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Name: FlicketyG (Signed) · Date: 11/02/09 11:11 · For: Chapter the first

Name: wiltedrose (Signed) · Date: 07/08/09 11:09 · For: Chapter the first
ok this is really good so far so if ur planning to continue it could please speed it up thank you

Name: mugglelover12 (Signed) · Date: 11/01/07 17:21 · For: Chapter the first
this is really good!!!! You should rite a bit more a couple more chapters would be great! Please do i cant wait to read them!!!!

Name: hudini43 (Signed) · Date: 10/16/07 22:28 · For: Chapter the first
i loved it!!! its witty....
i hope you keep making it!

Name: hudini43 (Signed) · Date: 08/27/07 19:25 · For: Chapter the first
i really liked it...

Name: heybabesmilecrazy (Signed) · Date: 07/28/07 16:29 · For: Chapter the first
i love this story, but i wish it were longer :)

Name: mrsmalfoy7 (Signed) · Date: 07/17/07 8:50 · For: Chapter the first
aaaaaawwwwwwww plz update

Name: TheBoneLady (Signed) · Date: 06/07/07 22:25 · For: Chapter the first

Name: malfoys_princess (Signed) · Date: 05/02/07 3:59 · For: Chapter the first
oh my gosh i LOVE IT!!! are you going to write another chapter soon? please do...by the way what year are they meant to be in?

Author's Response: it was written for a contest on a different site. i'm not sure what year there meant to be in, like 6 and 7 or something, but i wrote it before HBP came out so iyt's all out of canon now (not the D/G is in canon anyway) TY for the nice review x

Name: BohemianWanderer (Signed) · Date: 10/31/06 21:07 · For: Chapter the first
Quite nice.

Name: x5xbillabongx5x (Signed) · Date: 10/14/06 20:01 · For: Chapter the first
wow great write more pwease

Name: x5xbillabongx5x (Signed) · Date: 10/14/06 20:01 · For: Chapter the first
wow great write more pwease

Name: hobbie_da_doo (Signed) · Date: 10/09/06 18:24 · For: Chapter the first
Sorry I didn't mean that in a bad way. I realized that might have sounded rude as soon as I sent it!


Name: hobbie_da_doo (Signed) · Date: 10/09/06 18:23 · For: Chapter the first
Aren't you gonna write More?!

Name: Sway Wellington (Signed) · Date: 08/11/06 10:23 · For: Chapter the first
Hey, when are you going to write another chapter?! I loved this one! It leaves you with so many questions. Well, I'll keep looking in for another chapter, thanks.


Name: Criordan22 (Signed) · Date: 07/04/06 15:57 · For: Chapter the first
Wow, this is a relly good story. I love the plot. keep writing and please post the next part soon. I can't wait to see what happens!.Nice job!

Name: ginny777 (Signed) · Date: 04/17/06 14:35 · For: Chapter the first
yah!!! Uh huh! YOU go girl!!!

Name: Hermione03 (Signed) · Date: 12/22/05 1:12 · For: Chapter the first
I really like the plot of the story. I don't know what is going to happen next and that makes it better! I can't wait to read the next parts! Keep up the good work and I will be waiting! : )

Name: bittersweet_lullaby (Signed) · Date: 09/15/05 8:38 · For: Chapter the first
It's a good plot, very original(that I've seen). Ron was pretty IC, as was Malfoy. Ginny was a little OOC in my eyes. She seemed a little too American-ish for my taste. One phrase that jumped out at me as OOC was "Look I know Iíve not got the best tits in the year but they canít be that repulsive, can they?" That just seemed like nothing Ginny would say. I think it needs a little backstory; when did Malfoy start feeling attracted to Ginny? When did she stop hating him? I look forward to the next chapter, though. I think you've got a pretty good grasp on your characters apart from what I've mentioned here.
Your grammar/punctuation is a little off, and I had a question about how Harry and Ron 1) found out where they were, and 2) got them out. They seem like they just appeared and let them out right now.
I'd love to see where you're going with this, though. I'll check back for an update later.

Name: Emmamarie (Signed) · Date: 08/04/05 11:49 · For: Chapter the first
please write more!!!! very good story so far. 10/10!

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