ohmygoshyesnowhurryupandfinishitnow!!!!

this is really good!!!! You should rite a bit more a couple more chapters would be great! Please do i cant wait to read them!!!!

i really liked it...

aaaaaawwwwwwww plz update

oh my gosh i LOVE IT!!! are you going to write another chapter soon? please do...by the way what year are they meant to be in?

Author's Response: it was written for a contest on a different site. i'm not sure what year there meant to be in, like 6 and 7 or something, but i wrote it before HBP came out so iyt's all out of canon now (not the D/G is in canon anyway) TY for the nice review x

wow great write more pwease

Sorry I didn't mean that in a bad way. I realized that might have sounded rude as soon as I sent it!

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Hey, when are you going to write another chapter?! I loved this one! It leaves you with so many questions. Well, I'll keep looking in for another chapter, thanks.


~!*Hannah*!~

yah!!! Uh huh! YOU go girl!!!

It's a good plot, very original(that I've seen). Ron was pretty IC, as was Malfoy. Ginny was a little OOC in my eyes. She seemed a little too American-ish for my taste. One phrase that jumped out at me as OOC was "Look I know I’ve not got the best tits in the year but they can’t be that repulsive, can they?" That just seemed like nothing Ginny would say. I think it needs a little backstory; when did Malfoy start feeling attracted to Ginny? When did she stop hating him? I look forward to the next chapter, though. I think you've got a pretty good grasp on your characters apart from what I've mentioned here.
Your grammar/punctuation is a little off, and I had a question about how Harry and Ron 1) found out where they were, and 2) got them out. They seem like they just appeared and let them out right now.
I'd love to see where you're going with this, though. I'll check back for an update later.