Reviewer: Padfoot12891
Date: 06/30/06 23:27
Chapter: Suspicion

Hey! I just wanna say that you are doing a brilliant job at writing this story. you've kept me captivated from the first chapter. Keep up the exelent work!

Author's Response: Thanks for such a nice review! I'm glad you've been keeping with the story! Thanks for leaving a review!

Reviewer: HarryplusLuna
Date: 06/29/06 20:13
Chapter: Suspicion



*is deadly unpatient and anxious to read next chapter*

Author's Response: Thanks HarryplusLuna Yes, I'll go submit chapter 9 right now! Thanks again!

Reviewer: major hp nerd
Date: 06/28/06 18:25
Chapter: Suspicion

That sucks. Not the chapter, but the fact that Hermione is warming up to Draco, but he is still a supreme jackass. Update soon! 8D

Author's Response: Yeah Draco is horrible, isn't he? Ah well, that's half of what makes the story interesting! Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: StoryFromTheStars
Date: 06/28/06 17:00
Chapter: Suspicion

Wow....I'm glad that Malfoy finally knows he is in a coma.
And I can't wait to see what Mrs. Malfoy does when she finds out that Ron was the one that broke Malfoy's nose, it should be good fun though!

Author's Response: Do you mean Mrs Malfoy or Mrs Weasley? it doesn't matter, really, beacuse neither will be very pleased. Neither will Malfoy come to think of it. Ron had better watch out1

Reviewer: hpffreader
Date: 06/28/06 14:04
Chapter: Suspicion

Sorry I didn't review the previous few chapters. I was really engrossed with the story that I didn't want to leave a review until the last posted chapter. I really enjoyed Malfoy's brain talking. I find it hilarious. Can't wait for the next chapter. I hope it will be as long as this one.

Author's Response: That's okay, the way you have reviewed loads of chapters is fantastic, thanks! I'm glad you liked Malfoy's thoughts, I just love writing them! Thanks for leaving the reviews!

Reviewer: hpffreader
Date: 06/28/06 13:23
Chapter: Heartbreak

So Malfoy is somewhat awake. At least his mind is, not his body.

Author's Response: Yeah, he can think and hear. It would be knda boring if he didn't do anything, so had to put in those. I hope you like them.

Reviewer: hpffreader
Date: 06/28/06 13:17
Chapter: Awareness

Hmm...I would think that this chapter will reveal what happen to Malfoy. But it didn't.

Author's Response: No, I had to keep the suspense a bit longer. It will all be revealed later! ;)

Reviewer: hpffreader
Date: 06/28/06 13:12
Chapter: Surprise

I love how the first chapter was introduced. Not too much information but enough to keep readers reading the next one.

Author's Response: Thanks I wasn't really sure about that chapter; I always thought it was a bit rushed. I'm glad someone thinks differently!

Reviewer: bread_smoothie
Date: 06/28/06 11:48
Chapter: Suspicion

I LOVE it. This is such a brilliant fic...

Author's Response: Thanks for leaving another review bread_smoothie. I really appreciate those comments! :)

Reviewer: AnnaMuggle
Date: 06/28/06 9:39
Chapter: Suspicion

Loved the chapter! I don't remember if I've left a review before but I'm almost certain. Oh anyway.

The parts from Draco's POV are excellent! I can't help but laughing when I read those. :D Good job!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Hi AnnaMuggle! I'm glad you liked the chapter and the parts about Draco. It's always nice to know that people find them funny. You won't have to wait long for the 9th chapter because I already have it written and I'm halfway through the 10th already. Thanks for leaving a review this time anyway. ;)

Reviewer: luckei1
Date: 06/28/06 6:45
Chapter: Suspicion

Wow, I love Malfoy in a coma - so witty! Awesome chapter, love this story!

Author's Response: Thanks luckei1 I'm happy the chapter worked out well. :)

Reviewer: cedriclover
Date: 06/28/06 0:22
Chapter: Suspicion

i love that last line. ;]

keep going! i really appreciate this stuff. =]]]

Reviewer: cedriclover
Date: 06/28/06 0:21
Chapter: Suspicion

i love that last line. ;]

keep going! i really appreciate this stuff. =]]]

Author's Response: I like that last line too, short and simple. I'll have the 9th chapter up soon so i hope you enjoy that as much!

Reviewer: FaunaCaritas
Date: 06/28/06 0:10
Chapter: Surprise

Interesting style. I like the medium you have chosen for the story (comatose Draco, Hermione talking to herself) Somehow I think nothing less could bring this couple together. Keep posting, ok? Pax.

Author's Response: Thanks FaunaCaritas. Yeah, I'm pretty happy with the medium myself, especially my Malfoy. Other things could bring them together though. You should have a look at mooncalfs stories, they're really good. Thanks again for leaving a review!

Reviewer: HermioneTwin7
Date: 06/27/06 22:01
Chapter: Suspicion

I love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait for the next chappie!
I've been picturing millions of different things on what will happen if he wakes up!
The thing is... I'm not patient! That's why I have like a million stories in my favourites list + the million in my account.
Sorry 'bout that! Can't wait!

Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I know you want Malfoy to wake up but I'm telling you, you won't be happy when he does! :)

Reviewer: myth_of_beauty
Date: 06/12/06 13:32
Chapter: Bitterness

Ron is a jerk, as we always knew. LOL Now, at least, he needs to have his head covered in bubotuber pus. Then I can decide that he doesn't suck as bad as he does. But I can't help but saying, yet again: Malfoy's little inputs are priceless!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing myth_of_beauty! As I've said before, don't be too hard on Ron, he's not that bad! I'm glad you like Malfoy's thoughts, I have to add some more in for the next chapter which I will probably have up soon.

Reviewer: RockerBabe1263
Date: 06/10/06 21:26
Chapter: Bitterness

Er, I know you haven't updated this story in awhile, but I just found it an it's really good, so please write some more.

Author's Response: Hi RockerBabe1263, thanks for your review. Sorry I haven't updated but I was away. Now I'm back so hopefully the next chapter will be up soon.

Reviewer: Kiwi_Chick
Date: 06/09/06 20:54
Chapter: Bitterness

Great story! I hope someone find Malfoy soon!!! I feel sorry for Ron but I wish he would stop being stubborn and be nice to Hermione!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing Kiwi_Chick! Finally, someone who feels sorry for Ron! Only joking. Thanks again!

Reviewer: claude
Date: 06/09/06 14:44
Chapter: Bitterness

i can't wait till you finnish of the story. SO HURRY UP! (It's a very good story)

Author's Response: Thanks claude I'm not sure how soon I'll finish the story but I've got the ending planned and I know you won't thank me when it's over!

Reviewer: LavaKissesx3
Date: 06/08/06 4:00
Chapter: Bitterness

Smh. Ron's really being a Dumbnut. Is Draco ever going to wake up? It'd be funny if he awoke when hermione was resting her head on him or sumn like that.Well,I'm Still loving the story so please keep updating!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Yes I briefly considered wajking Malfoy up at that point but what would I do with myself if he did?!

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