Reviewer: ChrissyOfGryffindor
Date: 09/10/06 18:54
Chapter: Confessions

This is a great story. (I'm sorry I didn't review before now.) You have a wonderful writing style. I loved the end, though at the same time I hated it as well. I cannot wait for the sequel. (By the way, I'm glad you're doing a sequel instead of adding more chapters; it would ruin the wonderful cliffhanger if you simply made this story longer.)

Author's Response: That's okay, I just like it when people leave their thoughts and comments at the end of the story even, it's just a nice feeling to know that people like it enough to have read it all the way through!

Reviewer: cedriclover
Date: 09/09/06 21:37
Chapter: Confessions

ooh yay you updated!!

oh i can't wait for your next chapter, it will probably be so exciting, especially since you ended wtih malfoy's eyes opening! maybe he's not in a coma anymore, but he can see around him. or maybe he'll be able to talk to, blah blah blah. there are so many possibilities! =] hah, and of course i stuck by you when it took you FOREVER to update. that's what readers do. well. at least i do. anyway thaaanks lunar! i totally have faith in you and your writing ability :D can't wait for the next!

Author's Response: Hi cedriclover thanks for reviewing! I'm so glad you're looking forward to the next part of the story (Into the Light) which will be up soon, promise. Again, I have to thank you for sticking by me through all the times when I've failed to update as quickly as you wanted =) Bear with me, I'm not stopping the story yet!!!!

Reviewer: quidditchchick222
Date: 09/09/06 21:12
Chapter: Confessions

everyone else pretty much summed up what i believe!! Great story, really hope you tidy up the end, or start a sequel!!! Love that it was a truck that hit!! Please keep writing!!

Author's Response: Hiya, yeah my sequel, Into the Light, will be starting soon. I'm glad you liked the reason Malfoy was put in a coma, I was a bit worried about it. Anyway, thanks a million for your review!!

Reviewer: sapphire_shadow
Date: 09/09/06 19:59
Chapter: Loneliness someone in the room with her!? omg awesome...i need excitement...i crave it KEEP WRITING KEEP WRITING!

Author's Response: Is someone in the room with her? No, not aside form Draco (if he counts ;))

Reviewer: Tinks
Date: 09/09/06 15:56
Chapter: Confessions

You are seriously NOT kidding? That is such a shame. Why did you want to get the story over with? Wasn't it fun to write anymore to you? Because I loved reading it and it seemed that if something is that good, it must be fun to write, too. But on the other hand, I'm no good continuous writer, so I wouldn't really know. When I was younger I always started a story with a lot of enthusiasm and then after the first chapter I didn't like it anymore. lol. Not that I'm accusing you of that! Such an interesting plot you have/had.
I would really like to know what happened to Ginny!! You can't just leave us with a cliffhanger where we get all anxious about Ginny's absence and then, in the next chapter pretend nothing's happened! Please do say what happened to her (And NO, I wouldn't believe you if you just said she had toilet problems and had to stay in the bathroom the whole two days or so that have passed, onky to get rid of my questions! ;-))
I still can't believe it.
Ah well. We all have to go through the five stages of grief and then go on, isn't that right? It's just that I am so disappointed. You have to be kidding! Or if you're really not, do write a sequel. or SOMETHING. (You noticing how desperate I am ?!?! lol)

Author's Response: Hi again Tinks! Thanks for leaving another review. Sorry I haven't gotten back to you in so long but now I'm back on Mugglenet and my next chapter will be up soon! But I'm afraid you'll have to wait to find out what happens to Ginny. :)

Reviewer: Chellaei
Date: 09/09/06 10:16
Chapter: Confessions

Are you going to write a second one? Please write a second one, it's just not fair to end it that way. Well, I suppose you can, if you promise to keep writing other stories, your a brilliant writer.

Author's Response: Hi Chellaei thanks for your lovely review. I'm going to keep writing and my second part of the story (Into the Light) will be submitted soon. Thanks again!!!

Reviewer: Tinks
Date: 09/09/06 9:16
Chapter: Confessions

Hi! I liked this chapter. It's not as good as the previous one in my opinion but it's still quite nice. I like that we learn so much about what has happened to Draco after the scene in the Astronomy Tower etc.
And I have come to the conclusion that this cannot be the end. I seriously cannot and will not believe that. The "ending" would in my opinion even be a fairly good ending, if you had sometime throughout the fiction indicated that those two have feelings for another- I mean, hey! It's a romance fic, isn't it? Then the ending would be ok. But as it is, it kind of would suck if you left it at this. And that would be a shame, for I have been really enjoying reading your story. And such an end would rather be crappy. And it would be quite unsocial to leave off here because we haven't even learned about what happened to Ginny. I think you should have made Hermione notice earlier (What am I talking about, she didn't even notice anything!) that her friend was missing, rather than her cat (though Crookshanks is a lovely creature ;-))
Well, I hope you're happy now that you're receiving some more reviews, was that your goal?
Goodbye for now!

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for your review. I'm sorry that you didn't like the last chapter as much as the other ones, I think I was a bit eager to get to the end that I could have written the first bits better. Your conclusion is a valid one and I know an end like that wouldn't be very good but I'll let everyone know if I'm going to write a sequel over the next week or two. And I'm delighted with the reviews I got, I have way more than I ever expected. Thanks again for reviewing, it was great to hear from you! ~lunar~

Reviewer: slimemonster
Date: 09/09/06 8:28
Chapter: Confessions

okay - i just noticed - this cant be the end - boo hoo!! do writers always hv to be this evil??

Author's Response: Hi slimemonster. Well, Out of the Drackness is definitely over (as in I'm not going to add any more chapters to it) but I'll have to see if I write a sequel. As it is, I'm hoping to take a little time off writing and get my real life back on track. Schools started again and the teachers are piling on the homework! Thanks for leaving a review, bye!

Reviewer: slimemonster
Date: 09/09/06 8:26
Chapter: Confessions

i dont think i need to tell u this but ur story is just terrific. it one of my all time favs and i luv the way the story is going. i cant wait for the next chappie so pls update quick! and, what abt malfoys headache?

Author's Response: Thanks slimemonster. Actually, Malfoy doesn't really have a head ache he's just being weird.

Reviewer: bbb
Date: 09/08/06 23:37
Chapter: Confessions

is your story over? but your gonna write a sequel right?

Reviewer: bbb
Date: 09/08/06 23:36
Chapter: Confessions

is your story over? but your gonna write a sequel right?

Author's Response: Yeah, the story's over, (why is everyone asking that? I thought the THE END would be a big enough hint!!!)

Reviewer: Bradhadair09
Date: 09/08/06 21:56
Chapter: Confessions

I think you should do a follow up. You're totally leaving us hanging. Just a suggestion. Thanks.

Author's Response: Oh, you sound too sensible, I can't joke!! (Sorry, I'm sort of hyper active at the moment!) Thanks for leaving a review!

Reviewer: Chellaei
Date: 09/08/06 21:49
Chapter: Confessions

AHH!! You can't just leave off there! That's so not fair! This is a brilliant story! Please update as soon as you can!

Author's Response: I can't update, it's OVER!!!! Muhahahaha!!!!!!

Reviewer: Shana
Date: 09/08/06 18:58
Chapter: Confessions

You have to write more

Author's Response: Nope!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Okay, excess of exclamation marks there!)

Reviewer: Violinist209
Date: 09/08/06 16:20
Chapter: Confessions

Wait, the end? What do you mean THE END? How can it possibly be the end??? You can't end on a cliff hanger!!! It's cruel and mean! *sob!* End! :-( He just woke up too. Aww nuts. I think you are a brilliant writer, and I adore(d) your story.

Author's Response: Oh, my perfect day just evaporated! Just kidding! Of course it's the end! What else would I think up horrible cliffhangers for! *laughs evily*

Reviewer: joannie
Date: 09/08/06 14:23
Chapter: Confessions

you're kidding right? you just can't end the story here!:(... ahhhh!! now i know why you decided to end the story here!!!!.. you want us (readers) to beg you to write more isn't it???!!!!:)
well okay,although its not in my habit to beg people, i'll make an exception.. i BEG u to write more... so please please please please write a sequel:).........

Reviewer: joannie
Date: 09/08/06 14:21
Chapter: Confessions

you're kiding right? you just can't end the story here!:(... ahhhh!! i know why you decided to end the story here!!!!.. you want us (readers) to beg you to write more isn't it???!!!!:)
well okay,although its not in my habit to beg people, i'll make an exception.. i BEG u to write more... so please please please please write a sequel:).........

Author's Response: Oh, yes, I love when people beg, though I hardly ever listen! Should I make an exception too?!

Reviewer: KaraWillow
Date: 09/08/06 11:34
Chapter: Confessions

hey that was great! will there be a sequel?

Author's Response: Ask no questions and you'll hear no lies ;)

Reviewer: snowie69
Date: 09/08/06 8:07
Chapter: Confessions

OMG !! U CANT END THERE!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO ..!!!! wow this was a awsome story! but U CANT AND THERE!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH ... xxxxxx samiie

Author's Response: Oh, I have to end there, it would ruin the fabulous cliffhanger (mostly compliments of mooncalf) if I continued!! Thanks for reviewing!!!

Reviewer: JuliaWitch1000
Date: 09/08/06 4:35
Chapter: Confessions

no wait. I have to say more. ive just skipped through the reviews and ive just found out. I havent reviewed to ANY of your chapters. thats really bad of me. I thought I had, but no. well, I just wanted to tell you that your story is simply fabulous. I mean, its so different from other Hermione/Draco fics ive read. they're so cliche. I dont say that they arent good, but your story just stands out(in the good way, mind). so, my point is, that I REALLY THINK YOU SHOULD KEEP WRITING ON THAT STORY. please im begging you. it cant end here. WAAAAAAAA

Author's Response: Thanks again! I can't belive you think my story stands out from the others!!! *sniffs and wipes tear away with hand*

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