Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 02/10/07 9:56
Chapter: Annie

Jo would never begin with Harry and his 2 friends at Godric's Hollow but I like how you set up the whole beginning. Nice work

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 02/10/07 9:53
Chapter: Lucy

A portrait of Sirious...a nice idea to think about.

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 02/10/07 9:51
Chapter: Leah

This is something I would like Jo to answer in Deathly Hallows. WHY Dumbledore trusted Snape. Your writing skills are extraordinary and I admire you for being able to write so well.

Reviewer: lilywink
Date: 12/05/06 18:13
Chapter: Annie

wow.

Reviewer: Juliet Butler
Date: 10/09/06 9:17
Chapter: Leah

wow... i'd give anything to see this fic finished! pretty please?!

Reviewer: happilyhufflepuff
Date: 09/28/06 15:52
Chapter: Leah

I'm a littel confuzzled but what begining of a story isn't?it seems like a good begining though.

Reviewer: happilyhufflepuff
Date: 09/28/06 15:48
Chapter: Lucy

Wait, I thought Sirius was dead!

Reviewer: happilyhufflepuff
Date: 09/28/06 15:48
Chapter: Lucy

Wait, I thought Sirius was dead!

Reviewer: dreamer478
Date: 09/09/06 11:29
Chapter: Lucy

this is a really great story. i think its a great opening and i like that harry lupin and tonks found sirius' portrait. great idea

Reviewer: tilly
Date: 08/26/06 23:30
Chapter: Annie

wow, what a creepy atmosphere - you captured it so well. i like the idea of godric's hollow being deserted, i don't think i've read a fic that presents it that way before. also like how you managed to capture the other little character details without going off the point. this is one of my most looked-forward to parts of book 7, so i'm drawn to your interpretation...though i'd like to read more. one criticism would have to be...what about the wedding?! it comes first!

Reviewer: tilly
Date: 08/26/06 23:25
Chapter: Lucy

lol, i liked the ending. how would narcissa get into the house though? i doubt the order would be dumb enough to leave a way open, and even if they did surely the secret keeper...oh wait, that was AD...does it end if he dies? that would make sense. if so, then the story is really good...but worrying i would say, if voldy knows!

Reviewer: tilly
Date: 08/26/06 23:21
Chapter: Leah

oh my god, amazing. why? why? can we know too, please? excellent writing. the mcgonagall bit was a bit farfetched, considering she made it all the way to privet drive i'd expect her to do more than mumble as she left!!! you got alot in though, and the start was v funny. all in all, a great first chapter. a deserved win

Reviewer: Amanda_Potter
Date: 08/22/06 18:13
Chapter: Lucy

r u sure ur not jk rowling cause u write like she does 2 bad its only a one shot

Reviewer: confidentialroze
Date: 08/21/06 19:25
Chapter: Annie

erm, right... it's good and all, but it's kinda, well... confusing! i understand it, and all, ut it's the way you describe the more main parts of the story... well, i feel that congradulations is one of the many thing i would like to tell you, although dont want to waste my breath. good luck on further stories! ~roze

Reviewer: xxKatrina
Date: 08/18/06 17:19
Chapter: Leah

Love this story.

Reviewer: cutiepoet
Date: 08/08/06 8:23
Chapter: Lucy

oooooo, that's good stuff. can't wait for the rest.

Reviewer: cutiepoet
Date: 08/08/06 8:23
Chapter: Annie

omgosh, that's so amazing, it actually sounds like JK is writing it herself. please, write more soon.

Reviewer: cutiepoet
Date: 08/08/06 8:22
Chapter: Annie

omgosh, that's so amazing, it actually sounds like JK is writing it herself. please, write more soon.

Reviewer: cutiepoet
Date: 08/08/06 8:17
Chapter: Lucy

oooooo, that's good stuff. can't wait for the rest.

Reviewer: cutiepoet
Date: 08/08/06 8:12
Chapter: Leah

this is well thought out and i love it. it's really good. i can't wait for more!

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