I love your story so far Miranda! It is so awesome! So cute! And it reminds me of you! hehe, I can really see your personality in the whole story (yea it may sound weird, but its true!).
Author's Response: hey! I know you! I know where you live too! because it's where I live too. lol thanks, krystal. you're the greatest. *huggles*
"My gosh… can anything else go wrong today?” Ron shouted to the sky." .... I LOVE IT!!!!!!
is this the end? PLEASE dont say this is the end!! This is an awesome story, and i never want it to end!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I will be updating very very soon! I promise
I love this story, but I kinda wish that it had a teeny weeny bit more fluff..
Ok, I agree that the Epilogue should ship H/G!! Otherwise, a good start! I think Harry was a bit too profound...he doesn't quite seem to get emotions that well in the books...so a little more cluelessness from him might help his characterization. Other than that, the conversations could be a bit slower...a lot was happening really quickly. But I like it a lot, and certainly enjoyed it and can't wait to see you keep writing!
hey its really nice story .......pls review mine laso ...tell d truth if its nice cuaze im only a begginner......thnx!!
for being your first story it was good, only five chapters. You're the only writter that without anything of sex, violence or something like that, have a good story of young love. perfect. You hit the target m'em My best wishes for your next story, and I hope you write another from Ron and Hermione. It is good as it is
I liked it.....I'm sorry I have to say it, WHERE'S THE H/G ACTION.... I'm sorry, avid Harry+Ginny shipper couldn't help myself.... any hoo, That was a great story please write more like it!
WHAT?!?!?!?!?!?! You have to update soon before I die fromthe suspense! smoches ~bri
Why does the thing say completed???
What was that??? Please update soon don't keep me waiting with a cliffy like that!!!
Update soon please! p.s. was that a cliffhanger or a joke???
Heya, well... that was crazy! I hope you decide to write more... I cant wait to see what some Ron/Hermione snogging is going to be like in this fic! Hehe :)
Another cliffhanger? I'm telling you, I'd like to know how this story ends. Its really good anyway 10/10
Author's Response: Sorry. The people here who view the stories to accept it, are retarded. They haven't accepted my last few chapters, over stupid stuff, that wasn't even true. They said I needed ending punctuating, etc., when I had all that in my story. I'm ticked off! Thx for reading.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! A CLIFFHANGER!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I will tonight if possible. Thx for reading!
not another cliffhanger! NOOOOO!
Author's Response: LOL. Have no fear. Thx for reading!
its very good but i thought i they were going to kiss! =)
Author's Response: Hehe. Maybe... maybe not. We'll see. Thx for reading!
I hate cliffhangers! Keep writing, I need to know what happens/happened! Can you say, "favorite's list?" RATING: 10
Author's Response: Oh... my... goodness. You just made my day. I am literally going to start crying right now. Thank you so much!! You have no idea how much your comment means to me. Thank you so much for reading!
That was really good, no... wait , GREAT!!! You really got the readers into it (me at least!) Keep up the good work, I'll be looking forward to it!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really do appreciate your honesty, because I do enjoy writing, and I would like to become a writer someday. Thx for reading!