nice start! excellent, it would be wonderful if you started posting again though :P
Author's Response: SORRY!!! I will, I promise! I said I'd finish the story first, and I've only got 19 days left. I'll give it my best shot.
I think Luna's thoughts are a little OOC, but otherwise, yopu kept good character. I like this story- it's cool!
Another good story would be Serene and Lost- Lunarry fic as well! I wrote it, and I really like it. chapter 1 coming soon! Check it out, and review please!
oh please please please continue, and quickly! i lurrrve this story!
Another excellent chapter. Keep posting, as if I could stop you!
Excellent beginning, I think I'm hooked. I loved the part about changing his path. It was described perfectly. Definitely made me think!
three words: OH MY GOD. THIS STORY IS SO COMPLETELY ADORABLE! the letter didn't come off as corny either. sometimes i read the other fanfics and they start off really corny but still cute. but this was perfect. great tone. and I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE. PLEASE SUBMIT MORE. IT WOULD BE SO WONDERFUL.