Reviews For Potions
Reviewer: SFIE
Date: 01/03/14 19:27
Chapter: Epilogue - Hogwart's

This was an amazing fanfiction I cried my eyes out laughed and smiled at the end. Just wauw greetings from belgium

Reviewer: CordialCormac
Date: 08/11/13 7:40
Chapter: Epilogue - Hogwart's

I cannot begin to express how much I enjoyed this fanfiction. I was in tears when Draco returned to Hermione, and it's 4:37 AM and I'm feeling uncharacteristically emotional and sentimental. You are a brilliant writer, and you've managed to capture the respective essences of the characters JK created, yet added elements of your own that didn't seem odd or out of place. I am a sucker for Dramione fics, but after this, I'm a sucker for anything written by Soap.

Seriously, you're effing brilliant.

Reviewer: imacar
Date: 12/10/12 20:05
Chapter: Epilogue - Hogwart's

Wow!! I luved it! Ur an excellent author!

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/12/12 19:13
Chapter: Epilogue - Hogwart's

I loved this chapter. At first, I thought Hermione was approaching Malfoy Manor for the first time after the battle but it turned out that Narcissa was babysitting. I always like a positive ending to a story and this ending works for me. I'll have to figure out what else I want to read from you. Great story.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/12/12 18:58
Chapter: Battle

That was even more wonderful than the last chapter which was also wonderful. Lucius was horrible, trying to Avada Kedavra his son and girlfriend after finding out they had a son together. I'm glad Draco made it with no obvious ill effects. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/12/12 18:02
Chapter: Plan

That was wonderful. I love how the Order has accepted Draco, especially when Molly said that if Harry and Draco could agree on something it was certainly significant. I think I'd be envious if I was Draco after hearing Harry's conversation with Hermione. Great chapter. I hope everyone gets home safely after they attack DE Headquarters.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/11/12 22:23
Chapter: Discussions

That was a very sweet chapter. Alex seems very grown-up in that he understands what people are saying and responds appropriately. I hope this all works out--that the Order gets into Death Eater Headquarters and kills Voldemort. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/11/12 20:59
Chapter: Distant

Somehow I forgot to read this chapter. I read the next one, wondering how we got there. So that's how Hermione ended up with Alex. I'm surprised that the elder Malfoys didn't know they had a grandchild or that Draco didn't find out since she gave him the last name of Malfoy. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/11/12 19:59
Chapter: Shocked

Wow--I did not see that coming. Draco's lucky that Harry and Ron didn't Avada Kedavra him right away. I'd be worried that the Death Eaters will find out that Draco didn't do what he was supposed to do and do it for him. I wonder if Draco will be able to hide out at Harry's house. Great chapter--surprising events.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/06/12 19:51
Chapter: Conflict

That was all just sad. I do think Draco and Hermione need to talk. I still have doubts as to whether they can get back together though. I would think that the fact they slept together would create more of an obstacle for them to get back together. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/06/12 18:40
Chapter: Thief

I'm sure Hermione did have sweet dreams. It's too bad their relationship is headed down the wrong path. Of course, you might still surprise us in the end. I'm always trying to guess how a story will go and I'm usually wrong. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/05/12 20:59
Chapter: Christmas

Draco's not the only one who thought "oh no, no, no" when he opened his letter. Of all times for Lucius to come home. I wondered how you were going to get Draco to the wrong side and I guess this is it. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/04/12 20:29
Chapter: Quidditch

I loved that Hermione found her own way to support Draco's team. I think it's great that Draco threatened Pansy. Maybe she'll watch out for Hermione. It seems like things are going so well that I wonder what happens to end it all. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/04/12 15:39
Chapter: Patronus

That was a very romantic chapter. It's hard to imagine that Draco becomes what he is at the beginning of this story. I love Draco's Patronus. I thought Hermione's might be a female dragon. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 08/30/12 18:21
Chapter: Technically

I'm glad they're both still "technically" virgins:D I think the Death Eater topic is going to be the thing that comes between them in the end. Draco seems to think he's helpless in controlling his destiny.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 08/30/12 17:19
Chapter: Reconciliation

Thanks for letting me vicariously enjoy Draco flirting with Hermione. I'm sure that was hard for Harry and Ron to apologize to Hermione and tell her she can date anyone she wants. I have to keep reading because I want to know where it goes in the end--considering Draco's mission and all.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 08/29/12 18:45
Chapter: Truce

Why doesn't any one ever take me out for an expensive bottle of wine. I'm surprised that Hogwarts students can go to lunch and drink. I know they drink butter beer but that seems different than wine. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 08/28/12 20:51
Chapter: Rumours

I find myself smiling at Draco's comments. Maybe if Hermione believes he's a virgin, she'll be more attracted to him. Pansy's not going to be happy though. This is getting so interesting.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 08/28/12 20:27
Chapter: Exhibitionism

If I didn't know any better I would think that both Draco and Hermione had swallowed some strange love potion. When people get thrown together like that they tend to become very close. I smiled more than once in this chapter when they couldn't get each other off their minds. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 08/28/12 18:56
Chapter: Revenge

I don't mean this in an insulting way but I can really tell the difference between your early and later work. It shows how you've grown as a writer. This story is written more simply. I'm enjoying it a lot so far. I can't believe Snape blatantly let Draco pollute Hermione's potion without punishment.

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