thanks for reading!
such a good story so far...
Author's Response: Hopefully you'll let me know what you think of the end!
This is my all time favourite fanfic.
I love the way you write. I'm reading your sequel to this at the moment. It is so0o good. Keep it up.
Author's Response: Wow, thanks! I hope you enjoy the sequel just as much; it's very close to being finished, and I hope the end satisfies everyone!
I loved it! Just enough humor to make me nearly mess my keyboard with coffee! Nicely done, it lifted the mood and we all know that even under extreme stress in life, there's always something to smile about.
Nicely done!
Author's Response: Wow, thanks! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story as well!
omg! congratulations on getting married! and i love your story!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed it!
omg first of before i flame you,
id like to say. IM IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY.
THEE BEST FANFICTION EVER.
now to flame you.
YOU SCARED THE CRAP OUT OF ME! WITH GINNY AND HARRY AND HERMIONE AND RON. i must admit in embarrasment, that when ginny and hermione and ron and every died i cried. it was depressing.
but still amazing story.
Author's Response: I answered this one previously. =)
omg first of before i flame you,
id like to say. IM IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY.
THEE BEST FANFICTION EVER.
now to flame you.
YOU SCARED THE CRAP OUT OF ME! WITH GINNY AND HARRY AND HERMIONE AND RON. i must admit in embarrasment, that when ginny and hermione and ron and every died i cried. it was depressing.
but still amazing story.
Author's Response: I kind of feel proud of myself that I made you cry; it was meant to be scary and really sad. Thus, rather than flamed, I feel quite honored. I'm really glad you enjoyed it!
You're great at writing stories thats all that can be said
Author's Response: I'm really glad you think so. I hope you enjoy the sequel too!
Thanks so very much for creating such a wonderful story and sharing it with us. I loved it from start to finish, especially enjoying Harry's relationship with Fawkes, the 4some's journey into becoming Animagi, and the happy endings all around. I do wish Luna had made it through, but glad about Neville's parents.
The unanswered questions such as "who became Headmaster/Headmistress in the years between McGonagall and Granger", "what happened to Draco", why wasn't there more about Hagrid and Grawp" and "what happened to Moody" are trivial in comparison to the overall work you did in tying pretty bows on character like Remus & Tonks and the twins, not to mention the happy Grandparents of so many kids at the end.
Thanks again!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm really glad you enjoyed it. I'm sorry I left some questions unanswered in this story, though some of those questions are answered in the sequel. I hope you find it and like that one too.
just recently having extreme conjunctivitus i can understand what harry is goin through. since i couldnt open my eye for 2 days
Author's Response: man, that really bites. I hope things get better for you. I had to try and just imagine how he would feel, and I'm sure it wasn't as accurate as it could have been. Let me know what you think about the rest of the story when you get done with it!
coooooool. very nicely done.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Very good tale! I liked it and hope that JKR can do the duel at the end of her series as well as you did!!!!! I can't wait to read the sequel.
Author's Response: Thanks! It's nice to know people are still reading this one, and I'm really glad you liked it. Hopefully you'll review the sequel too and let me know what you think.
cool story
keep it up!
Author's Response: Thanks, I do my best! =)
For your first story- no i am sorry- for ANY story this is EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!! this sounds so good and it is only the first chapter! i love the suspense! wonderful, really. bloody brilliant!
Author's Response: I hope that you will review again when you get to the end, so I know what you think about the whole thing, and don't forget the sequel. Thanks!
How is this your least favorite? This was great! Gilderoy, lol.
Author's Response: I guess I'm more of an action person. Also I think I am a lot harder on myself than most of my readers, and I hadn't written stuff like this before so I wasn't sure how well it would be recieved. I think I could do it better now, but it did seem to be a popular chapter.
Good chapter, with one major flaw. JK said in Quidditch through the ages that it's a foul for any player but the seeker to catch the snitch.
Author's Response: How well I know... now. This was brought to my attention too late to allow me to change it, so I just left it as it was. I'm glad you liked the rest of the chapter!
This is really good. But couldn't Fawkes have healed Harry?
Author's Response: The problems with Harry's vision, I decided, were inside his brain, and to my knowledge the phoenix tears heal superficial wounds and injuries. So no, Fawkes couldn't heal Harry, as far as this story goes. I'm glad you are enjoying it, though. Have you forgiven me for making Harry the Knight Bus driver, then?
The story is good on the whole so far, but wouldn't it have been cool for him to transform into a rat to escape and have Harry transform into a hawk to go after him? It would have been fitting for Harry to take Wormtail down, and in a way he wouldn't have been expecting.
Author's Response: If I had wanted Harry to kill wormtail, that would have been a fantastic way to do it, I completely agree. Still, the last marauder killing the traitor marauder seemed a little more appropriate to me. Thanks, I'm glad you're liking it.
I think you did a great job on this chapter. I thought that the way you brought Harry back was really touching and would look great as a movie scene. When Harry is reflecting on his scar and how he was being defined by it I liked how you made the comment about Ginny looking in his eyes disproving part of that comment. Thanks for such a great story.
Author's Response: Thanks for such a nice review! I'm really glad you enjoyed the story, and I hope you'll read the sequel, too. I do tend to describe things like they would be scenes in a movie. If only my story had a decent soundtrack...
