Reviews For Paying the Price
Reviewer: alia17
Date: 05/15/06 9:27
Chapter: The Letter

*sigh* i love a good ginny/draco story. they are soooooo wonderful together. very good chapter.

Author's Response: Oh, definitely. I've always enjoyed reading Draco/Ginny, and writing it is so fun. I especially love to write when they're arguing - both have a strong will and pride that makes it easy. I'm glad you liked the chapter, thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: lovebug9
Date: 05/14/06 14:39
Chapter: The Letter

yes! great chapter. I was just sitting down to eat and check my e-mail when I saw the update and tried to read and eat. let me say wonderful descriptions of their detention... I had to stop eating. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Haha... well, I take that as a compliment that my descriptions were good enough to make you stop eating! Thank you!

Reviewer: alia17
Date: 05/10/06 12:00
Chapter: Bittersweet

I really really liked this chapter. I feel so sorry for Draco. Very good.

Author's Response: :D I'm glad you liked it! I feel bad for Draco too, this is no easy task... Thanks again for reviewing.

Reviewer: alia17
Date: 05/09/06 16:09
Chapter: Wounds That Never Heal

I really like how their interactions are real to their characters. It'll be interesting to see how this progresses.

Author's Response: I'm happy you think so! Thank you for the review..

Reviewer: silverstorm
Date: 05/07/06 2:09
Chapter: In the Dungeons

this is a really good story.... Keep up the good work and update soon!

Author's Response: :D Thank you very much, glad you like it so much!

Reviewer: Firebreather
Date: 05/06/06 18:37
Chapter: In the Dungeons

I like your story quite a bit, please write more chapters quickly!

Author's Response: Thanks! I actually have quite a few chapters written, it's just a matter of getting them approved. I try to do it asap, though.

Reviewer: VioletMarauder82
Date: 05/06/06 11:43
Chapter: In the Dungeons

Good chapter but a bit boring. PLEASE submit chapters 8 & 9. Please! I'm dying! Throw me a frickin bone here! Bye.

Author's Response: I know, it wasn't extremely eventful, but don't forget that these things don't just happen overnight! Draco may have changed and Ginny might have noticed something different about him, but they have a long history of hate and for the past seven years, six of which Ginny has gone to Hogwarts, she has known him as the enemy and seen proof of his selfishness and cruelty. It will take a little bit of time for them to come around but I promise, I have not forgotten that this is a romance, and I will be "throwing you a bone" with later chapters. Remember, this is only the second detention. A lot more can happen in the remaining 12 days, just be patient! I'll update Chapter 8 soon and hopefully you'll still find this worth reading. With all that said, I do appreciate your review, and I like that you've given me your honest opinion. Thank you for taking the time to leave it. Hope you enjoy the rest! :)

Reviewer: VioletMarauder82
Date: 05/06/06 11:33
Chapter: Wounds That Never Heal

Action needs to happen! Bye.

Author's Response: All in due time...

Reviewer: Valerie McHaley
Date: 04/21/06 15:37
Chapter: The Long Road Ahead

I really like the characters, and your style of writing. I can't wait to read the rest of it.

Author's Response: :) Muchos gracias. I'll be posting the next chapter soon

Reviewer: lilyevans91
Date: 04/21/06 9:26
Chapter: What Ginny Learned

wow, this is really good! very interesting, well-written, and the characters are quite believable, not all weird and ooc. great job, i can't wait to read the next chapter!

Author's Response: Good, I'm happy you think so. It's hard to make a story sound realistic. I appreciate your review and that you took the time to write one!

Reviewer: JayLynn
Date: 04/18/06 18:09
Chapter: What Ginny Learned

Wow Simply Wow

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing again!! Keep an eye out for my next chapter... I'll give it a few days and then submit it. Hope you enjoy it

Reviewer: JayLynn
Date: 04/18/06 17:35
Chapter: Prologue

Wow, seeing as that was just the prologue I am Very impressed. Your so descriptive as im reading im picturing everything in my head clear as a bell. Good start im prompted to read more!

Author's Response: :) Yay. It's nice to hear that! I can never be sure if I've put enough description in there... I'm glad you liked it and hope you read more!

Reviewer: GwenSlytherin
Date: 04/02/06 18:06
Chapter: Prologue

Yours is one of the better stories I've read on this site...I really enjoy reading it and, well, I just absolutely love it. I sincerely hope you'll write more, and soon!

Author's Response: Mm yay review #3! I am very happy you like this so far. I've written a lot more, and it's just a matter of updating it regularly and of course waiting for each chapter to get validated... I hope you enjoy the rest of the chapters just as much and I would love to hear your input (good and bad!). Thanks for taking the time to leave a review :)

Reviewer: alia17
Date: 02/24/06 12:55
Chapter: The Long Road Ahead

I am really enjoying this story and where it is going! i hope that you write more soon.

Author's Response: Good! I'm so glad you're liking it! I've submitted my next chapter, and it's been about a week, so hopefully it will be updated soon. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Siriuslylupin
Date: 02/03/06 18:23
Chapter: Prologue

Mehe... I like Voldemort's lines, they're funny in a sick, twisted kind of way... I'm a little confused though... Why do the Weasleys accept Snape even though he *SPOILERWARNINGSPOILER* killed Dumbledore?

Author's Response: (: Yay. First reviews are always good. I'm so glad you liked it. And Voldemort's lines, lol. Anyway, I know that part seems weird, but I just didn't explain that part in the Prologue. I will in the next chapter, though. Hopefully it will all make sense then. Thanks again for the review and great rating!

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