Reviews For A Whole New Light
Reviewer: liss8493
Date: 12/15/07 3:40
Chapter: Planning

I love the story it is amazing! when is it gonna be updated? Thanks x

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 12/14/07 15:46
Chapter: Planning

Oh no! I'm so upset, this was the last chapter available. Hope the next one's up soon, I love marauder fics. Keep writing.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 12/14/07 15:29
Chapter: The Halloween Ball

I've been not reviewing since the start because I didn't want to stop reading. However, this last chapter had me laughing so hard I had to drop you a congratulatory note (is that a word?) Anyway, This was hilarious! And I've loved the rest of the fic too, long may it continue.

Reviewer: oceanianow
Date: 01/21/07 14:08
Chapter: Planning

I love your story! I can't wait for you to post the next chapter. Oh, how many chapters do you think are left? Anyway, it's great!

Reviewer: Lederhosen
Date: 08/02/06 19:03
Chapter: Planning

Great story. :D

Reviewer: kumydabookworm
Date: 06/21/06 22:09
Chapter: Bright and Daring

That was funny. :) I had a slight issue with the believability of the prank, though. That glass isn't glass - which means it's probably very complex magic. Destruction is easier than creation, so the Marauders could destroy it...they're smart.

But even Dumbledore couldn't just conjure a ceiling like that in a minute out of thin air. I think it would take the cooperation of several professors over a few weeks to fix the ceiling.

That would be more realistic, and I think it would make the Marauders happier - their prank would be even better!

Again, you do a really nice job with characterization of the Marauders and even McGonagall.

I like your use of subtle humor vs. the exaggerated slapstick humor many authors (including me!) use.

Great work. :D


Reviewer: berryfaerie
Date: 04/07/06 14:04
Chapter: Planning

Ahhhhhh! I love this story! It is sooo sweet. I think that you're doing a great job. May you never be cursed with writer's block!

Author's Response: woow thanx!! ive been really busy lately but i hope the next chapter will be done soon...

Reviewer: HP fanatic1
Date: 03/25/06 13:18
Chapter: Bright and Daring

Cool! Luv it! 8¬)

Author's Response: thanx :)

Reviewer: HP fanatic1
Date: 03/24/06 17:22
Chapter: Planning

When is the next chapter out? Or should I look for a sequel? Or is this the end of the story I hope not :'( ? I NEED answers!!! Please? ;-D By the way, brilliant story!

Author's Response: this is definitely not the end of the story... i have too much fun writing it to end it right now... i'm currently working on the next chapter but i've been having some technical difficulties so it may take a bit longer to get up... it should be up sometime next week though....hopefully

Reviewer: gbutlergirl
Date: 03/22/06 18:39
Chapter: Planning

Very good chapter! I've been trying to make time to read and review it ever since it came out and I'm so glad I finally had a minute to do so. It was really nicely done and very cute. I hope we find out what Lily and Jenny were doing in the Room of Requirement. That'd be cool. But I'm really looking foward to the party! You come up with some really good (in character) pranks and party themes. Loving it! Update soon!

Author's Response: thanx for the review... i know what you mean about being really busy... i can't seem to find a minute to do anything anymore... everything seems to be happening at once... but i'm glad you finally got a chance to read it... it might take a while for me to update but when i do i hope that the party is as good as the others and your hopes... thanx again for the review!!

Reviewer: fireflower
Date: 03/19/06 6:34
Chapter: Planning

Once again mate, awesome chapter!!! I really can't wait to see what Lily and Jenny were up to, lol, its funny whenever Remus blushes!! I really enjoyed this chapter...and you always manage to give us a teaser-like ending! :-) Its great!! Can't wait for you to update! 100000000000000000000/10 (Its the size of a hubcap, its black with flashing silver stars!! How cool is that!?!?!?!?)

Author's Response: whoa hubcap?? black with flashing silver stars?? thats AWESOME!!! thanx!!! and thanx for being one of my loyal reviewers...

Reviewer: HP fanatic1
Date: 03/18/06 22:16
Chapter: Planning

So far, so good, (and when I mean good, I MEAN good!) this is 1 of the best fanfic I've ever read (and I've read some good ones!) when is the next chapter coming out? I like this story, not only because of the hard work and imagination that is behind it, but some of the fanfic I've read is that soppy, too-many-details junk that some people write, this is a good, clean story and I felt a slight shiver of exitement every time I pressed the next-chapter button. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: wow thanx!! i never thought my fanfic would be one to give slight shivers of excitement!! yaaaay!!! thanx for the reviewing and hope you enjoy the rest of the story..

Reviewer: fireflower
Date: 03/10/06 11:33
Chapter: The Halloween Ball

hi m8, i was just wondering, is the queue really blocked up cos u aint updated for a while and my story is taking agessss to get checked too! Its killing me.....ahhh!! (hand grabs her throat and drags her off chair) .....can't....cough,!!!!!!!!!!! (voice fades and dies) WICKED STORY!!!! 10000000000000000000000/10 (and it hadsnt got silver stripes this is silver but it has flashing purple spots!!!! how mega is that!?!?!?!?!?)

Author's Response: lool flashing purple spots?? awesome!!! i think the queue is pretty full right now but i'm sure everything will be checked soon... i hope.... can't wait to read ur update.... hope the queue clears up real soon!!

Reviewer: Her My Own EE
Date: 03/10/06 4:03
Chapter: The Halloween Ball

Sirius & Jenny are so cute! I loved this whole chapter. It's cute that Sirius was jealous. I was great that he wasn't an ass about it. The scene with the two McGonagalls was one of the funniest I've read. My favorite line was from Remus when he complimented Dumbledore on his socks. **“Thank you, just a little thing I found lying around. But I must compliment you on your wonderful socks. They remind me of a pair I had wanted last Christmas. But alas, no one has ever felt the need to give me socks for Christmas.”

Author's Response: thanx!! i actually had a lot of fun writing this chapter so i'm really glad people seemed to have liked it... i'm working on the next chapter right now but i'm not sure when i'll be able to update...about the quote i thought it would be something that Dumbledore might say because of whhat he was saying at the Yule Ball in GoF... thanx for the review again i really appreciate it!!

Reviewer: loligo8me
Date: 03/08/06 4:33
Chapter: Infuriating, Immature Git

such a good chapter! A delightful read :)

Author's Response: thanx i'm glad u enjoyed it and i really appreciate u taking the time and reviewing!!

Reviewer: gbutlergirl
Date: 02/28/06 16:45
Chapter: The Halloween Ball

Yeah, it does. Def better than the earlier chapters! I like it more with every chapter and I check for updates every day!

Author's Response: aaaaw thanx sooo much

Reviewer: fireflower
Date: 02/28/06 13:00
Chapter: The Halloween Ball

(flalls of the chair laughing and buries her head in a box of tissues) That was sooo funny and sooo cute! I loved all that between the 'Professors'!! It was hilarious! Jenny and Sirius.....this is getting seriously romantic. I love it! And all that stuff about his star, it was great! Keep writing m8! This fic is AWESOME!!
100000000000000000000000000000000000000/10 (AND ITS SHINY, GOLD AND HAS SILVER STRIPES!!! ;-)

Author's Response: lool my ratings getting better and i have silver stripes too? cool... im glad u liked the chapter... thanx for always reviewing

Reviewer: gbutlergirl
Date: 02/27/06 10:59
Chapter: The Halloween Ball

Aaaw. I sense some deeply serious moments in the near future. I'm glad to see this story going into more depth. At least, I think it will. But, as for this chapter, I loved it! It was really funny and cute! I especially loved the whole thing about Jenny dating her professor. Great job! One of my favorite chapters so far! 10

Author's Response: thanx!! i hope since this is one of ur favorite chapters that means my writing is improving!!

Reviewer: potteronpotluvhim
Date: 02/26/06 20:49
Chapter: The Halloween Ball

this chp was FUNNY i was literally laughying out loud when i read this which is not something ioften do during a fan fic really giood chp can't wait for the next 1 -RiTa

Author's Response: wow thanx!! i luv to hear that people are actually enjoying my story!! the next one should be up soon i hope i don't disappoint!!

Reviewer: potteronpotluvhim
Date: 02/25/06 23:03
Chapter: Jealousy

really goos chp i cant wait to see wat happens at the ball

Author's Response: thanx!! the next chapter is finally in the queue so hopefully it will be up pretty soon!!

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