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Reviewer: PeaceLovePotter
Date: 09/28/08 18:40
Chapter: Someone had to add colour to the occasion

Rosy is hilarious, well actually you control what she says so you're hilarious! I can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 06/03/08 20:57
Chapter: Someone had to add colour to the occasion

I hate funerals and yet i always feel obligated to go to them. I hate that they're so solumn and make you feel even worse. Why can't we wear orange shoes and sing dancing queen? I mean does anyone like funerals? If the answer is no then why can't we turn them into something people will want to go to so they can remember their loved ones with a smile? Sorry, but this chapter was a little depressing until the end. Hope you update soon, can't wait to see who murdered Holly and whether they get punished. I'm guessing it's that slytherin girl from detension, can't remember her name. Anyway, update sooooooon.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 06/03/08 20:41
Chapter: She should get another detention for plagiarism!

I was going to say that this was one of the funniest chapters I've read, however the last line kind of put a dampner on things. I think my favourite line was “Indecent exposure? Yeah, that seems to be becoming a regular occurrence in this class. Who’s next then? Evans, how about a rendition of Sexual Healing?” Sirius yelled as the class pealed off into hysterical laughter again. Closely followed by Remus description of the penetrabbits and Rosie's surprise at not being an old widow after her detension.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 06/03/08 20:11
Chapter: I could certainly tell he was a hopeless romantic

Not that it will help as your coursework is probably ancient history, but I'd do the coursework then post a longer chapter. Well I probably wouldn't do that, but I really wouldn't want you to neglect coursework because of me. Anyway, I really think Sirius was awful in this chapter, a typical teenaged boy if you ask me. Should we condemn him for his ignorance, or gentley dispell it and improve him? I think perhpas Rosie is learning the truth about the man behind her idol. It really hurts. I think Lily is trying to do a really nice thing for Alice and Frank.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 06/03/08 19:46
Chapter: I fancy some butternut squash!

Aw, I wish Lily was my friend, I love all those things too. Lily might find it a little suspicious when James starts buying her stuff that she discussed with Rose though, will their friendship survive?

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 06/03/08 19:29
Chapter: Your neck just asked me to sniff it!

I love authors notes actually, they're really quite amusing at times. Anyway, I love marauder fics, but I was afraid I might not like this one as it's from the viewpoint of one of those really annoying fan girls you read about in other marauder fics. However, I was very pleasantly surprised when i started reading, and i think it's brilliant, despite this only being the first chapter. Won't take me long to get to chapter seven so hope theres more to come.

Reviewer: Siriusly_ Lily
Date: 04/03/08 15:16
Chapter: Your neck just asked me to sniff it!

are u gonna update soon?
or get a new beta???????
i thought insecurity was a good beta... its odd that she never sent corrections back

Reviewer: shooting_star42
Date: 02/24/08 1:42
Chapter: Your neck just asked me to sniff it!

HA! I LOVED IT! Very interesting and entertaining to read :)

Reviewer: Minna_Black
Date: 11/09/07 8:42
Chapter: She should get another detention for plagiarism!

What in the world is orgasmagic! P.S. Nice cliffie!

Author's Response: Orgasmagic, in my opinion. Would be some time of wizard lubircation which enhances the sensual feeling by about 10,000 times :) Hahahahah No one's asked me that before. I'm glad someone did :P and thanks, I'm evil arent I. I will update as soon as I get a new Beta, or my old one sends my chapter back! xox

Reviewer: Minna_Black
Date: 11/09/07 8:34
Chapter: Onward with this next escapade!

Cliffie! Yay!

Author's Response: Ahehehehe

Reviewer: Minna_Black
Date: 11/09/07 8:28
Chapter: I could certainly tell he was a hopeless romantic

YaY!
I will constantly review.

Author's Response: Yeaaah :p You better!

Reviewer: Minna_Black
Date: 11/09/07 8:20
Chapter: I have no desire to eat frog's legs and cheese anytime soon!

I liked it as long as the rabbit thing wasn't a jip on rabbits. If u ever need to ask me what a word means or somting in my reviews just email me @

Dragon2Minna@aim.com or I M me @ Dragon2Minna

Author's Response: Haha. Of course it wasnt a "jip" at rabbits! It was just my limited French knowledge :( I <3 rabbits. And you, of course.

Reviewer: Minna_Black
Date: 11/09/07 8:11
Chapter: I fancy some butternut squash!

All in a days review The plots going realy well andits very flowy. It has a touch of James/Lily and a lot of humor which i love!
Ps.
I love white chocolate too.


Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! And thanks about the plot, I was kinda worried about that. p.s Me too. I would live off the stuff!

Reviewer: Minna_Black
Date: 11/09/07 7:52
Chapter: Your neck just asked me to sniff it!

THIS IS A CONSTRUCTIVE REVIEW. I love it! yay for uuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Author's Response: Aha! Thank you :) xox

Reviewer: the_evenstar
Date: 08/20/07 18:31
Chapter: She should get another detention for plagiarism!

You know, I'm really starting to love Rosy - I think she's developed a lot as a character since the first chapters.

And there were so many funny parts in this chapter, from Rosy's understated asides (my favorite being, "It wouldn’t have surprised me if I had walked out of it with white hair that’s balding in places, sagging breasts and a dead husband." :D) to Holly stripping to Abba, and the sex-obsessed bunnies! Absolutely hilarious...

But the cliffhangers! Obviously, Holly getting murdered was a tad unexpected (I'm dying for an update, just so you know!), but also, Rosy's headaches and blacking out and waking up somewhere else... that's a bit unsettling, and I can't wait to hear why that's happening to her! Oh, and Jennifer... she really does scare me, but in a good way. :P

So... I can't wait for you to update, but I hope your move went well, and all that school work! :D

-Brandi

Author's Response: Aw thank you. Rosy is a bit of a crazy lass, can't help but love her myself :P. Hehe, I'm glad you find it funny. I always worry that I sound like I'm trying to be funny but fail miserably, but I guess not :) Sorry about the cliff hangers (And the slow update :P) you'll find out soon enough, no doubt. As soon as I get over my writers block :(. Hehe, Jennifer is actually based on one of my friends (as requested by her) but only in description and name, really. Personality wise, yeah, I agree, scary :S. She will play quite a big role in later chapters. Woah, this is long. Thanks so much :) xxx

Reviewer: coolcat1000
Date: 06/28/07 8:50
Chapter: She should get another detention for plagiarism!

what!!!!!! Holly's been murdered????? when is the next chapter going to be posted?????????

Author's Response: Arggh. I dont know :( I really need to buckle down and write it. But I am having a severe case of writer's block atm. Heelp :( xx

Reviewer: coolcat1000
Date: 06/28/07 8:47
Chapter: She should get another detention for plagiarism!

what!!!!!! Holly's been murdered????? when is the next chapter going to be posted?????????

Reviewer: Siriusly_ Lily
Date: 03/05/07 18:30
Chapter: She should get another detention for plagiarism!

no comment.. hmmm.. =) When do you think the next chapter will be posted???

Author's Response: Ooh, that's a toughie. I have all my GCSE exams at the moment. And I am really under a load of stress from revision, and coursework. As well as the fact that I am moving to Canada in three months. But as soon as I find time I will get round to writing it. So don't give up on me. It will be here. Just give me some time :)

Reviewer: Siriusly_ Lily
Date: 03/04/07 10:37
Chapter: She should get another detention for plagiarism!

awesomely awesome story!! Keep Writing! i cant wait to see how Holly died... and ihave a feeling that she was under the Imperius curse when she was singing!!


Author's Response: Hehe, thankyou for the review :] As for your "feeling" = No comment :D xxx

Reviewer: izzyblue24
Date: 02/01/07 7:51
Chapter: She should get another detention for plagiarism!

wow very nice cliffy, update soon!

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