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Reviewer: HPLuver7
Date: 12/01/07 18:36
Chapter: Chapter 4

This Is An AMAZING STORY!!!! I loved it. but i cant beleive that its over *sob* its soooo! sad. but the sequql story is soooo!!! awesome!!!!! I cant remember wat its called but it is sooo awesome! bye!

Reviewer: Tina_hglover
Date: 09/28/07 4:01
Chapter: Chapter 4

Brilll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: HumanWerewolf
Date: 08/02/07 16:33
Chapter: Chapter 4

So what is that song that is used as the intro to the final letter from Harry?

Reviewer: saknicole
Date: 08/01/07 3:32
Chapter: Chapter 4

What just happened? why did he leave, Im confused.

Reviewer: saknicole
Date: 08/01/07 3:25
Chapter: Chapter 2

I like this story alot except how childish ginny acts when she meets sara. its good, Id love to read more of it!

Reviewer: LilaBear
Date: 06/09/07 6:54
Chapter: Chapter 4

What??? You can't leave the story without them GETTING TOGETHER!!! *goes insane*

Reviewer: TD Knight
Date: 04/14/07 11:25
Chapter: Chapter 4

Well, generally I liked this story but at the end I felt like I was missing something.
I've figured it out; this an extremely narrow story. Meaning you focuse basically on 2 people which is normal, however, you don't give small, normal details like the view of her hotel room...peole notice that. Her seeing other people and not just 'ignoring the strange looks people gave her' or something like that.
Think of the story as a tree...right now you have the main part, the trunk, now you need to add the branchs, the leaves, the blossoms, the fruit.

Also you stay in 2 places generally, his 'lounge' and her hotel room. If you don't move from those (which you did in the end -the night bus part-) you need to give them more volume. Right now they're 2-dimensional, make them 3-dimensional.

[you can comment on one of my stories in a bit...I'm working on them so they're not up yet :D.]

Reviewer: Zlaker1001
Date: 03/24/07 19:10
Chapter: Chapter 2

Ha best lyircs ever

Reviewer: ILOVEHARRY92
Date: 03/18/07 8:35
Chapter: Chapter 4

I love the story, hate the ending

Reviewer: chrissy_coo_coo
Date: 02/19/07 17:28
Chapter: Chapter 4

Good storie! I liked the way it all flowed and it even had me feeling for both of them!

Reviewer: WhatHurtsTheMost
Date: 02/10/07 22:33
Chapter: Chapter 4

wow that story is so sad.
i think i have a migraine from reading that which i find amusing b/c i don't believe too many thirteen year olds often get migraines...
anyways i love LoVe LOVE it not i gotta go read your sequel!

Reviewer: sinfonia_concertante
Date: 11/25/06 0:25
Chapter: Chapter 1

Fantastic! One thing: Ginny has brown eyes, not blue eyes. Great otherwise.

Reviewer: Magical_Lily
Date: 10/14/06 20:49
Chapter: Chapter 4

this so good

Reviewer: RubberDuckie011
Date: 08/22/06 22:11
Chapter: Chapter 2

OMG!!!!! LOVE NICKELBACK!!!!!!!
I LOVE THIS TOO

Reviewer: harry_fan14
Date: 07/18/06 3:18
Chapter: Chapter 4

OH.........MY.................GOD..........i think that i am going to cry too that was beautiful there needs to be a sequel

Reviewer: annapolisdude
Date: 05/16/06 17:32
Chapter: Chapter 4

nice!

Reviewer: annapolisdude
Date: 05/16/06 17:32
Chapter: Chapter 4

nice!

Reviewer: annapolisdude
Date: 05/16/06 17:20
Chapter: Chapter 2

nice

Reviewer: eaglebird
Date: 04/26/06 17:26
Chapter: Chapter 4

You captured my interest with this get-together post-Hogwarts love story and it developed well. Your ending was a bit sad, hopeful, realistic, teary ...... and in a way, typically Harry ...... but you NEED to do a SEQUEL. You have enough material here for a story that includes Ginny meeting her family again, Harry's odyssey, Harry's return, etc. Overall, nicely done.

Reviewer: riot_wanted
Date: 04/19/06 22:51
Chapter: Chapter 4

BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!! I LUVED IT SOOOoOOOOoOOOO MUCH! It was great. Very creative and you my new friend are going on my favorite authors!!
Reading you Fred/Hermione fic next. And don't say the H/H/ was bad because it wasn't!! U Rock

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. I have a FAN!!! OMG!!! *does happy dance around bedroom*

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