Reviewer: HPwizzzard
Date: 12/07/06 16:36
Chapter: Jessie

That actually made me say, "Aww," out loud. It was very sweet. There's just no other word.

Reviewer: orpheus
Date: 10/31/06 17:52
Chapter: Kristine

This is really good. I mean REALLY good.

Reviewer: orpheus
Date: 10/31/06 17:47
Chapter: Abbe

stylistically well done - this is the closest parallel to JKR's openings that I've seen among the entries. the problem is the plot. Voldemort and the Death Eaters aren't stupid. They would realize that Dumbledore told Harry about the protection given him in Petunia's home, and that it ends with his 17th Birthday, and that Harry wouldn't leave himself unprotected when the magic expired.

Reviewer: Tempest_Dragonqueen
Date: 10/12/06 18:35
Chapter: Matt

Cool dude. I really like this.

Reviewer: tilly
Date: 08/26/06 23:16
Chapter: Stacey

ooh, what was it?! i like this. you captured both characters really well. now, if you could just let us know what exactly is happening, that'd be great!

Reviewer: tilly
Date: 08/26/06 23:12
Chapter: Stacey

ooh, what was it?! i like this. you captured both characters really well. now, if you could just let us know what exactly is happening, that'd be great!

Reviewer: tilly
Date: 08/26/06 23:11
Chapter: Phoenixfire

a more thoughtful and, in a way, realistic version of what abbe was trying to get at. i like this, especially your description of harry as a shadow - very powerful.

Reviewer: tilly
Date: 08/26/06 23:10
Chapter: Morgan

cool twist!!! but how?!!

Reviewer: tilly
Date: 08/26/06 23:09
Chapter: Mendax

a really sensitive and realistic look at draco. i think dumbledore is right, malfoy may not be a nice person, but that doesn't mean he is evil and this shows it perfectly. a very well written fic. i think this could easily slot into the 7th book, esp as it doesn't assume anything about plot, other than leaving malfoy and snape alone. i'm very impressde

Reviewer: tilly
Date: 08/26/06 23:08
Chapter: Matt

i really, really, really liked this! i haven't read the winners yet, but i am shocked it wasn't you. i would love if this was the start of 7 really, implausable as the whole scrimingeour thing appears - i think i have some luna in me!! you have to continue with this...

Reviewer: tilly
Date: 08/26/06 23:06
Chapter: Loren

lol, i liked this. a lighthearted look at what could be very depressing. well done! so like dumbledore to go for theatrics, as old Phineas said, he got style!!!

Reviewer: tilly
Date: 08/26/06 23:05
Chapter: Janet

i'm there more???

Reviewer: tilly
Date: 08/26/06 23:04
Chapter: Craig

i get the idea, i just don't think it works...maybe moving too fast, i'm not sure

Reviewer: tilly
Date: 08/26/06 23:03
Chapter: Cindy

wow, excellent! love the cliffhanger, love how you get right in there...what about the wedding though?! excellent writing!

Reviewer: tilly
Date: 08/26/06 23:02
Chapter: Kristine

though i like this as a standalone, i'm not loving the introduction of more new characters into the start of the book. also, would a muggle child have been allowed to remember the dark mark? then again, was she a muggle...

Reviewer: tilly
Date: 08/26/06 23:01
Chapter: Abbe

interesting. i liked the theory that the deatheaters would pounce but not quite sure i'm wholly convinced by this as the start of the book. i would be interested to read more though :o)

Reviewer: hogwartsgirl52
Date: 07/26/06 17:38
Chapter: Phoenixfire

I wish there was a chapter 2 to this! It's really interesting!

Reviewer: notabanana
Date: 07/05/06 17:58
Chapter: Kristine

My favorite!

Reviewer: orangemnmz14
Date: 06/09/06 20:41
Chapter: Jessie

YAYAYAYAY! That's Tonks and Remus, right? lol, if it is, I'm sooooooo happy! if not, oh well, I'm still happy because that was an amaaaaaaaaazing story.

Reviewer: Xavier
Date: 06/03/06 18:25
Chapter: Loren

Great story I hope you win

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