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Reviewer: kricee
Date: 06/20/06 1:02
Chapter: Love Unfolds

I love your story so far Miranda! It is so awesome! So cute! And it reminds me of you! hehe, I can really see your personality in the whole story (yea it may sound weird, but its true!).

Author's Response: hey! I know you! I know where you live too! because it's where I live too. lol thanks, krystal. you're the greatest. *huggles*

Reviewer: kricee
Date: 06/20/06 1:00
Chapter: "Come to your senses"

"My gosh… can anything else go wrong today?” Ron shouted to the sky." .... I LOVE IT!!!!!!

Reviewer: vv_the_author857
Date: 06/18/06 22:56
Chapter: Love Unfolds

is this the end? PLEASE dont say this is the end!! This is an awesome story, and i never want it to end!!!!!!!

Author's Response: I will be updating very very soon! I promise

Reviewer: obsessedwithron
Date: 04/16/06 21:54
Chapter: Love Unfolds

I love this story, but I kinda wish that it had a teeny weeny bit more fluff..

Reviewer: awb
Date: 05/16/05 4:29
Chapter: Love Unfolds

Ok, I agree that the Epilogue should ship H/G!! Otherwise, a good start! I think Harry was a bit too profound...he doesn't quite seem to get emotions that well in the a little more cluelessness from him might help his characterization. Other than that, the conversations could be a bit slower...a lot was happening really quickly. But I like it a lot, and certainly enjoyed it and can't wait to see you keep writing!

Reviewer: migz_100_percent_fan
Date: 04/18/05 23:16
Chapter: Love Unfolds

hey its really nice story .......pls review mine laso ...tell d truth if its nice cuaze im only a begginner......thnx!!

Reviewer: GinnySposhSpice
Date: 01/17/05 18:03
Chapter: Love Unfolds

for being your first story it was good, only five chapters. You're the only writter that without anything of sex, violence or something like that, have a good story of young love. perfect. You hit the target m'em My best wishes for your next story, and I hope you write another from Ron and Hermione. It is good as it is

Reviewer: Harrietta potter
Date: 01/12/05 20:59
Chapter: Love Unfolds

I liked it.....I'm sorry I have to say it, WHERE'S THE H/G ACTION.... I'm sorry, avid Harry+Ginny shipper couldn't help myself.... any hoo, That was a great story please write more like it!

Reviewer: HPF
Date: 01/11/05 16:38
Chapter: "Come to your senses"


Reviewer: WhichGuyNow
Date: 01/09/05 12:57
Chapter: "Come to your senses"

WHAT?!?!?!?!?!?! You have to update soon before I die fromthe suspense! smoches ~bri

Reviewer: whispercat12
Date: 01/09/05 0:44
Chapter: Questioning Your Feelings

Why does the thing say completed???

Reviewer: whispercat12
Date: 01/09/05 0:43
Chapter: "Come to your senses"

What was that??? Please update soon don't keep me waiting with a cliffy like that!!!

Reviewer: Harrietta potter
Date: 01/08/05 21:37
Chapter: "Come to your senses"

Update soon please! p.s. was that a cliffhanger or a joke???

Reviewer: polka spots
Date: 01/08/05 6:52
Chapter: "Come to your senses"

Heya, well... that was crazy! I hope you decide to write more... I cant wait to see what some Ron/Hermione snogging is going to be like in this fic! Hehe :)

Reviewer: Padfootstars
Date: 12/22/04 0:49
Chapter: Lots Of Talking

Another cliffhanger? I'm telling you, I'd like to know how this story ends. Its really good anyway 10/10

Author's Response: Sorry. The people here who view the stories to accept it, are retarded. They haven't accepted my last few chapters, over stupid stuff, that wasn't even true. They said I needed ending punctuating, etc., when I had all that in my story. I'm ticked off! Thx for reading.

Reviewer: FantasyFanatic
Date: 12/13/04 14:33
Chapter: Lots Of Talking

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! A CLIFFHANGER!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: I will tonight if possible. Thx for reading!

Reviewer: Hermioneclone12
Date: 12/11/04 21:09
Chapter: Lots Of Talking

not another cliffhanger! NOOOOO!

Author's Response: LOL. Have no fear. Thx for reading!

Reviewer: nat223
Date: 12/10/04 16:53
Chapter: Lots Of Talking

its very good but i thought i they were going to kiss! =)

Author's Response: Hehe. Maybe... maybe not. We'll see. Thx for reading!

Reviewer: Hermioneclone12
Date: 12/08/04 20:51
Chapter: An Interesting Walk

I hate cliffhangers! Keep writing, I need to know what happens/happened! Can you say, "favorite's list?" RATING: 10

Author's Response: Oh... my... goodness. You just made my day. I am literally going to start crying right now. Thank you so much!! You have no idea how much your comment means to me. Thank you so much for reading!

Reviewer: CaE
Date: 12/08/04 19:12
Chapter: An Interesting Walk

That was really good, no... wait , GREAT!!! You really got the readers into it (me at least!) Keep up the good work, I'll be looking forward to it!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really do appreciate your honesty, because I do enjoy writing, and I would like to become a writer someday. Thx for reading!

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