Reviewer: Poppy
Date: 06/28/06 8:19
Chapter: Preparation

I like this chapter before the battle, it is realistic. It is a calm momement before storm.

Author's Response: A calm moment filled with no small amount of trepidation. I actually think that that 'last battle' so to speak won't have anywhere near so much advance warning in the real book, but for what i wanted this worked out really well. Thanks!

Reviewer: Silvygreen
Date: 06/27/06 21:13
Chapter: Epilogue

Absolutely wonderful. Sigh, you're right unfortunatley, Jo will probably never give us something like this. It was great reading your stuff; it wasn't hard as it was so fantastic. If you right something else please let me know at Your admiring fan, silvygreen

Author's Response: I responded to the last one, but thanks again!

Reviewer: Silvygreen
Date: 06/27/06 21:13
Chapter: Epilogue

Absolutely wonderful. Sigh, you're right unfortunatley, Jo will probably never give us something like this. It was great reading your stuff; it wasn't hard as it was so fantastic. If you right something else please let me know at Your admiring fan, silvygreen

Author's Response: Thank you very much, I'm really glad you liked it. I'll keep the address and let you know! =)

Reviewer: feistyorange
Date: 06/27/06 20:13
Chapter: Epilogue

I haven't reviewed for any chapter, so this review is for the entire story....
It was wonderful!! I seriously thought Harry was gone and was amazed, shocked and ecstatic when it was all an alternate reality (I guess that's what you'd call it), and your epilogue was hilarious!! Your write wonderfully, and I will definately keep an eye out for any future pieces from you!!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm not sure if there will be much in the future from me, but we'll see... I'm somewhat of a pushover and lots of people keep asking me...

Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie
Date: 06/27/06 15:41
Chapter: Epilogue

"...and he and Fleur had had seven daughters, all of whom were as beautiful as their daughters." As their daughters? I think that should be parents. haha. "and he had been arrested twice by Ron at different times when he was pursuing business ventures with Mundungus Fletcher" *cracks up* "though she claimed Harry took more time and looking after than any three of the other children put together." *continues to crack up* "Sometimes he really regretted the fact that Ginny had learned the culinary arts from her mother so well." *still laughing* "Grandpa saw to that." Yeah, tickling is pretty bad. Oi. I loved it! thank you soooo much for the great read! I've already recommended it to others, and I will continue to do so. :o) I think this was s really great epilogue, in that it tied everything together in such a happy way. It was really good. Gosh! I'm still laughing. Gah! *strangles* :-) Thanks again, and continue to write..*hint hint*

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked all of that. I tried to put in a lot of fun and happy things... Harry deserves it. I'll fix the daughters thing right now too. We'll see about the continued writing.

Reviewer: Poppy
Date: 06/27/06 14:01
Chapter: A Shattered Sword

OH WOW!!! Top Notch - Wish I could put off my next meeting!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you enjoy the rest!

Reviewer: Conmelmic
Date: 06/27/06 8:01
Chapter: Epilogue

I haven't reviewed your story until now. But I wanted you to know that I always got excited when I came in to find that Harry Potter and the Mind's Eye was updated. I usually read it with my morning tea before starting work. I don't think J.K Rowling will put in an Epilogue either but I really enjoyed yours, it's nice to know how all the characters eventually lived their lives. Thanks for the great read.


Author's Response: You're very welcome. I'll forgive you for not reviewing before since you did now. =) Thanks for enjoying!

Reviewer: roniexz
Date: 06/27/06 4:59
Chapter: Epilogue

This story was wonderful.Great ending never thought of one like this,this is out of this world.Oh i wish i could use oblivate charm and read the story again.

Author's Response: Wouldn't that be fantastic? I can think of dozens of books and series that I would read again... well I read them again anyway. Who knows how many times I've read the real Harry Potter series, for instance. But thank you for letting me know you enjoyed my little tale. That's what makes it worthwhile to write.

Reviewer: brianarthurpotter
Date: 06/27/06 0:15
Chapter: Epilogue

Perfect Ending!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: HJaneWeasley
Date: 06/26/06 21:56
Chapter: Epilogue

Awww, what a wonderful way to tie up this tale which I've been reading since the beginning =). It's come a long way! Congratulations.

Author's Response: Thanks for sticking around! =) I hope everyone is satisfied, and at least partially sated in their hunger for Harry Potter, which won't REALLY be satisfied until the real thing comes out. Hopefully I've filled it up just a little!

Reviewer: murgatroid
Date: 06/26/06 21:52
Chapter: Epilogue




I am almost crying, that was so so beautiful. The only thing that is stopping me is the fact that i am in my school library and there is a complete stranger who is looking at me funny already. I plan to bawl my eyes out as soon as i can get home and reread it.

But seriously, Harry = a grandad? pure utter genius.
You get Murgie's GOLD award of the month. That is exactly what i want the epilogue in book7 to be like, and the Hermione/Ron thing made me laugh (before i started nearly crying again...)

well, i have to go, and i dont have anything else to say because this chapter was so perfect. Well done =D

Author's Response: Yeah, Harry would have fun as a Grandfather. I think the best part for me was the idea of Harry driving the Knight Bus, with Stan Shunpike, and picking up stranded witches and wizards. Well, anyway, I like to have all or most of the loose ends tied up. You end up more satisfied that way. Thank you so much for your reviews and support!

Reviewer: SpyfiTheHPLuver
Date: 06/26/06 19:59
Chapter: Leaving for Good

It's me again. You should write another story! This one was so good, so I know your next one would be! And I would definitely read the whole thing, even if I didn't like it at first, because I didn't like this one at first, but look how my mind changed! Please! Write another story!

Author's Response: I don't know if I will or not... I have really enjoyed writing, but I want more time for writing my own stuff so I can try and publish. If that fails, I think I would probably return to writing fanfiction as a hobby instead, but only if I fail, and I sincerely hope I don't! I may write a one chapter thing here and there, like something on why Snape was good, or a few more chapters from the Mind's Eye. I wanted to stretch that part out a lot more, but I decided that I would lose readers if they really thought that that was real. Anyway, we'll see. Thanks so much for your support and reviews!

Reviewer: SpyfiTheHPLuver
Date: 06/26/06 19:55
Chapter: Epilogue

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THAT WAS SUCH A HAPPY ENDING!!!!!!!!! I know what you mean about JK not ending it like this, but I wish she would.
Because it was such a great ending! YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am soooooooooooooooooo happy with your ending! And I desperately wish that it was the real ending! It really warms my heart that Harry lives to be an old guy with lots of grandkids. One thing, though - for wizards, ninety-four is a pretty young age to die. JK said that wizards live longer than Muggles. For example, Dumbledore is around 150 in the books, and I think McGonnagal is 90. Just wanted to let you know. Otherwise, it was sooooooooooooooooooooo good! This is the best fic I've read so far! Wow! I'm just sad that it's ending. I'll probably read it again! Haha. And I'll DEFINITELY tell all my friends about this! Wow!!!!! It was soooooooooooo good!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Yeah, I realize that 94 is a young age to die, and I should have specified how Mrs. Weasley died, but I didn't. I just figured anyone who raised a batch of seven kids with Fred and George among them probably would have a few years shaved off. =) Anyway, I'm glad you liked the ending. I did too. Thanks for telling your friends!

Reviewer: DarkWind
Date: 06/26/06 18:19
Chapter: Epilogue

Excellent story. The epilogue enabled the fantasy of happily ever after to become reality...thank you for the entertainment.

Author's Response: You're very welcome!

Reviewer: Poppy
Date: 06/26/06 17:30
Chapter: New Pets

Firstly - I have been at work reading this for over 5 hours!!!! Sorry for no reviews, with so much posted the Next button was to tempting. BUT at the A/N I had to stop, I really enjoyed this chapter it was light and fun and definitely a reminder that these are TEENAGERS. I laughed a lot, THANK YOU!!!

Author's Response: I'm really glad you liked it. I think Harry has a hard time remembering that he's a teenager sometimes.

Reviewer: harrypotterfan12345
Date: 06/26/06 16:50
Chapter: Epilogue

Your Story was so good! I have already told three of my friends about it. You are such a good writer, and I hope you keep it up!

Author's Response: Thank you for speading the word! I hope people continue to find the story and write reviews, even now that it is done.

Reviewer: Ginzig
Date: 06/26/06 16:09
Chapter: Epilogue

Beautiful ending! Wonderful story! Thank you!

Author's Response: You're very welcome! I'm very glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: KenF
Date: 06/26/06 16:00
Chapter: Epilogue

Yay! I love a happily ever after, even if I do keep rooting for the hero to snuff it.

You told a good story, and I liked the rapid updates. Thanks!

Author's Response: Thanks for your many reviews!

Reviewer: Gryffinpuff
Date: 06/26/06 15:57
Chapter: Epilogue

It's over *tear*! Wonderful work, I will miss reading your chapters!!

Author's Response: I will miss posting them and getting the reviews.

Reviewer: DumbleFanNo1
Date: 06/26/06 14:51
Chapter: Bound in the Mind's Eye

How? I don't like the fact that you put Harry as a person equal to the Death Eaters, Jo doesn't write like that. I must say this, kudos goes to you for thinking outside the box.

Author's Response: I don't think of him as being equal to the Death Eaters. Good people do things they regret later when they are grieving, and Harry has already shown himself capable of getting really angry; Bellatrix Lestrange and the Cruciatus Curse? He's already tried to use unforgivables before, and he lost a lot more all at once than when Sirius died. I was trying to go a little outside the box though. I think you'll like it better as you keep reading.

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