Reviewer: Cornish Pixies
Date: 11/29/06 19:40
Chapter: 3 A. M. Confessions

MsBigBad,

I must say that I enjoyed your story, but can I just say a few things that just seemed to be inconsistant, and I might add that they are extremely picky and they might be a little bit petty.

I was extremely impressed with your opening paragraph, it really was drawing!! But throughout the bulk of the story I found that your placment of your characters was inconsistant, or you forgot where they were. For example, at the beginning of the peice you say that Hermione was laying on the table, but then you mention later that Ron is rubbing her back. When did Hermione sit up or move or something? Also are you sure that Harry would really jump to the conclusion that Ron and Hermione are together? I think he would talk alittle bit, or maybe even question them.

Oh, and just one last thing...I would have loved to have heard alittle more about Fleur and Bill's wedding, or maybe even the attraction felt between Ron and Hermione, during the wedding.

Other then those few small details, the peice was very good, and very nice.

Cornish Pixies

Reviewer: LovelyxLena
Date: 10/21/06 21:59
Chapter: 3 A. M. Confessions

Oh yes! A seuqel please!

Reviewer: Ginny Potter 71331
Date: 10/15/06 9:18
Chapter: 3 A. M. Confessions

Ooooh! I'd LOVE a sequel!!!

Reviewer: melmoe
Date: 10/10/06 21:27
Chapter: 3 A. M. Confessions

very nice

Reviewer: DANRADlover
Date: 10/08/06 16:17
Chapter: 3 A. M. Confessions

I think it would be great to do a sequel with Harry and Ginny. That is the best couple!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: hermionelover87
Date: 10/06/06 22:59
Chapter: 3 A. M. Confessions

aww how cute!!!!! i know harry will find that love again and ron and hermione cute!!!!! awww great job above all

Reviewer: DracoLuva4684
Date: 09/30/06 17:19
Chapter: 3 A. M. Confessions

Loved it! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: desertromantic
Date: 09/28/06 23:19
Chapter: 3 A. M. Confessions

I really enjoyed this, as its so possible as a scenario in book 7!! Weel done!!

Reviewer: mintchocolate
Date: 09/20/06 23:11
Chapter: 3 A. M. Confessions

i really enjoyed your story because it seemed plausible. and it was so sweet. nicely done.

Reviewer: mintchocolate
Date: 09/20/06 23:10
Chapter: 3 A. M. Confessions

i really enjoyed your story because it seemed plausible. and it was so sweet. nicely done.

Reviewer: maddysl
Date: 09/14/06 16:30
Chapter: 3 A. M. Confessions

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOERE

Reviewer: Dustfire14
Date: 09/07/06 19:26
Chapter: 3 A. M. Confessions

That's awesome... I really like it. If i had to score it... 1,000,000,000,000

Reviewer: indypops
Date: 08/31/06 13:57
Chapter: 3 A. M. Confessions

good writing.it is the story i feel is true to the JK style. cudos

Reviewer: indypops
Date: 08/31/06 13:56
Chapter: 3 A. M. Confessions

good writing.it is the story i feel is true to the JK style. cudos

Reviewer: trouble12
Date: 08/28/06 14:05
Chapter: 3 A. M. Confessions

AWSOME!!! Yes write another!!!

Reviewer: MidnightzStorm
Date: 08/24/06 0:43
Chapter: 3 A. M. Confessions

This was amazing, especially for your first HP fic.

Reviewer: ShippersUnited
Date: 08/15/06 11:10
Chapter: 3 A. M. Confessions

This was by far the best Ron/Hermoine Fan Fic i've read!! I absolutely loved it and can't wait to hear more from you!

Reviewer: secret_lover
Date: 08/14/06 16:30
Chapter: 3 A. M. Confessions

I loved it! Are you sure that this is your first? it is very good!

Reviewer: MrsLongbottom
Date: 08/11/06 11:40
Chapter: 3 A. M. Confessions

really good.... it was so sweet

Reviewer: hopelives4ever
Date: 08/11/06 11:05
Chapter: 3 A. M. Confessions

Please do the sequel! I love this fanfic please do write more! I survive on your story and future ones.

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