Reviews For The Christmas Rose
Reviewer: snapeluvr13
Date: 08/11/09 23:36
Chapter: Chapter 2: Melting and Exploding

Aw that was such a sweet chapter. Great job

Reviewer: snapeluvr13
Date: 08/11/09 22:40
Chapter: Chapter 1: Slamming

I love that there is a little fight going on here. O and I read your halloween story I absolutly loved it. It made me laugh and also brought tears to my eyes. I know this story is about snape and hermione but I loved the way Harry cares for ginny so much. After I read the whole story I went and listened to open arms. I love your stories so much keep up the brilliant work!! :D

Reviewer: dani123
Date: 07/02/08 12:29
Chapter: Chapter 1: Slamming

Whoa.... This blew my mind. The whole story was brilliantly thought out, and it contained just the right amount of humor and sarcasm. You are an amazing writer!

Reviewer: swvx2lotrjunky
Date: 06/18/08 19:41
Chapter: Chapter 6: Marrying and Merrying

lovely story, as usual. thought the martha stewart line was PERFECT. =D

Reviewer: claymor
Date: 03/05/08 12:43
Chapter: Chapter 6: Marrying and Merrying

I am truely touched by you obvious love for your Slytherin. Thank him for his input and for sharing you with me.

Reviewer: binkybye102
Date: 01/20/08 11:07
Chapter: Chapter 6: Marrying and Merrying

beautiful story!! not many romances continue after the life-after-beginning-of-love phase (not to mention the frequent sex), but as i'm sure everyone can concurr, marriage life takes some work and committment. That story was inspiring.

Reviewer: peevesie
Date: 12/14/07 9:59
Chapter: Chapter 6: Marrying and Merrying

WOW!! amazing job!!! I really love ur stories....your charecterization of Snape is amazing!!! hoping to get more from u!!!

Reviewer: Sariana
Date: 09/21/07 0:26
Chapter: Chapter 6: Marrying and Merrying

Hmm, I thought surely Hermione had "forgotten her potion" or whatever it was Severus said to her last summer. First she was throwing up, then her appetite had returned "and then some." Being 4 months pregnant myself, I am quite aware of these changes in appetite. I guess I'll have to await the promised sequel....

Reviewer: silent_heartbeat
Date: 09/05/07 16:33
Chapter: Chapter 6: Marrying and Merrying

awesome. :)

Reviewer: Pissenoffanis
Date: 08/11/07 6:35
Chapter: Chapter 6: Marrying and Merrying

Haha I love the line: "What do you do for them Severus?"


Shows his personality perfectly ;)

You have a great flair for writing. Keep it up!

Reviewer: Katie616
Date: 07/24/07 20:23
Chapter: Chapter 6: Marrying and Merrying

Thank you for this wonderful contribution to my life. I loved it. All of your stories have been wonderful. I'm sorry I can't read all of them at once, but that would ruin the experience. Thank you.

Reviewer: mattalicred
Date: 07/05/07 11:53
Chapter: Chapter 6: Marrying and Merrying

its a really fab fic i love hermione/snape storys

Reviewer: summer rain
Date: 05/22/07 15:28
Chapter: Chapter 6: Marrying and Merrying

Thank you so much for your storys! even the elfs find love! you never miss a beat!
@-->--A rose for you

Reviewer: litfreak81
Date: 04/25/07 14:11
Chapter: Chapter 1: Slamming

Ouch. that's a rocky relationship they've got there. I like it

Reviewer: richard3
Date: 03/05/07 3:41
Chapter: Chapter 6: Marrying and Merrying

Hello Subversa - back again, on my second perusal of your entire oeuvre! I get a lot of pleasure out of your stories; you write very well, and your characterisation is full, consistent and engaging. You really should be doing this professionally - as long as you keep submitting here, too. When are the Snapes going to have children? Severus definitely needs a horde of little girls....
In passing, and because I know you like to pay attention to "Englishness" in your stories, one or two observations on British English usage:
1. We don't say "on Christmas". We say "at Christmas" for the period, or "on Christmas Day" for the day itself.
2. Equally, in BrE we don't say that a person or a house "looks well" when we are talking about a pleasing appearance, as "looking well" is talking specifically about health. We'd say "looks good" or "looks great" etc., etc.
Now, I'm definitely not expecting you to re-write your works into British idiom, any more than a British author could be expected to make good use of American idiom (and believe me, I've seen some truly embarrassing examples), but I just thought you'd like to know.
Now please, please, write me another Severus/Hermione story before I become word perfect on these.
Thanks so much for all the enjoyment. R3

Reviewer: BeachBabe
Date: 02/24/07 22:56
Chapter: Chapter 4: Terrorizing

Nice idea really, making the...umm..."kitty-babies" magical. I love it. Pure genius. A perfect 10

Reviewer: richard3
Date: 02/20/07 4:13
Chapter: Chapter 4: Terrorizing

Hello. I'm enjoying this, as I do all your stories, but thought you ought to know that "calico" cats are called "tortoiseshell" cats in the UK. Elsewhere I have read in your notes that you like to be accurate in such matters, so I thought you wouldn't mind this pointer. Keep up the good work. R3

Author's Response: Thanks for the headsup, R3 :)

Reviewer: kin2cats
Date: 02/09/07 21:53
Chapter: Chapter 6: Marrying and Merrying

Wonderful story and series. Just one question...Is there going to be a sequel to this one???? ;)

Reviewer: RaseyafromRavenclaw
Date: 01/15/07 16:47
Chapter: Chapter 6: Marrying and Merrying

I loved all parts of this story and your previous stories. One of my favorite ships is Hermione and Severus and I have been searching for a terrific one. I finally found it here. Thank you for writing it. You did a fantastic job.

Reviewer: Slytherin_Bad_Girl
Date: 01/14/07 12:51
Chapter: Chapter 6: Marrying and Merrying

I love all your storys. Please continue writing.

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