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Name: Cornish Pixies (Signed) · Date: 11/29/06 19:40 · For: 3 A. M. Confessions
MsBigBad,

I must say that I enjoyed your story, but can I just say a few things that just seemed to be inconsistant, and I might add that they are extremely picky and they might be a little bit petty.

I was extremely impressed with your opening paragraph, it really was drawing!! But throughout the bulk of the story I found that your placment of your characters was inconsistant, or you forgot where they were. For example, at the beginning of the peice you say that Hermione was laying on the table, but then you mention later that Ron is rubbing her back. When did Hermione sit up or move or something? Also are you sure that Harry would really jump to the conclusion that Ron and Hermione are together? I think he would talk alittle bit, or maybe even question them.

Oh, and just one last thing...I would have loved to have heard alittle more about Fleur and Bill's wedding, or maybe even the attraction felt between Ron and Hermione, during the wedding.

Other then those few small details, the peice was very good, and very nice.

Cornish Pixies


Name: LovelyxLena (Anonymous) · Date: 10/21/06 21:59 · For: 3 A. M. Confessions
Oh yes! A seuqel please!


Name: Ginny Potter 71331 (Signed) · Date: 10/15/06 9:18 · For: 3 A. M. Confessions
Ooooh! I'd LOVE a sequel!!!


Name: melmoe (Signed) · Date: 10/10/06 21:27 · For: 3 A. M. Confessions
very nice


Name: DANRADlover (Signed) · Date: 10/08/06 16:17 · For: 3 A. M. Confessions
I think it would be great to do a sequel with Harry and Ginny. That is the best couple!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Name: hermionelover87 (Signed) · Date: 10/06/06 22:59 · For: 3 A. M. Confessions
aww how cute!!!!! i know harry will find that love again and ron and hermione cute!!!!! awww great job above all


Name: DracoLuva4684 (Signed) · Date: 09/30/06 17:19 · For: 3 A. M. Confessions
Loved it! Can't wait for the next chapter!


Name: desertromantic (Signed) · Date: 09/28/06 23:19 · For: 3 A. M. Confessions
I really enjoyed this, as its so possible as a scenario in book 7!! Weel done!!


Name: mintchocolate (Signed) · Date: 09/20/06 23:11 · For: 3 A. M. Confessions
i really enjoyed your story because it seemed plausible. and it was so sweet. nicely done.


Name: mintchocolate (Signed) · Date: 09/20/06 23:10 · For: 3 A. M. Confessions
i really enjoyed your story because it seemed plausible. and it was so sweet. nicely done.


Name: maddysl (Anonymous) · Date: 09/14/06 16:30 · For: 3 A. M. Confessions
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOERE


Name: Dustfire14 (Signed) · Date: 09/07/06 19:26 · For: 3 A. M. Confessions
That's awesome... I really like it. If i had to score it... 1,000,000,000,000


Name: indypops (Signed) · Date: 08/31/06 13:57 · For: 3 A. M. Confessions
good writing.it is the story i feel is true to the JK style. cudos


Name: indypops (Signed) · Date: 08/31/06 13:56 · For: 3 A. M. Confessions
good writing.it is the story i feel is true to the JK style. cudos


Name: trouble12 (Signed) · Date: 08/28/06 14:05 · For: 3 A. M. Confessions
AWSOME!!! Yes write another!!!


Name: MidnightzStorm (Signed) · Date: 08/24/06 0:43 · For: 3 A. M. Confessions
This was amazing, especially for your first HP fic.


Name: ShippersUnited (Signed) · Date: 08/15/06 11:10 · For: 3 A. M. Confessions
This was by far the best Ron/Hermoine Fan Fic i've read!! I absolutely loved it and can't wait to hear more from you!


Name: secret_lover (Signed) · Date: 08/14/06 16:30 · For: 3 A. M. Confessions
I loved it! Are you sure that this is your first? it is very good!


Name: MrsLongbottom (Signed) · Date: 08/11/06 11:40 · For: 3 A. M. Confessions
really good.... it was so sweet


Name: hopelives4ever (Signed) · Date: 08/11/06 11:05 · For: 3 A. M. Confessions
Please do the sequel! I love this fanfic please do write more! I survive on your story and future ones.


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