Reviewer: tank21
Date: 08/08/06 10:13
Chapter: Live Your Life

I think you did a great job on this chapter. I thought that the way you brought Harry back was really touching and would look great as a movie scene. When Harry is reflecting on his scar and how he was being defined by it I liked how you made the comment about Ginny looking in his eyes disproving part of that comment. Thanks for such a great story.

Author's Response: Thanks for such a nice review! I'm really glad you enjoyed the story, and I hope you'll read the sequel, too. I do tend to describe things like they would be scenes in a movie. If only my story had a decent soundtrack...

Reviewer: Sunflower at Dusk
Date: 08/01/06 16:34
Chapter: Epilogue

I Love this story!!! You write really well. I agree with you about Fred and George getting married.

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it, and I like it when people agree with me too! =) I hope you'll read the sequel too!

Reviewer: Gred_and_Forges_girl
Date: 07/26/06 1:16
Chapter: Epilogue

aaawww, that's so cute. Harry being called 'grandpa' it's weird, isn't it? We all know so much about Harry, (possibly more than he knows himself) and just the thought of him being a grandpa and growing old with Ginny and seventeen billion's just so darn CUTE! I gotta say something, though. I don't think Fred and George will ever get married, because that would mean they would have to seperate. But I belive that F&G will be more like how you wrote Percy- spoiling thier little red-haired, green-eyed neices and nephews, and managing the Wesleys Wizard Wheezes empire.
Anywho, I'm done now, I thought you did a brilliant job with this fic and I fully intened to read the sequel, Legacy of Sacrifice. And mabye it can tide me over till book seven comes out, or at least until midnight, mabye. . . .

Author's Response: I obviously disagree about whether or not Fred and George would get married; thus what I wrote. But I'm glad you liked it all, and I really hope you like the sequel too!

Reviewer: moine
Date: 07/16/06 20:36
Chapter: A Shattered Sword

Every now and then it will say how Harry "saw" things but how would he be able to see if hes blind and just woke up so im guessing he wasnt using fawkes yet. or does he just automaticly see from his view?

Author's Response: I assumed that if Fawkes is awake and Harry is awake, then Harry would be using Fawkes. If one of them is asleep, then they wouldn't be. And sometimes, I'm sure I just made mistakes. I'm not perfect, and I would never claim my story is perfect. I'm a new writer, and I do my best.

Reviewer: moine
Date: 07/16/06 19:43
Chapter: From the Dead

After Harry got Hagrid and Harry supposedly "died" when they set up camp, Hermione said they couldnt leave because Fawkes couldnt take them, but why didnt one of them just make a portkey

Author's Response: Hagrid was never "dead" just Harry. Hagrid was only hurt. Anyway, only Harry can make a Portkey. Hermione never had before, and I never said she could and niether has J.K. Rowling. And if Hermione can't, then Hagrid sure can't. Thus they're stuck.

Reviewer: Katastrophe
Date: 07/15/06 18:05
Chapter: Leaving for Good

First of all, congratualtions on your wedding. I hope you life together is wonderfully happy and prosperous.

Onto the review....I have spent most of this afternoon doing nothing but reading your story. It was captivating and so wonderfully written. I had planned a sort of Mind's Eye scene for my own story, but I am heading back to the drawing board, as I don't think I will even be able to compare. It is my sincerest hope that you do continue writing.

Not many people think of the adjustments that have to be made when sight, hearing, or a loss of motor function happens. It seems to change the way that the world is looked at. I know this from experience, at least the motor function part. It was encouraging to see that someone could express the anger, fear, and sorrow that a person has to go through before acceptance and adjustment can be found.

I have babbled on long enough, I hope I covered everything. LOL. Please continue in your writing, you have a wonderful talent! ~~Kat

Author's Response: Wow, thanks very much! I'm really glad you enjoyed everything, and I hope you'll check out the sequel. Good luck on your story too!

Reviewer: mesalike
Date: 07/12/06 10:42
Chapter: Live Your Life

oh iget it. sorry i didnt read it propaly. amazing chapter, i think your story is amazing

Author's Response: Thanks; I tried to be pretty clear, but the whole concept is confusing in its own way. I'm glad you got it!

Reviewer: mesalike
Date: 07/12/06 10:41
Chapter: Live Your Life

oh iget it. sorry i didnt read it propaly. amazing chapter, i think your story is amazing

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: mesalike
Date: 07/12/06 10:38
Chapter: Live Your Life

i dont get it aint ginny and hermione dead? good story though

Author's Response: Yeah, I didn't really kill anyone important.

Reviewer: asphyx
Date: 07/11/06 18:11
Chapter: Epilogue

One word:
and then a couple more:
id just like to say that you are an amazing writer! so articulate and you have such an amazing imagination! thanks for the journey! haha it was great!

Author's Response: Thanks! Check out the sequal, Legacy of Sacrifice. The first chapter is up, and the next is in the queue. It's under Post-Hogwarts Era in General Fics. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: hogwartswannabe
Date: 07/10/06 22:11
Chapter: New Pets

that was so good! i love this story so far, and can't wait to read the next chapters!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! You'll have to let me know what you think of the restof the story!

Reviewer: RoxyMarie
Date: 07/08/06 2:14
Chapter: Epilogue

Sweet story. I enjoyed reading it!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Wilder
Date: 07/03/06 17:18
Chapter: Dead End

This was a very good chapter. One question though. Can a phoenix remember anything from a past life?
I am liking the story very much!

Author's Response: The way I have imagined things, they must be able to, though they have to mature and grow again. This makes sense to me, if they are to be especially faithful. I think they would go through a time of childhood that they wouldn't remember much of, and then once fully mature they would remember evreything. Hopefully that makes sense. Thanks!

Reviewer: Pottergirl
Date: 06/30/06 17:21
Chapter: Epilogue

Harry did Bullriding!? *Whistles* I LOVE THIS CHAPPIE!!!!! WRITE ANOTHER!!!!! 10/10
He seems like an awesome Grandpa:Just as she began to look suspicious, Harry leaped from his hiding place with a roar, picking up little Arthur as he did and tickling the child mercilessly. Arthur giggled as he called for help against the invisible monster, and soon Harry was wrestled to the ground as the children attacked him. He gave up a good defense, throwing tickling charms with his hand left and right. He rarely used his wand for anything anymore, since he hardly needed the extra power or control.
Ginny is also a wonderful Grandma:Finally, Ginny hit him with a freezing charm and he was unable to move as the children tickled him until tears were running down his face from laughter.


Author's Response: It was all fun to write, and fun to picture in my mind; that's how I imagine they would be, anyway, so that's what I did. I'm really glad you liked it.

Reviewer: MayItBe
Date: 06/29/06 6:50
Chapter: Epilogue

Oh, that was so sweet and a great ending. I love how you did this epilogue and I loved how Harry was not a professional Quidditch player, like most people have in their stories. It was quite original and I absolutely loved every minute of it!

Author's Response: I think Harry might have been a professional Quidditch player for a while... I did't write it, but I did say he did just about anything he wanted. Still, I agree with you. I don't really see Harry becoming a professional athlete; he wouldn't like the excessive press. Anyway, thank you very much; orginality was my goal, and I'm glad I succeeded! Thanks!

Reviewer: Poppy
Date: 06/28/06 16:26
Chapter: Epilogue

Thank you !!! Top Notch conclusion.

Author's Response: Thank you, it was really fun to write!

Reviewer: Fingolfin
Date: 06/28/06 12:30
Chapter: Epilogue

Fantastic ending to a fantastic story. It's been a pleasure reading your work. I hope to see more.

Author's Response: My thanks for a fantastic review! Maybe there will be more, I'm still not sure... =)

Reviewer: Fingolfin
Date: 06/28/06 12:29
Chapter: Epilogue

Fantastic ending to a fantastic story. It's been a pleasure reading your work. I hope to see more.

Author's Response: I replied to the next one. =)

Reviewer: hmp
Date: 06/28/06 10:47
Chapter: Epilogue

Wow your story is just as good as JK's in my opinion. The last few chapters were great never a dull moment. I was on the edge of my seat the whole time either happy or very angry. Now this last chapter to sum it all up was great. It showed us that Harry did just as Dumbledore said and lived his life. Well anyways I have enjoyed your story since the first few chapters, truely the best i have read yet on this site. kodos to you :)

Author's Response: Thanks for sticking around; I have always appreciated your reviews. I don't know about the best on the site... but perhaps it would be churlish to diagree. Who can say, but I think I did alright. =)

Reviewer: Iamhouseelf
Date: 06/28/06 9:50
Chapter: Epilogue

are you going to write more or is this it? oh come on can't I pressure you in to writing more? no? oh fine at least I got to read the most brilliant fanfic on mugglenet thanks for the happy ending it was wonderful but did it have to end so soon? that's the only reason I'm not looking forward to the 7th's gonna be over thanks for writing it was phoenomanal -Dobby RULES!!!

Author's Response: I'm not saying I WON'T write more, but at the least it will be a while before I do. Othre projects, other endeavors, you know? I know what you mean about the series ending... it will be quite the bittersweet moment when first I hold that book in my hands...

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