Great first chapter. You deffinately have a structure that makes me want to continue reading your work. Please return your reviews. I know it will make at least me want to review your story. If you reply then i know you're reading what we write to you. cheers

Author's Response: I am, like everyday anyways, the second chappy is in queue, so all is well my dears!

I really like this chapter =D cant waity for the next one, good work

Author's Response: Tahnk you!And nice use of smiley! ;)

Cute. All I can say is that I hope this isn't a one-shot deal. I'd like to see where you take this story.

Very good story. The intensity wasfast paced, the emotion was there. The dialogue was believable. You could have embellished the first part, the seperation part to make the scene where they do come together a little more intense. The length was a nice length, could have been a little longer, but a nice, read in one sitting length. I really look forward to your next chapter. I like them at hogwarts!

Author's Response: Thank you! I thought I responded to thisearlier but, I guess not, ust have been the other one. Anyways, Thank you so much! This is my first fanfic... that has been excepted anyways. And it's my baby! Oh, and could you or sum1 else tell me what the abbreviations for the warnings mean?