Reviewer: Blair the Adorable
Date: 01/23/08 12:23
Chapter: World on Fire

Um...you really rushed this...and you didn't really put much work into it either. Try making your paragraphs shorter, remmeber 3-5 sentences, 5-7 sentences, or 7-10.

Reviewer: NeLLyRaE
Date: 07/23/07 19:24
Chapter: Freaking Idiot!

that was really really good! i LOVE this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love how lily is totally screwed up and the flashback are really good too! please update!!!

Reviewer: HPdiva
Date: 05/26/06 19:51
Chapter: Freaking Idiot!

Oh My God! I absolutly love your story its brilliant!!! I love the flashbacks and the emotions! I also love how Remus and Lily met...You are a terrific writer so please keep writing this fic and update so. Like I said please, please update.

p.s. are you going to add in a flashback about what happened to Lily's parents?

Reviewer: FanFicFanatic12
Date: 05/14/06 14:39
Chapter: Freaking Idiot!

Any chance you'll udate soon??? I'm sorry I'm being so impatient. You're story is just that good!

Reviewer: FanFicFanatic12
Date: 05/14/06 14:38
Chapter: Freaking Idiot!

PLEASE UPDATE--I'M BEGGING YOU!!!!

Reviewer: FanFicFanatic12
Date: 05/06/06 18:49
Chapter: Freaking Idiot!

Excellent! I like angry James--he is well portrayed. I also like that you don't make excuses for the young James' crudeness.

10/10. More please. I'll result to begging if necessary.

Reviewer: hogwarts_love
Date: 03/25/06 13:16
Chapter: Freaking Idiot!

ur story pretty good, but yeah, it is kinda confusing. and it seems sometiems liek theres no flow. but it seems pretty interesting, just, i feel some major OOC-ness here. and, even though i say it all the time, the wtf thing didnt seem to idk, fit, cuz u kno, theres like no im in the wizarding world, but overall good story!! and that lake thign was adorable. i would LOVE for that to happen to me. <33

Author's Response: thanx!

Reviewer: fantasygirl7
Date: 03/01/06 22:03
Chapter: Freaking Idiot!

Noot bad. It's definately different from the usual falling in love at school. Love to hear how it ends

Author's Response: They did fall in love at skool!! You'll see through more flashbacks...they broke up because of something very unfortunate....you'll see! I'm gong to update soon..its been like a yr i know but im back into writing and hopefully the site will stop givin me so many problems!!

Reviewer: heartachin4harry
Date: 12/23/05 11:35
Chapter: Freaking Idiot!

I really like it! Lily! How could she do that to herself?! And what the hell happened to her parents? Poor James. I wan tto know what happend to make everything go bad. Sirius has a plan?! Amazing. Please update soon! I don't think I can take it!

Reviewer: grape_2010
Date: 11/23/05 0:07
Chapter: Freaking Idiot!

wonderful! are you giong to update anytime soon?! i would really like to know what sirius' plan is!

Reviewer: harry_potter_star
Date: 11/05/05 8:17
Chapter: FRIENDSHIP

cool story so far, only try to avoid americanisms, like y'all and hell yeah, and stuff like that, because remember, this is in britain around 24 or so years ago, so they would have talked a little differently.

Reviewer: grape_2010
Date: 11/03/05 20:13
Chapter: World on Fire

different...you're right it's not very easy to understand yet. like what happened with lily's parents? or what was james so depressed about? or why did they split before school ended? or, most importantly, what going on NOW?! please update soon!

Reviewer: harrypotterprincess
Date: 10/19/05 11:46
Chapter: World on Fire

OMGOSH plz plz plz plz plz UPDATE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Im WaTiNg!!!!!!

Author's Response: i will i will just cuz u told me to

Reviewer: harrypotterprincess
Date: 09/20/05 18:18
Chapter: World on Fire

please update this is a great story.

Reviewer: Winky the house elf
Date: 07/30/05 16:45
Chapter: Freaking Idiot!

I thought your story was weird. I love the flashbacks but I am kind of lost a little bit so hopefully it will get better in the next chpiter but I can definetly see awesome writing and a great start. Update soon PLZ!!!

Author's Response: thanx i guess lol ...~un beso

Reviewer: xAthenax
Date: 06/16/05 10:02
Chapter: Freaking Idiot!

It's a wonderful story. Update soon. ^^

Reviewer: danfan
Date: 04/23/05 1:58
Chapter: FRIENDSHIP

nice work...it seems like James in first year... but is different from when we've read about him in fifth and seventh years...think about that lol...still reading

Reviewer: danfan
Date: 04/23/05 1:49
Chapter: World on Fire

top stuff there! next chappie here i come...

Reviewer: shiver_liver
Date: 04/21/05 22:00
Chapter: World on Fire

This fan fic is deffinetly one of my favourites. It's so believable!! I'm kind of a loss for words :P (wow, i sound so cheezy) Please update soon!

Author's Response: aww thank you so much!!!!

Reviewer: missblack
Date: 04/20/05 18:30
Chapter: Freaking Idiot!

any chance up an update soon?:Dpleeeeeeasssssse!!

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