Reviewer: UndyingLove4Draco
Date: 06/07/06 23:23
Chapter: Bitterness


Author's Response: Thanks UndyingLove4Draco I'll put my next chapter in soon I just need to write it first!

Reviewer: mooncalf
Date: 06/07/06 15:33
Chapter: Surprise

It looks like you're also overdosing on exclamation marks! Ar aon nós, caithfidh mé an idirlíne a chuardach le hagahidh nótaí don Teastas Sóisearach amárach. So that this review isn't complete spam, I'll just say that I'm sorry for poor broken-nose Draco, and I hope he doesn't choke in his own blood (ugh) before someone finds him. And Ron has ISSUES.

Author's Response: I don't have that many exclamation marks! Yeah and I'm hoping Draco doesn't choke on his own blood cause that would be sick! And yes Ron hjas issues but he can't go around punching people just because he's mad!

Reviewer: mooncalf
Date: 06/07/06 10:42
Chapter: Surprise

Lunar, just because you're fed up with this story right now doesn't mean you can terrify your poor readers like that! And I personally feel sorry for Ron, you're putting him through such torture! And for anyone who is impatient for him to wake up, believe me you will not be happy when he does!

I've just realised I've ended every sentence with an exclamation mark! Left-over hyperness from the Junior Cert!!!

Author's Response: I'm not fed up my story! I love it! And I'm sorry I didn't mean to scare anyone if I did! Right now, I'm having great fun desciding how to infuriate my characters even more so when this happens my readers probably won't like it!

Reviewer: SheWhoMustNotBNamed
Date: 06/06/06 17:14
Chapter: Bitterness

*laughing hysterically* Lunar, I know u were just kidding about letting Draco die to, "end it nicely." right? You got a sick sense of humor babe. =)
Personally I think it would be more fitting if he woke up right after Ron sucker punched him. Hitting a defenseless comatose patient, the Weasel is definately a coward.

Author's Response: Awww don't be so hard on Ron. He's feeling useless and depressed at the moment; not that I care. The more miserable my characters are, the better! And who knows? Maybe I will let Draco die. It would put an interesting edge to the story. I haven't read many where the main character dies and un-heroic death. Maybe I'll make mine different...

Reviewer: mirror shards
Date: 06/06/06 7:26
Chapter: Bitterness

loved the chapter! what will happen when Malfoy wakes up, will he remember everything he's heard from hermione? I hope someone finds him soon to stop the bleeding!

Author's Response: Thank you for your review mirror shards Yes when malfoy wakes up he will remember what Hermione told him but you'll have to wait to find out if anyone finds him!

Reviewer: dracosgirl1400
Date: 06/06/06 1:31
Chapter: Bitterness

O my gosh! Please tell me that Draco wakes up. Hermione better get back up there so Malfoy hopefully doesn't die.

Author's Response: Thanks again for reviewing I don't know if I'll wakre Draco up so soon; it's only been 7 chapters! Maybe I will make him die, that would finish the story off nicely!

Reviewer: dracosgirl1400
Date: 06/06/06 0:35
Chapter: Surprise

I love this chapter. Hermione sounds really worried about Draco and Ron at the same time. That makes me want to read more.

Author's Response: Thanks dracosgirl1400 I'm glad you liked the chapter so much. Make sure you do read more!

Reviewer: danz_girl05
Date: 06/05/06 2:57
Chapter: Forgiveness

Awwww! It's just what every R/Hm shipper needs! Well done!!!

Author's Response: This isn't a R/Hm story so I'll have to make Ron do something really evil soon! Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: vrose90
Date: 06/04/06 20:23
Chapter: Bitterness

this story rocks! update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks vrose90 I'll do that!

Reviewer: HermioneTwin7
Date: 06/04/06 13:37
Chapter: Bitterness

very, very very very very very very very very very very
please keep it coming!!!!!! hurry!

Author's Response: Thanks HermioneTwin7 I'll try to write it quickly! Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: nicolestars
Date: 06/04/06 11:10
Chapter: Bitterness

i love this chapter!! at least now malfoy is a little more aware!!! bad ron!! i wonder what malfoy will say if he wakes up and finds a mark on his oh--so handsome face! lol

update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks nicolestars Yeah but you can't be too hard on Ron this story is about how Malfoy is stealing his girlfriend1 And I don't think he'll be too happy when he wakes up but you'll have to wait and see!

Reviewer: silver_tears134
Date: 06/03/06 19:29
Chapter: Bitterness

Wow, I like how your style of writing. You make it flow so smoothly. I definitely can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Do you really like my style of writing? I'm always afraid it's too rushed or too slow! Anyway thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: lotte26
Date: 06/03/06 18:55
Chapter: Bitterness

ohhhh this was really good! keep up the wicked work! i love it!

Author's Response: Thanks lotte26 I'm so glad you liked it! I'll update soon!

Reviewer: GinnyRox
Date: 06/03/06 18:23
Chapter: Bitterness

Will Malfoy ever wake up from the coma? Hmmm..... Anyway update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing GinnyRox You'll just have to wait and see if he does!

Reviewer: nicolestars
Date: 06/03/06 11:12
Chapter: Discoveries

knock knock?!?! what's up with the updating?? type like the wind!!!

Reviewer: nicolestars
Date: 06/03/06 11:11
Chapter: Bitterness

finally!! when do the mods plan accepting it? damn!

Author's Response: I'm not sure when it will be up. Hopefully soon!

Reviewer: nicolestars
Date: 06/03/06 11:11
Chapter: Discoveries

knock knock?!?! what's up with the updating?? type like the wind!!!

Author's Response: Hi nicolestars I've been trying to update but the mods haven't passed it yet. I'll let you know when they do.

Reviewer: Cherylnv
Date: 06/01/06 9:25
Chapter: Surprise

OOO Great first chapter. Leaves a lot of unanswered questions. Makes me want to read on to have them answered.

Author's Response: Thanks CheryInv! Thats sort of what I wanted - loads of questions and time to answer them! Thanks again for reviewing.

Reviewer: MidnightDraco
Date: 05/22/06 17:22
Chapter: Discoveries

When is Malfoy going to wake up? Its already been 6 chapters! Oh this is taking forever!!

Author's Response: Hi MidnightDraco I'm sorry, I know it's been 6 chapters but you won't thank me when he does wake up!

Reviewer: whocares
Date: 05/15/06 10:47
Chapter: Discoveries

darn it! it was just getting good and u had to stop! shame on u!

Author's Response: Thanks whocares I know I love to leave people hanging I'll have to put in a good cliffhanger later....

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