Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie
Date: 06/26/06 10:22
Chapter: Live Your Life

"There were no dry eyes; even Fred and George brushed at their eyes suspiciously, though they denied it whenever anyone tried to mention it to them." haha. Gred and Forge- gotta love em.
"Instead of being the Boy Who Lived, be the boy who lived!" That's a splendid line. I'm so glad Harry's alive. And I'm glad that you brought him back in a very real way. It's not "Oh no! Woe is me! HE's dead! Wiat! HE'S ALIVE!!!" No, it was much nicer. Haha. If that made any sense. Great chapter, I loved it very much. I liked the Dumbledore bit at the end the best, I think. Very nice, I have to go and e-hug the guy who told me about this. Haha. Thanks for the read!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked everything! I know what you mean about the ending and Harry not being dead. He can't just pop back up after using his life force and soul to destroy Voldemort. Some kind of other happening had to happen for him to live. The Dumbledore part at the end was a favorite of mine as well. Harry needed to have more of a chance to talk to him than I gave him in the Shattered Sword chapter, and I think this provided some really nice resolution to the story.

Reviewer: DumbleFanNo1
Date: 06/26/06 9:49
Chapter: Grindelwald's Castle

Very good chapter, I like the fact that you made Ron a Lion. That is great, it really connects with his character especiallly from the fifth and sixth books!

Author's Response: Yeah, I was really happy with that one. I think Ron was the easiest one to pick as far as the Animagus thing went.

Reviewer: muggleriz
Date: 06/25/06 19:05
Chapter: Live Your Life

Great story, thanks.

Author's Response: you're welcome!

Reviewer: muggleriz
Date: 06/25/06 19:03
Chapter: Live Your Life

Great story, thanks.

Author's Response: You're welcome!

Reviewer: SpyfiTheHPLuver
Date: 06/25/06 18:39
Chapter: Live Your Life

YAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That is such a happy ending! Wow, I'm so happy that it ended happy! I mean, sure this isn't the real ending, but it should be! Wow! I can't wait for the epilogue! You need to submit it! NOW!
:D

Author's Response: Let me finish answering the reviews first! =) I'm glad you liked it. I really really really hope that the ending for the real thing is happy. I don't know what I would do with myself if it wasn't.

Reviewer: Iamhouseelf
Date: 06/25/06 17:56
Chapter: Live Your Life

OMG it's almost over I think I'm gonna cry wow wow that was such a good theory (sorry I haven't reviewed in awhile I've been on vacation) but wow it's almost over. you got anymore brilliant theory's so you can write another story to enjoy? yours had everything romance, action, dark/angsty, some comedy, a good plot, it was almost the real thing please keep writing? please?(oh and your favorites list is good to i find if I like the authors story I often like the authors favs. too so thanks for having that list)-Dobby RULES!!!

Author's Response: You're very welcome, I'm glad you liked it. I found most of my favorite stories by looking in the favorites list of other authors that I liked too. I do have other ideas, but not for Harry Potter, I'm afraid. I want to start writing a book of my own and attempt to be published. I'm not quitting my day job, so to speak, but it's something that I really want to do and I hope I can make it, but I'll never know until I try, and I think Bloomsbury and J.K. Rowling would have a bit of a problem with me if I tried to publish something like this. =) Thanks for reading, and stick around for the epilogue!

Reviewer: Iamhouseelf
Date: 06/25/06 17:21
Chapter: Bound in the Mind's Eye

ok so thirty years that's not cool, thirty years, ........thirty years? and now ginny comes back? I don't know if I like this ending so much....-Dobby RULES!!!


Author's Response: I hope you read the next chapter. =)

Reviewer: Gryffinpuff
Date: 06/24/06 20:34
Chapter: Live Your Life

Hooray! About time Harry got to live! Very touching scene with Fawkes, bravo!

Author's Response: Thanks! Harry deserves a chance to live in the real reality, doesn't he? I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: KenF
Date: 06/24/06 19:25
Chapter: Live Your Life

Fawkes was a trooper to the end. I like the way you worked his character, and, if this story was going to continue, I would miss him. Great way to un-kill the hero.

Author's Response: Yeah, Fawkes was really fun to write, and at the outset I had never intended to do him in. But then the more I got to this part of the book, and I wanted Harry to have to sacrifice EVERYTHING, but I still couldn't really kill Harry, I figured Fawkes should be able to use his ability to come back to life for someone else. It makes Fawkes even more of a hero and more of a real character. I was sad, but I was happy that it seemed to work so well, and you all seem to agree with me.

Reviewer: murgatroid
Date: 06/24/06 19:04
Chapter: Live Your Life

YAY!!!! THat was so beautiful and its verry sad that its ending, but i still LOVE YOU!!!! this is an awesome story, and the last few days have been so exciting, with chapters up sometimes twice a day =D


Cant wait for the epilogue... still its sad that its ending tho

Author's Response: It is ending, and that is sad... but all stories must end. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Ginzig
Date: 06/24/06 18:55
Chapter: Live Your Life

Beautiful... Just beautiful. Thank you for bringing Harry back with Fawkes' sacrifice-truely amazing. I'm glad you're doing an epilogue-I want to know what happens next with H/G & R/Hr.

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! I think everyone should be fairly satisfied with Harry's survival. Although he DID die, he's not dead. The epilogue will be posted post-haste.

Reviewer: SpyfiTheHPLuver
Date: 06/24/06 11:23
Chapter: Song of the Phoenix

OMG THAT IS SOOOOOOOO UNFAIR!!!!!! You may like cliffhangers, but no one else does! Nooooo! I really hope that they validate this one faster than they have a history of because I can't wait very long! I may just explode if they don't get it up within a few days. Wow. It was a really good chapter. I am SO happy that the stuff from last chapter was cleared up, because I didn't like what was happening. That's a definite sigh of relief. But Harry didn't really die, did he? I don't think he did...

Author's Response: I think, deep down, you all like cliffhangers. They were doing so well, validating two a day there for a little while. Now it's the third day since I posted the latest update and they haven't gotten to it yet. Well, hopefully it will be up soon, and the truth will be revealed. Then I can post the Epilogue and the story will be complete. =)

Reviewer: SpyfiTheHPLuver
Date: 06/24/06 11:23
Chapter: Song of the Phoenix

OMG THAT IS SOOOOOOOO UNFAIR!!!!!! You may like cliffhangers, but no one else does! Nooooo! I really hope that they validate this one faster than they have a history of because I can't wait very long! I may just explode if they don't get it up within a few days. Wow. It was a really good chapter. I am SO happy that the stuff from last chapter was cleared up, because I didn't like what was happening. That's a definite sigh of relief. But Harry didn't really die, did he? I don't think he did...

Author's Response: I'm responding to the other one. =)

Reviewer: jesusfreak2134
Date: 06/23/06 23:45
Chapter: Song of the Phoenix

Your story is amazing! I haven't posted any other reviews because I was kind of lazy (sorry), but I know Harry's not going to die. in one of your comments in a previous chapter you said that you would never kill of Harry or Ginny (I was kind of shocked that you would reveal something that important to the story but... THANK-YOU! I DON'T HAVE TO WORRY NOW! HARRY'S GONNA LIVE! please keep writing and please don't kill hermione off (somehow...). can't wait for the rest of this story and future stories from you!

Author's Response: Thanks for enjoying. I was wondering when people would start remembering those old posts. I revealed that because I didn't want people to abandon the story. If I was reading someone else's and I really thought they were going to kill Harry or Ginny, I would just stop reading. So I made sure there were hints for anyone like me. =) The rest of the story should be up soon, hopefully. As for future stories from me... Well, I might do some short stuff every now and again, but I think I'm going to work on my own original book instead, with the idea that if it's good enough I'm going to try and publish. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: mime
Date: 06/23/06 16:08
Chapter: Song of the Phoenix

Ok....where do I begin...lol

So I figure last chapter was what was going on inside the "mind's eye". It was like a fabricated reality...kind of giving Harry the strength to be able to conquer. Love the whole 3 days = 30 years. But I have to wonder, what's going to happen now?? And when you say Fawkes began to sing again, in what way was he? Oh, I know you won't answer that, since you may give something away, but......ahhhh!! Part of me figures that Harry is alive, but then another part of me wonders how much of the mind's eye reality was fake. I mean, did Harry REALLY give up the whole of his being? And if he did, doesn't that make him, erm, dead? Oh I really hope not!

Anyway, I'd better stop with my ranting and keep it to myself. hehe....you have a fabulous fic on your hands, if you didn't already know. Can't wait for the next chapter! The only thing that annoyed me is that the next chap appeared to be up, and I was in a real groove with my reading, and it won't lemme see it! The admins better hurry up and approve!

lol

hehe

-Christy

Author's Response: I won't answer much, but I will say that Harry did give up the whole of his being when he destroyed Voldemort. It was a real magical spell, and it affected Voldemort in both realities because he used everything to cast it. Does that mean he's dead? Well... =) Thank you for reading and enjoying. I hope the next chapter is up soon so I can post the epilogue.

Reviewer: mime
Date: 06/23/06 16:08
Chapter: Song of the Phoenix

Ok....where do I begin...lol

So I figure last chapter was what was going on inside the "mind's eye". It was like a fabricated reality...kind of giving Harry the strength to be able to conquer. Love the whole 3 days = 30 years. But I have to wonder, what's going to happen now?? And when you say Fawkes began to sing again, in what way was he? Oh, I know you won't answer that, since you may give something away, but......ahhhh!! Part of me figures that Harry is alive, but then another part of me wonders how much of the mind's eye reality was fake. I mean, did Harry REALLY give up the whole of his being? And if he did, doesn't that make him, erm, dead? Oh I really hope not!

Anyway, I'd better stop with my ranting and keep it to myself. hehe....you have a fabulous fic on your hands, if you didn't already know. Can't wait for the next chapter! The only thing that annoyed me is that the next chap appeared to be up, and I was in a real groove with my reading, and it won't lemme see it! The admins better hurry up and approve!

lol

hehe

-Christy

Author's Response: I'm responding to the other one. =)

Reviewer: DumbleFanNo1
Date: 06/23/06 14:13
Chapter: The Noble and Most Destroyed House of Black

I loved this chapter. I think it is great that you incorporated Grindewauld into the story.

Author's Response: yeah, good old Grindelwald. How much of a place in the story he has you will soon find out.

Reviewer: DumbleFanNo1
Date: 06/23/06 13:46
Chapter: Dead End

Absolutely great, I loved this!

Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: DumbleFanNo1
Date: 06/23/06 13:28
Chapter: New Pets

Of course, I'll let you know... yeah the chapter was a bit silly, but it yielded some good stuff though. Can't wait for 18.


Author's Response: Silliness is necessary, I've decided.

Reviewer: DumbleFanNo1
Date: 06/23/06 13:17
Chapter: Phoenix Eyes

Hey, I loved this story, it ended really well. I loved the part where Harry forgave Remus somewhat though. You make Harry who he really is!

Author's Response: Yeah, I didn't think Harry would hold a grudge for this one. I work hard to keep the characters real, and I appreciate that you think I do a good job.

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